ShaKhi Drabble: Strange questions (17/3) - Page 2

Shaurya’s predicament perfectly explained! 😆 His restlessness, his irritation, his questioning was all on point but sirf questions puchne se kya hoga. Bande ne jawab ko accept bhi toh karna chahiye na. 🤣

Oh god🤣

Shoruya shourya shourya....itna sab dimag mein hain lekin itna bhi nahi pata ke kyu restless ho rahe ho🤣

Akshu you have written his pov very well girl🤗 the battle between his heart and mind was penned down amazingly👍🏼

That 'main hath pakdu toh aise react krti hai jaise maili ho jayegi' was🤣

But i shouldn't laugh at his state of mind🤪😆 bechara pyar ka mara...samjh nahi raha hai, use jealousy ho rahi, kyunki pyar mein padh gya hai 😳

I just loveedddd it Akshu...keep writing👍🏼

Awesome drabble. The whole farak padta hain dialogue reminded me of another ML, but our Shaurya is nothing like that ML

Akshu 🤗

Meri jaan it was amazing ❤️

I don't have words to express how beautifully you have portrayed his emotions ❤️ His jealousy , his stubborn nature, his responsible self thinking about college, his care for Anokhi.. everything could be felt ❤️

Keep writings such impactful scenes ❤️ it makes my day 🤗

I loved the ending

I want to see this exact thing happen to Shaurya in the show, desperately! 😆

Loved it. He has to accept his feelings for her. I just can’t wait for it.

Originally posted by: shaylini

Wow , this was nice. ❤️

"Lekin mai zara sa haath pakad lu toh aise react karti hai jaise maili ho jayegi"

Loved this line. You portrayed his frustration nicely

Thank you!! ❤️

I am happy to see that this line stuck with the character 😆

Originally posted by: Coffee_Chips

This was good with valid points & I think this is a drabble only 😆

Well, Shaurya's insecure thoughts made me laugh at his stupidity. The acceptance is the toughest job for him be it here or on the show. Nice job!

Thank you for your valuable feedback, Sew. ❤️

I am happy that this one made you laugh, coz even I had a great time watching him and then writing this😃 I must say, I have started looking forward to your comments now!! 😆

Originally posted by: MeeraWrites

👏👏👏

It was superb. Portrayal of Shaurya was on point. His denial, frustration, self-talks.... every thing were on point.

Thank you, Meera! I am glad you could relate the drabble with the character 😃

Originally posted by: Ariyatogether

Loved it👏

He at least realised he did wrong

Nd his frustration was very well shown😆

Thank you dear! 😊

I wont say that he realized his wrong... Bcz in this drabble he did not. But he trying to pacify himself that he shouldn't be bothered about her actions. 😆