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Posted: 5 years ago
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Rimi story ke bare mei zyada nahi kahungi kyu ki teri bhavishyavaani sach hoti nazar aa rahi hai! Naye bts mei Shaurya Anokhi ke room mei pohoch gaya hai.... Apne show ka hero toh bohot fast nikla re... Tune toh phir bhi few months later likha hai lekin show wala toh pohoch bhi gaye waha🤣🤣🤣🤣

I love the way you blended Shaurya's confusion with Anokhi's understanding. Shaurya's denial with Anokhi's acceptance. Mai flow mei beh gayi aur bhul gayi ki yeh fiction hai.

In future, I am sure Anokhi will be the one who will understand him and sort out their feelings for him.

Ab mai chali assignment karne! 😁😁😁

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Posted: 5 years ago
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It is amazingly beautiful👏 I loved the way his words didn't match his actions. Acceptance with Rejection is cherry on top❤️

And thanks for giving it an open end, I can continue with my thoughts😳🤣

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Posted: 5 years ago
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It's so beautiful ❤️

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beautiful 😍😍😍😍 amazing os.... loved it 😍♥️❤️
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Posted: 5 years ago
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This was beautifully written

The way shaurya was expressing himself and the way anokhi understood

Loved it

I know its a os but would love it if u could continue or write story with similar plot

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Posted: 5 years ago
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This is SO beautiful.

I hope this scene actually takes place in the show !!

Cannot wait for the confession ❤️


PS : You write amazingly well

Thank you so much for this today 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Haayee

Such a beautiful OS😳

I can feel ShaKhi's heartbeat through your words🔥

That gentle kiss is just cherry on the top. Just wowww❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Rimi🤗

This was absolutely gorgeous. My heart was racing wild throughout and I had this stupid dorky smile on my face reading this.

It was too hot. Too good. Too beautiful!❤️

Keep writing and keep making those vms since you are so good with your craft.

When Anokhi said 'I love you too', my heart skipped a beat and I smiled so widely I can't even tell.


Light and shine❤️🤗

Akanksha

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Awwdorable

Shaurya keep saying it's not true want me to pull his cheeks for his cuteness

And anokhi's I love you too put a smile on my face

Waiting for your holi os.. ❤

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