Ha ha thank you so much for this fascinating review. I am touched. Also I thank you for the patient reading. đOh I so loved that she called out on his anger managementđ he needed that.
I think its gonna be a rock n roll journey the moment she steps into the houseđ€Ș It will be fun to watch Devi's satta slip out of hands and have Kanchan and Gayatri breath freely.
I am over the moon after reading this! đ
Indeed she will put across her point without disrespecting anyone and she has the capacity to be perfectly imperfect. Thank you for your feedback đOriginally posted by: TunesOfHeart
This was awesome!
Our debates champion will definitely rule not only shaurya's heart but thevwhole sabherwal mansion đ
Anokhi though a serial "aastha" chanter is actually a quiet and sensitive girl. I really can't picture her being this sassy. So this is indeed a refreshing change. đ
She challenged Devi for a debate competition đ€Ł. N that roti of all map sizes, I can almost hear myself speaking. đ
Girl u'r one versatile writer. U'r equally comfortable writting dark stories and such light frivolous ones as well for our entertainment. đđ Do keep writing. đ
Thank you so much for your constant appreciation. I am truly touched and grateful. I look forward to hearing your feedback so thank you for that. Do stay tuned âșOriginally posted by: deepshiii
Loved this OS a lot. Beautifully writtenđ„°â€ïž
I liked how Anokhi explained Shaurya about the mess and how sheâs scared of him hurting himself with his violent behaviour and angerđđŒ
Deviâs got a good one. She deserves this. It felt like "Yeh toh bas shuruat haiđ aage aage dekho hota hai kya"đ€Ł and Shauryaâs proud of her lady love answering back and handling everything perfectly
Thank you so much for your feedback. I am truly grateful for the support. Looking forward to hearing from you. I too hope she has the spunk to deal with the Shaberwals. Do stay tuned.Originally posted by: Coffee_Chips
Anokhi will definitely change the house of Sabherwals' once she starts making a place for her in Shaurya's heart Even he himself would be left dumbstruck đ
This glimpse in your pov was an apt representation & I really hope she would be this blunt & straight forward. Well written & good job!
Ha ha I don't think she would have gone that far. She is spunky and sassy but not disrespectful towards her. She is just very upfront. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Looking forward to hearing more from you đOriginally posted by: Jennymyola
Nice OS! For a moment there at the end I thought Anokhi was going to remind Devi that she's a DIL of the house too đđ€
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