ShaKhi OS || The Luckiest Man - Page 2

Cute +Romantic❤️

Very well written👏

Awesome os❤️

Really loved it

I am in shakhi land already.

😻😻😻😻😻

It’s such a sweet os !!

Brilliantly written ya.... Amazing ....❤️ loved the way u have written his denial of the mind with his actions..... Too good... Kash aise hi ho in the show.... Now the new bts also Shaurya in her hostel room.... Hope atleast 1% of this happens .... That itself will be awesome 😃

Thank you for writing it in a happy way🥰🥰🥰🥰

I am so happy after reading this Is🥰🥰🥰

Thank you so much and continue writing please 🥰🥰🥰

Awwie ❤️

Levely os

Just loved it so much 😳

Abh bts dekhney key badh tho ye os sach ho aisa wish kar rahi hun 🙈

Manma emotion jaagey ❤️

Its beautiful i read this after seeing bts omg shaurya on anokhi bed

Aww.. Since morning & afternoon has passed I'll say you made my evening happy 😆💛

This is just what I needed to read in the aspect related to a confession. The Shaurya you've depicted is exactly the confused bean in the show, who at one time thinks he has started liking Anokhi & the next he might love her 🤣

I liked the way in which Anokhi let Shaurya speak & it felt bad seeing her vulnerability, trying to hide her tears but when she kissed him, taking him by shock I was like 'yeayyyy....!!!!!' 🥳

My fav dialogues were Shaurya telling her that 'people' tells him that he likes her & the confession of Anokhi. Made me go awww ☺💜

Less like a Hot OS, more like a heartfelt one with an amalgamation of the sweetest feelings ☺️ Now seeing KV's receny insta stories, it feels as if he'll meet her in her hostel (Hope he's not there for just relaxing LOL 😂😆) & say sorry or smtn. But it was easy to imagine this OS happening right there

Great stuff, so adorable & waiting for that kicka** holi OS too!!!

Unres..

Rimi, you know, right? how much I love reading your stories💗

Damn, the dilemma and the emotions here🥲 I’m awestruck as always Everything was perfect. Super dreamy and yet so real

The actions were opposite of the words and the reactions. Awesome. I wasn’t expecting Anokhi’s confession but I was like aww, the girl has understood what dear PS is saying and running from😳

I’m still waiting for the Holi OS because I’m very sure that’ll be very sizzling hot😎😆Looking forward to read it supersoon🤗❤️

Originally posted by: AK_2010

UnRes

Rimi story ke bare mei zyada nahi kahungi kyu ki teri bhavishyavaani sach hoti nazar aa rahi hai! Naye bts mei Shaurya Anokhi ke room mei pohoch gaya hai.... Apne show ka hero toh bohot fast nikla re... Tune toh phir bhi few months later likha hai lekin show wala toh pohoch bhi gaye waha🤣🤣🤣🤣

I love the way you blended Shaurya's confusion with Anokhi's understanding. Shaurya's denial with Anokhi's acceptance. Mai flow mei beh gayi aur bhul gayi ki yeh fiction hai.

In future, I am sure Anokhi will be the one who will understand him and sort out their feelings for him.

Ab mai chali assignment karne! 😁😁😁

Finally you are first to comment on my OS Akshu ❤️🤗

Yaar I told you yesterday na ki I have a feeling that he will land up in her room and vahi se I thought of this 🤪 Aur mere OS post karne ke 10 min baad hi BTS aa gaya 🤣🤣 Shaurya is very fast I must say 🤪

Thank you so much baby ... you understand my work very well 😳

And go and finish the assignments jaldi jaldi 😆