Shakhi OS ||Behind lillies and daisies|| - Page 3

Originally posted by: MeeraWrites

I loved this OS. It was beautiful. ❤️

This OS feels like a breath of fresh air. It filled the Sunday void in my ShaKhi-shipping heart.

You're right, the hindi dialogues have a different momentum of its own.

The interaction between Aastha and Shaurya was really nice. You kept their essence intact. ShaKhi scenes were ❤️.

Do write more. 🤗

Awww. Thank you. I am so happy you liked it.❤️

Sundays are a torture these days.😭

Exactly hindi has it's own own beauty and we just cant translate that essence !

And with Shakhi, I feel its all about essence. Them being so subtle and different. Their is a different magic in them.

I hope writers maintain it as the show moves ahead. 😆

Originally posted by: Akanksha29100

Bro🤗

I am so glad you liked it. ❤️

Haina?? But let's see what they show! Fingers crossed.

Haan.. bas CVs isko hawa mein naa uda de.. simple se sorry ke saath

Originally posted by: deepshiii

Haan.. bas CVs isko hawa mein naa uda de.. simple se sorry ke saath

Mereko naa esa dhak dhak horela hai!

Akanksha this was legit awesome. I liked how Aastha took stand and showed him that it definitely was a big deal..

I dont have words for this but you put all the emotions in it and it came out beautifully.

P.S kuch baatein hindi main he achi lagti hai.

Originally posted by: Akanksha29100

Mereko naa esa dhak dhak horela hai!

Same pinch bro🤣 Hum log ke saath itna cheating hota hai toh aisa waisa sab kuch ho raha hai😆 I’m ready to have another dhokha🤪

Akanksha, lovely work 💛 Going by your lines, I also agree that we can't expect a lot, a properly defined & meaningful apology from Shaurya to Anokhi but something like this, what you've written would be nice. As Anokhi said she might not forget but she forgave him is I guess what should be there in the show too. Too much hopes for now LOL

Good stuff, enjoyed the OS & would like to read more from you if you get the time that is 😊

Shaurya bhi na? Aise kon apologize karta hain? By forcing her to listen to you. But if we have Shaurya at hand, there was no other way around. Also, did he actually care about Aastha's drooping smile. That's a progression for him as a son. Beautifully written shot.

Seriously though, even I thought a lot about it and don't know how they are going to redempt him. A girl in real life won't want to stay near such a person. So I have decided that if Anokhi forgives him, so will I. Anokhi is a victim, not me. I don't feel like I should have the right to forgive him or not forgive him.

When he said "you lack sense you are irritating stubborn "

I was like this is the shaurya sabherwal we know 🤣

He took 30 seconds to say how irritating she is 🤣 In that hospital scene before calling the doctor

And even in ahir's car he said the same🤣

I loved it and i loved how astha knocked some sense into him so i hope we get such scene in SAAKK as well

Loved it so much

Loved it💖...really wondering what the writers have planned for the show too😊

I'm just now reading this and it is so beautifully written!!! I loved how the realization slowly dawned on him about what he said and why it was so hurtful!! This was truly an emotional rollercoaster. It hit all the right notes and now I'm hoping they give us something beautiful in the show to match this perfection