Shakhi // GOODNIGHT MOON // - Page 2

This was written so beautifully👏

I so want to see something like this in the show too.

Waiting for the next chapter😊

This was breathtakingly beautiful 🤗 As someone who lost her father at a very young age I can totally relate to this. You miss your dad in these small moments that make these memories all the more special! I hope they can portray something so beautiful in the show. It was absolutely amazing! Thank you! Lots of love ❤️

Weird because I read this y'day & just in case you've updated, was checking & I've not commented 🤓

This was such a nice start, could understand Anokhi's pain, yearning for her parents, especially father's love & acceptance for her achievements & how wonderful a daughter she is. It was sweet seeing that Shaurya could notice her change in expressions ❤️ Would like to know how he uplifts her mood..

Continue asap..

Wow just wow...you write so well...i can literally feel her pain & love the way Shaurya is so attuned to her feelings...lovely just lovely💖🌹

So beautiful ❤️✨

I wanna know what happens next

CHAPTER 2

Anokhi was staring blankly at her wall. The reality of everything around her had just now crashed on her. She’s left her house. Her father hates her, loathes her. He’s never going to accept her. He’s never going to love her.

Shaurya reached her hostel room and saw that it was cracked open. Through it, he saw Anokhi trembling while sitting on the bed watching her wall with dead eyes. He had never seen her like this. Even after she was ragged, she had a fighting spirit. Even after he called her those disgusting things, she was still strong. Her courage had broken but this time…Anokhi herself was broken. All of Anokhi was broken.

Shaurya watched her pick up her phone with trembling hands and dial a number while taking in shaky breaths.

She put it on speaker since she was in no condition to hold her phone to her ear.

“Hello?” a deep male voice spoke from the other end. Anokhi looked at the phone and after hearing the voice, she burst into silent sobs.

“Hello? Kaun bol raha hai ji? Kisse baat karni hai aapko?”Anokhi couldn’t stop crying as she cradled the phone. She had changed her number after coming to Chandigarh.

“Arey kuch bologe?! Main phone rakh raha hu ji. Pata nahi kyu faltu main phone karte hai.” Panic filled her eyes and a frail whisper escaped her lips directly into the speaker of her phone.

“Papaji…”

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you can find the complete second and last chapter of goodnight moon here:

Shakhi // GOODNIGHT MOON // Chapter 2

This got me so emotional! I loved this! I felt for Nikki throughout and my heart broke along with her and for her 💔

I hope we get to see something like this on the show as well!

Shaurya's mother left and Anokhi's dad stayed and yet the void in their hearts is so similar with a shared grief!

Originally posted by: Tallulah

you can find the complete second and last chapter of goodnight moon here:

Shakhi // GOODNIGHT MOON // Chapter 2

So beautifully written! Loved it! I don’t know if it’s just me, but I am unable to access the 2nd and last chapter from the link 👆 . Could you please recheck? Thanks much again!🤗😘

Originally posted by: rumi_dee

So beautifully written! Loved it! I don’t know if it’s just me, but I am unable to access the 2nd and last chapter from the link 👆 . Could you please recheck? Thanks much again!🤗😘

I'm so sorry I don't know what's wrong with the link. You can find the second chapter in my posts. I have no clue how to work the links around here. Thank you for your kind words though.

Love you.