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Nice update. Both consumated. It was a passionate update.

Chapter 6

Romantic and Sizzling

Maanveer is actually in love with Geetakshi

now that is an amazing fact .

when he tells her never to hate him his voice is filled with pain

he was shattered when she told him she hates him

but now that they are together he makes the most beautiful love to her

and she too knows its the most beautiful moment of them been together

Amazing update buddy

Geet couldnt resist maan

Both cross all the boundaries

Wonder how will geet react now

Update soon

Chapter 6

That was an enthralling ,enticing and a very very exquisitely narrated plot. This one is completely a full prove poem or something like a definition for love.... Though it's outer layer is on physical love but the meanings behind it was all the way deeper in a spiritual level... It was like the expression on how two souls entwined to be one in every aspect that would bring out the explanation for love in their own ways.... Being a literature student it's understandable that you have put in alot of thinking into this piece to be precise and more elaborate on all the details... Now that's a very difficult task as a writer... Now back to the story... Ok so they're one now but what about that Satan king and Geet's father and also not to forget her kingdom... Did she completely forgot about that... I don't blame her you know... Cause she's with a man who has consumed her entire existence in him to be with him as his forever.... I hope Maan would fight for Geet and their love prosper and dwell as a poetry.... A tale to tell what defines Love.... That's a beautiful update Di... 🤗

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Chapter 6

Passionate update.... amazingly written

so they become one

of cos he is bowled over by her beauty

liked that he confessed that he loves her

update soon

thanks for the pm

Very beautiful and passionate update dear

Both cross the limit and both become one

Maan confess his feelings

Thanks for pm

Watting for update

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hot n passionate update

maan n geet become one in all sense

Thank you thank you for sending me the pwd I can comment on every post . Maan and geet I hope they stay together . Love the update

Wow a romantic update. Geet an equal participant. And maans confession of his love. Aww. Now they have become one. Will maan marry her. It almost feels like they are.

What about her kingdom and her thinking of him Bring a blood thirsty king ?

Maan saying don't hate me ever was emotional. Romance was sensual. Maan saying that geet is the most beautiful creation on earth was romantic. I love you dialogue was sweet.perfect pics