Awesome OS
Loved it dear
So sai was pregnant , I really felt bad for them what they have to go through
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Awesome OS
Loved it dear
So sai was pregnant , I really felt bad for them what they have to go through
Very good. do continue
Omg such a a heartwarming story. Sai could totally Do this!
I liked the dialogues and the story placement. Great work š
didnāt expect this heavy story from the person who posts funny gifs. You are an all rounder š
I loved writing the bhagodi Sai. š
Glad you liked the dialogues because I love writing what hurts. š¤£
Haha thank you. š³ Yes I have a serious, sadist, evil side too. š And romantic too. āŗļø
Soo...heart-touching.....ā„.... loved it....
He broke Sai to extreme and now both are suffering.....both are in pain...
Virat's question is valid regarding their child...he deserves to know....
Please write next part to it.... how virat will win Sai back and how she will continue her studies etc.,
If you are OK the also write about chavan's reform and regret their behaviour......
Keep writing more....
loved it muguet. sai standing on her own feet and being strong for herself and her baby was the highlight of the os to me. i felt bad that virat came to know about his child like this. i want to see him work towards her forgiveness. please continue soonā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø
Wow writer!! It is just amazing..ššš
U know what I guessed that she must be pregnant when Usha maushi told her to wait for 3 months to start her journey towards her dream... And yeah it was right!! So beautifully u have penned it...Mast ha mast!!!
It was one of the most awesome OS I have gone through!!!
And as we know u make them more interesting with ur twists!!! Looking forward to get more from u...And ha please update ur FF also!!
Originally posted by: Wildreaper
Beautiful ā¤ļø Loved it ā£ļø
Thank you. ā¤ļø
Originally posted by: Saichintalli
So beautiful.... Sai is pregnant, their desperation for each other is very well written... I really hope Isa koi track ho. Thaki Hume bhi chavan niwas , Kaku gang mainly Didi see chutti mele
When I got the idea I didn't think about the pregnancy but thought it would be nice to give a twist at the very last of the OS. š
I would love to see a track where both are away from CV for some days. š Even if it's for 2 days. š
A very heart touching OS. Loved it. But, the ending was sad.
Originally posted by: MuguetDScorpion
When I got the idea I didn't think about the pregnancy but thought it would be nice to give a twist at the very last of the OS. š
I would love to see a track where both are away from CV for some days. š Even if it's for 2 days. š
Yes, I hope so too. I think both deserve a couple of days without the presence of the Chakrams.