Multi Author Fan Fiction - Anokhi chp 2 pg4 20/04 - Page 4

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Posted: 5 years ago
#31

Awesome . The story is going great. The conversation of Aunti with Shaurya and anokhi was funny.

Update next chapter soon.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#32

That was fun specially the old part

Loved it , pls continue

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Posted: 5 years ago
#33

How my god im still laughing and my stomach aches. 🤣🤣🤣 Shaurya is old ..

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Posted: 5 years ago
#34

Omg...this is so funny...nice turn of events...didnt expect it🤣👍🌹

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Posted: 5 years ago
#35

Part 1

Shaurya's thinking is rotten. His believes regarding girls are 😡. But I absolutely loved this calm Anokhi. Instead of fighting she actually saw what is hidden beneath the mask of Shaurya. A very different reply but absolutely perfect.

Loved this awesome part.

Part 2

Its hilarious🤣🤣

Performance pressure and height matter. 😂😂Shaurya is so touchy about his height.🤣 So now Anokhi going to have room in hostel.

Eagerly Waiting for next part. Update soon.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Champa2012

Oh my god, I had so much fun reading the "old" part. Nicely done. And thank you for taking up and spinning it to move her residence to hostel.

Great work!!


Thank you so much.

You know I wanted to carry on the serious tone from the previous chapter but then I saw Tom and Jerry and the rest is history 😂

And of course Anokhi has to reach hostel. How will Shaurya sneak in then 😈

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Posted: 5 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: gurl-enchanted

We should do this multi author thing more often. Looks like good fun 😆 The banter in the car was adorable. Shaurya’s sarcasm is absolutely on point 👌 Good stuff, Niki 👏


I agree. I had so much fun. Seriously.

This way we won't even hit Writer's Block because we will inspire one another.

I like sarcastic Shaurya. He is relatable then 😌😌

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Posted: 5 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Shivikafan2

It's so 😆😆funny

Enjoyed reading it🥰🥰🥰🥰

Eagerly waiting for the next part😃😃😃


Thank you so much ❤️

Glad you liked it.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#39

Hilarious. I loved this chapter. I liked their conversation in car as well about Anokhi's dream. I really hope we get something along the line in the show.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#40

Wow,so much fun..

Let the story go like this,its nice and sarcastic.

Amazing job 👌👍

Update soon..

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