ShaKhi FF: Secrets of the Courtship *Chapter V pg 27* (7/5) - Page 11

This story is getting more interesting with each update😳

Really can’t wait to read the next part

Do continue soon Sruthi🤗❤️❤️

Oh man what an intense chapter! And what a heated conversation btw ShaKhi! Just hope that they can solve whatever problem they had in their past n rekindle their love!

I just joined the forum and found your FF. I love the way you write and it kinda makes me want to write too. Both the characters seem to be well thought out and penned with care. Also, those flashback scenes man. ❤️ Keep writing and I hope you write some quick One shots as well 🌼

I can’t wait to know the past. They both are so miserable.

Interesting update. So they were together and things ended on a bitter note. I am looking forward to read their past. It’s nice to know that shaan and Astha are together.

Update soon

Shruti🤗

Your updates always come at the right time! "Don't bother me unless someone's dying!" that's such a Shaurya thing to say🤣

"Because if she heard he was doing well, she would be devastated but if she heard that he wasn’t, then she’d be shattered"

I loved this line❤️

Yoo This story is fire!! It's like a sloww slow burn! But not exactly.. And usually with stories that have to straddle the past present line, I generally feel the itch to read their past but I am actually liking the pace here instead.

And I like how they both are feeling those phantom limb pains yet don't understand that the other is going through the same! And react with all these caustic retorts!

And like the total hilarity of both of them saying yes to the project to spite the other! 🤣

I am forever unsure about what to feel about Shaan! He seems like a right things at the wrong time kinda person always!! Both him and Aastha seem like two people who themselves are arrested in their thirties and hence are never able to be there to raise Shaurya!

So Looking forward to reading the rest of this!Kudos!

Originally posted by: Rozy77

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Another amazing chapter hun👏

Astha, Devi and Babli made an appearance and again the contrast was so wonderfully penned👏.

Devi in her short but quite impactful debut is already giving me a damn headache..😆

I'm sad reading how sad and miserable ShaAkhi are currently😒. The word 'ego' keeps popping in my head and alternating between the two whenever they faceoff but I'd also like to not jump the gun and accuse anyone. This angst that you have woven here is brilliant👏.

Also, I dont want to tell you my hunch as I dont want to feel foolish😆😆

But damn, a part from all this they are such fire in their scenes🔥. I wonder who will give in first and throw their arms around the other..☺️

How do you manage to not deviate and write something else instead? 😆

Eagerly waiting for the next part😃

I'm glad I got to read 2 back to back

Thanks once again for making it lengthy 🤗

Thank you so much!! btw can i call you Rozy or do you go by something else??

I'm glad you enjoyed the cameos in this chapter!! Devi honestly is such an interesting character to me but hahah she gives me a headache when I write her too 🤣 But yeah they are honestly so sad and you're totally right that they are both being quite prideful with each other because they both feel like the other has wronged them! I'm such a fan of angst so thanks for putting up with it 😆

Awww I'm sure it's not foolish but dw, I hope that you'll like whatever I've come up with for what happened when it's revealed

I also have no idea who will cave first yet BUT trust me, it's because I can't keep these two away from each other for too long that I have to write these flashbacks otherwise there is no cuteness 😆

I'll try and update soon and suspect the next chapter will be lengthy as well so thanks for reading ❤️❤️❤️

Originally posted by: Fahmida21

this is getting very very very very interesting! I really want to know what happened to the old Anokhi!! LOVEEEE ITTT!!! ❤️

Thank you soooo much Fahmida 🤗 She's definitely changed and subsequent chapters will shed light on why!!! I'm so glad you're enjoying 😊

Originally posted by: wamavasant

Keep writing and entertaining ❤️

Your ff has my hear ❤️❤️

Already waiting for the next update 😆

Awww thank you so much Wama🤗🤗 I'm really happy to know that you are enjoying it and I'll be sure to update as soon as I can!!