Rakshak - PurVir SS |part 3 updated on page 7| - Page 7

Originally posted by: sargamif

Abey tune kitne logo se suggestions liye h

3 logo se 🤣

Supriya edit your topic and add page number also.

Done 😉

Take your time di 😁😊

Originally posted by: Piyaazzz

Now this is some damn writing or theme Ka achha use Kiya tumne "rakshak" 👏

Shukriyaa ❤️❤️❤️

Ab Prakashi Ka Prakash bujhne waLa he 😈waiting for that to happen aaaaannnnddd tumhari mystery badti Ka rhi he bas Sakshi ko mat le aana khandar me se tata thaiya Karne k liye 🤣

Ye sakshi bhot confusion create kar rhi hai 🤣

Ek to Vir ka Sakshi jaap nhi khatam hota 🤦🏻‍♀️

Is chudail ko mara hua hi rehne do.. atmao ko nhi lana mujhe apne SS 🤣

Originally posted by: Ziva01

Supriya finally i read ur story ....it's really beautiful ❤️❤️❤️and the suspense quotient is amazing 👏👏👏

Many many thankss ☺️

I read all parts at one go 😃...felt bad for Pur 😒...she is so tortured and the kids as well😭..Anjali and Prakashi are so evil😡🤢

Looking forward to the next part hw u ll unfold the mystery 😎

Mujhe khud bhi ye janna hai 🤣

As per piyaa, prakashi ka prakash is to end soon 🤣

Next part would come soon... ❤️

[Bcz climax ka abhi mujhe khud koi idea nhi hai😂 wo to jab likhne baitho to hi aate hai]

Originally posted by: Sxshh

Ye sakshi bhot confusion create kar rhi hai 🤣

Ek to Vir ka Sakshi jaap nhi khatam hota 🤦🏻‍♀️

Is chudail ko mara hua hi rehne do.. atmao ko nhi lana mujhe apne SS 🤣

Aatmao ko Sargam Di ne copyright notice bheja he sirf unke FF me aayenge vo abse 🤣🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: Piyaazzz

Acha he tum aatmao ko nhi la rhi ho 🤣

Layge to zinda insaan na ki uska bhoot 🤣

Aatmao ko Sargam Di ne copyright notice bheja he sirf unke FF me aayenge vo abse 🤣🤣🤣🤣

Sargam di ne bhooto ko us cottage me aashraya di hai ...they cnt break the bond 🤣

Originally posted by: Sxshh

[Bcz climax ka abhi mujhe khud koi idea nhi hai😂 wo to jab likhne baitho to hi aate hai]

Me soch to leti hu pehle (likhne me bahut mathapachhi Hoti he 🙄) par jab likhne bethti Hu to Kuch or hi ho jaata he 🤣

Sochti Kuch nhi bas gaane sunte sunte dimag me Tom Jaisi batti jalti he 🤣🤣🤣🤣😌😌😌😌

Originally posted by: Sxshh

Sargam di ne bhooto ko us cottage me aashraya di hai ...they cnt break the bond 🤣

Dil Ka rishta he Dil se sanam ab yeh pyar na hoga Kam 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: Sxshh

Sargam di ne bhooto ko us cottage me aashraya di hai ...they cnt break the bond 🤣

Abey mere peeche meri aatmao k tum log mazak bana rahe ho..Ek chod di na peeche to nachte phiroge idhar udhar🤣👿👻👻

Ohooo Supriya..kya baat hai. This part was damn good yrr👏❤️

Mtlb seriously kya likha hai.

PurVir scenes were soo on point.❤️ Vir's dilemma so apt & well described. 🔥

Although last paragraph padh ke lag raha hai ki next part mei kuch bhayanak raaz khulenge aur viru ka dil bhi tootega😔 but still I'm excited to read the coming parts.

Your story has kept me hooked to it & I'm eagerly waiting for more.😛😂

Great job. Kudos!🤗👏

Originally posted by: Piyaazzz

tumhare Saath bhi aisa hota he 😆🤩

Again same pinch 😆

Me soch to leti hu pehle (likhne me bahut mathapachhi Hoti he 🙄) par jab likhne bethti Hu to Kuch or hi ho jaata he 🤣

Sochti Kuch nhi bas gaane sunte sunte dimag me Tom Jaisi batti jalti he 🤣🤣🤣🤣😌😌😌😌

Tom ki to baat hi alag hai😉 gaane sunti ho ki mentos khati ho ?? (Dimaag ki batti jali) 🤣🤣

End to rehta hai dimag me ki ye hona hai par kaise hona hai ye bhot fluctuate krta 🤣

Likhne se pehle kuch aur sochte hai.. aur jab likho to result kuch aur hi hota hai 🤣