"The Green Eyed Monster" Shaurya Anokhi OS +16 - Page 3

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: GHKPM

That was lovely...serious n hilarious...a jealous Shaurya is always a treat💖

Thank you so much for your lovely feedback 😊 much greatly appreciated ☺
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Posted: 5 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: AK_2010

God this was hilarious 🤣

This man will be a disaster in love and your OS just proves it to me 😆

Amazingly written!

Thank you so much for the appreciation 💗. I agree Shaurya will be a disaster in love...completely simp 😁
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

So damn beautiful!

ShaKhi and chocolate my two fave😋🤩😍❤

Do write more!

It's my favorite combo too...I was craving one so....Thank you for your feedback 😋 I am grateful. Do stay tuned☺
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Posted: 5 years ago
#24

I can actually picture Shaurya throwing such a tantrum 😂😂

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Posted: 5 years ago
#25

Wow!

I don't know how to explain how much I loved this.

You penned it down amazingly... I could literally see every thing in the scene. The way you described each and every minute detail was excellent. Coming to ShaKhi, they were like straightaway descended from a Shakhian heart; lively, cute banter, with true essence...

The dialogues and the emotions portrayed gracefully absorbed ShaKhi.


ACP Ahir though indirectly added elegance to ShaKhi. 😆


Loved it to the core. 🤗❤️


Will be waiting to read another such beautiful work of yours.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: prs_725

That was so much fun to read! It was so good! Thank you for sharing w us!


shaurya jealousy mein kya kar betha?! I would love a scene like this w their home w astha and anokhi ♥️

Can you imagine shaurya tapko whenever he wants to ?


also made me crave chocolate brownies and cake now ♥️🔥


Ha ha me too was craving Chocolate torte...I can totally imagine him dropping by whenever he wants once Shan moves in with them. He'll have an excuse officially then. Thanks Pooja for the lovely review😊 much appreciated 😘 do stay tuned for more.
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Posted: 5 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: shaylini

This was so well written.

Just loved it.

❤️

Thank you so much for your feedback 😊 I am so glad. Do stay tuned😊
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Posted: 5 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Coffee_Chips

Green with envy 😝 Enjoyed the story as a whole & Shaurya's jealousy was so evident which I loved. Anokhi had gone all the way to make Shaurya's fav truffle & him being him took it as a medium to let Anokhi know what he feels 😆

So engaging & basically liked it! Keep up the good stuff!

Thank you so much. I really look forward to hearing your thoughts. It really helps me with the feedback. I am so glad you enjoyed it. It's always a pleasure to hear from you. I am Shreya and I would love to know your name😊 Do stay tuned☺
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Posted: 5 years ago
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As usual you always put all the details so perfectly that it becomes really easy for a reader to imagine every single thing. Always feels like these are happening right infront of my eyes.


This one was lovely 😍😍😍 i loved this jalkuda shaurya. Jalkuda shaurya is always a treat to read.


And anokhiii who kept the door open at that hour 🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️ yeh ladki sachme shaurya ko ekdin pagal bana degi!


And thank god she didn't make those for acp! Rather she was making desserts for shaurya here 😭💗 warma drama par to bas ahir ji ahir ji 😭😭😭 shaurya ki sath sath main bhi pagal ho ja rahi hun iss ahir jaap se!


He signaled her about the stuck melted chocolate and she did something that almost made him stop breathing, an innocently provocative gesture of extending her tongue and licking it off her lip making Shaurya so hot and flustered that he moved in the Hall.

@-bold part :- lol i enjoyed this part most🤣🤣 that little devil just gave him a perfect seducing show without even acknowledging it🤣 and shaurya bechara pura frustrated ho gaya! Na keh paya kuch na seh paya.


Sending green love to you 💚💚💚💚 please write more like these...their lil cute and lovey moments!

Posted: 5 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Nomadic_Vibe

Thank you so much. I really look forward to hearing your thoughts. It really helps me with the feedback. I am so glad you enjoyed it. It's always a pleasure to hear from you. I am Shreya and I would love to know your name😊 Do stay tuned☺


Hey Shreya, nice to know you. You can call me either Sew or Sewwi, nicknames

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