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mona maan's cousin happy to see geet n invite her on wedding of their cousin .
she try to encourage to take next step seriously with her casual talk saying that maan think of her.
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mona maan's cousin happy to see geet n invite her on wedding of their cousin .
she try to encourage to take next step seriously with her casual talk saying that maan think of her.
Oh shucks 😋
Was so excited but ending mein sab gadbad hoing 😄
As usual 2 steps forward and 3 steps backwards 🤷♀️
Misunderstanding ka recipe lag raha hai.
Waiting for next
Chapter 51
Thank goodness 😅 the girl is his cousin, phew we do not have to hate her 😆
Funny how his cousin knows all about geet ...,, someone has been chatty with his cousin
Sooo adorable how maan was blushing 😳 thank goodness his cousin spills the beans about maan having the hots for geet.
As for being awkward ...... maan & geet could officially win the title of king & queen of awkwardness 😆they are both avoiding a proper conversation like the plague 😆 their relationship will always be at a standstill due to their inability to communicate their feelings 😕
Niw this destination wedding sounds like a lot fun & Mona seems like the perfect Cupid ♥️ for this awkward socially challenged couple . I hope they both go !!! What happened to maan’s mom ?? Maan & his mom still seem to have a strained relationship!!
Hmmm interesting there is a storm outside & there is a storm brewing inside maneet’s hearts 🥰.......... will geet stay the nite ??? Can’t wait to find out .!!
Thank you 🤗
Both hesitating to open up in front off each other and than mona came in maan want her to leave but she take some time her invitation is good
Maan want her to stay as weather is not good i think she will agree bz she don't put maan life on risk by driving in this weather
Oh wow the much needed Cupid 😍 Mona Darling 😁
They needed the push. Hope kuch akal aye dono ko aur gaadi aage bade 😄
Part 51
Perfect update... brilliantly written
so its his cousin Mona
she indeed has great timing
Mona is a wonderful person
liked her idea about Geet joining Maan for the destination wedding
she will brinbg them closer
where is Maan's mom?
what happened between them?
glad that Maan said that Maan has the hots for Geet
Adore this blushy Maan
not surprised that Maan told Mona to leave
again the awkward silence
great that Maan praised Geet's new look
ah the storm came at an apt time
so will Geet stay over?
update soon
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Part 50
Perfect Update
Geet is rather sassy here she is actually making
Maan know that she is angry at him
and its great that he also ask her but at the same time
one can truly admire him for not wanting to hurt Geet
but for some reason I feel staying away from her
will be hurting her
now who is at his door
Part 51
Hilariously Awesome
I enjoyed this update so much
Oh at the door was Mona , Maan's cousin
so its good that he has not rushed into any relationship
but I had a feeling now that he was clean than surely its only
Geet that can be his partner
both Maan and Geet were practically walking on egg shells
around each other
so he has spoken about Geet to Mona again it shows he surely
cares deeply for Geet and perhaps he has not realized it he is already in love
with Geet
hope she agrees to stay the night
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Part 52
Geet finishes her food and helps with the dishes
G-I should be leaving now. It was nice seeing you...and knowing that you are fine
M-But it’s raining...there's a storm
She looks outside
G-So you don’t want to drive me back?
M-I do...I can...you can even stay here...I will drive you back,first thing tomorrow...tomorrow is a weekend anyways
She looks up at him, meeting his eyes
G-You want me to stay here?
M-I do
G-Why?
M-I can’t see you leave.....I thought I would be okay...but I am not
G-But...but you'll break my heart
M-Is this not breaking our hearts?
He says his body moving closer to hers
She closes her eyes
He pecks her on the lips once, to see her reaction and then it turns into a deep all hell loose kiss
G-Water! Water! I am thirsty
M-Oh sorry-sorry
He gives her water
M-You look beautiful
She wanted to say, ‘you told this already’ but just smiles instead
Both of them don’t want to ruin the moment by saying ki what next
G-What am I supposed to change into? I can’t sleep in these
M-You can wear my clothes
G-Your clothes? How would they fit me?
Maan ek t-shirt aur pajama nikaal ke deta hai Geet ko
Geet pehenti hai
M-See! It looks great
She glares at him
Maan ka t-shirt Geet se thighs tak hai
Pajama toh itna bada hai ki , strings bhi nahi tie ho rahe
G-The pajama is slipping! I am not wearing a bra...you can see my headlights!
M-No...emm...I am not able to...but since you mentioned...I mean...I will get you something else
Pajame ki jagah boxer leke aata hai
M-This will fit you
G-Boxers????
M-Wear them. They will fit
G-Okay. I will wear them if you wear them
M-I am wearing them
Maan removes his trousers
Geet blushes hard hiding her eyes
Both start laughing
G-Shameless!
M-As if you don’t like it
Maan says mischievously
Geet sits on the sofa laughing
G-You look ridiculous in shirt and boxers
Maan laughs too
M-We both look ridiculous
He points at the mirror
She giggles
G-We do
Geet sofe pe pasar gayi
Maan andar se comforter leke aaya aur Geet ko diya; aur khud bhi Geet se chipak ke pasar gaya
M-This feels so good! I hate adulting
G- What’s your definition of adulting?
She asks curiously
M- Being responsible and stuff…thinking what will happen in future. In short, thinking about the relationship will not work so not being together
G-uhmmm
She goes into deep thoughts for a moment and then says:
G-This is sinful
M-Is it?
She nods
G-You know in India, there would be a scandal
M-Then nobody has to know about this there. Shhhh!!!
Nakhra toh dekho madam ka! Oh Oh Oh kart ghar to paunchgayi nahi toh mujhe toh laga yeh gaddi se kud ke baag jayegi. hahaha tumhare toh Geet se alag hi expectation hai😆...Chal ek advice toh li meri ke pasta toh kah liya aur thoda sa confess kiya. ab teri advice se hi jo ab tak thik hua hai wo ho paaya hai 😉Dentist pulling teeth sounds easier than these 2 really having a deep and mature conversation. lol what analogy! I dont know who this lady is at the door but Maan better explain who and what because we know Geet is going to go read a stupid book and say he cheating on her without even a confirmed relationship. Sighs! Ab Geet se koi umeed hi nahi hai tumhe, bechari!
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