ShaKhi FF : Babies On Board | Chap 4 | Pg 12 | 12/04 - Page 4

Originally posted by: ZaaraBB

yayyy waiting

Thanks... me too excited.

Originally posted by: Ariyatogether

Interesting character sketch

I really liked Kanchan as Shaurya's sis nd Anokhi having supporting father

Yup wanted to change the characters.

Originally posted by: Nan_ArHi

Interesting. Would love to read more ❤️

I hope i dont disappoint.

Originally posted by: Cherrydreamsxx

This sounds interesting. Waiting for your update ❤️

Thank you

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Fantastic story concept

Please update soon

I hope that i live upto the expection.

Originally posted by: chavi12345

Nice cs. Would love to read

<3

Originally posted by: Shegalradhika

Your stories are like wao......pls don't make us wait more🥺

Thank you very much

Originally posted by: Sakshi_04

Wow 🤩

Waiting please update soon 🧡

thanks <3 will try to update one chapter a day

Originally posted by: Anusha_24

Interesting character sketch ❤

I liked this part and want to know what happens next in their life its interesting

Waiting for next part ❤❤

loads of surprises.

Originally posted by: Shivikafan2

Interesting

thanks

Originally posted by: fkhr30

Nice

<3

Originally posted by: Nan_ArHi

Fascinating! So Anokhi's gonna carry Shaurya's child. Is this by chance an Arshi story?

Enjoyed reading. Thank you for the update ❤️

I hope you will read Shakhi Version as well <3

Originally posted by: Nidhi14

Interestingly.

Thanks for the thumbs up <3

Originally posted by: Ariyatogether

Nice prologue

Why is Anokhi going to Kanchan?

Cont soon

Hmmm! soon you are going to find out

Originally posted by: Anushree_anu

Nice prologue waiting for the first chapter 👍

Thank you...

Originally posted by: serenepeace46

Nice storyline, please write more❤

Trying to overcome my writers block :p

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

Interesting premise ..

Kanchan as his sis is a great surprise

Thanks <3

Originally posted by: AvneilShakhi

superb..... hell excited for the update 😍😍😍

Yay! Me too <3

Originally posted by: Sakshi_04

Amazing 🤩🤩 please please update soon 🧡

<3 sure dear.

Originally posted by: taarey25

Please continue

Great prologue

thanks for the appreciation

Originally posted by: Unique.Sheep

Appy I guess this is the first time I am reading your work and I am so excited to see how you unfold this story

Just curious to know, who was the original couple you wrote this on?

Hinnu <3 thanks for reading my story... do give your feedback <3

Originally posted by: GHKPM

Ok this sounds promising...am excited😊...& thnx for the pm💐

Me too Thanks a bunch for appreciating

Originally posted by: Cherrydreamsxx

The prologue is very nice. So excited for the first chapter 😍 can’t wait, please update soon!

Thanks a bunch

Originally posted by: Shegalradhika

Thank you for the pm🥰😘.......

I think you have written it as a ARSHI story🤔......

Love to read as shaaki version😊.......

Thanks for reading both the versions... ArShi one writing was very amateurish hence rewriting.

Originally posted by: chavi12345

Nicr prologe

Thank you.

Woah! They hate each other! Now that's interesting. Enjoyed reading. Thank you for the update ❤️

This is so interesting, I can't wait to read further.

Omg these two...hahaha did not expect them to know each other AND loathe each other...this is going to be so much fun😅...thnx

Wonderful start 👍

Shakhi hate each other their since their clg days .

Is anokhi going to be the mother of the child ?

Then it will be interesting

Waiting for further updates.

I just noticed that the name of the FF has been changed from 'baby on board' to 'babies on board' as in plural.

Is it gonna be twins? I love twins. Shaurya and anokhi are gonna have a handful raising them. I love this subtle change without giving away the actual plot.

These two are fighting like anything 🤣🤣

I love t.u r female lead sassy smart and fearless