Of course. I would love to read his redemption track. He has already crossed the line of rudeness. In a way, he was assassinating her character and for what? He was accusing her for the emotions he had developed within for her.
Remember he told Anokhi while she was at the hospital that, "bahaduri aur bewafooki mein farak hota hai." And the same Shaurya couldn't realize the graveness of the words he blurted.
All that he said to Anokhi at the library was the worst any man could accuse a woman of.
For me the nail in the coffin was the, "Meri chune se tumhe problem ho rahi hai. Even I'm quite rich and famous." dialogue.
I would like to see him realizing the momentum of every word that left his mouth.
All the best for the work. 🤗
Will be waiting to read it.