"Becoming the Perfect Shaberwal Bahu"!!! Shakhi Shaberwals OS - Page 3

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Posted: 5 years ago
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This was super cute with the perfect touch of amusement and hilarity! Devi toh gayi! 🤣

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Posted: 5 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Jennymyola

Nice OS! For a moment there at the end I thought Anokhi was going to remind Devi that she's a DIL of the house too 😂🤭


Ditto! I thought she'd do that too! 🤣

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Riya_Mehta

Imagining thisas upcoming scene cracked me up🤣. How Anokhi was giving befitting reply to devi👏👏.

Ha ha I wrote this imagining the same...I am glad you liked the end result. Thank you for your feedback 😊
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: infinitie

Cannot wait to see Devi v Anokhi in the house! All the anaolgies about weather and astrology will fall short in front of our Debate Competition Champion 🤣

I loved how Anokhi explained the consequences of Shaurya's anger because no one in the house questions him about it and just lets him do as he pleases in anger. The CVs should take inspiration from this beautiful OS 😉

yes Shaurya's temper issue needed to be addressed. That's why I thought how would he deal with it sensibly. What could be his motivation. Ha ha I don't think CVs will do that. They are doing a fab job so no complaints. Thank you for such an amazing review. Much appreciated 😊 🙏
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Posted: 5 years ago
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I see this will be addressed in the future bc anokhi already mentioned “kis baat Ka gussa hain apko?” I wish they address his gussa soon and this is so apt for the story line. Wish they take ideas from your os!


this was so well written and I’m so happy w anokhis befitting reply!

I can totally see shaurya and anokhi playing footsies or him grabbing her hand under the table and not letting go! So cute and romantic, can’t wait for this.

So far shaurya is shown w a spine .. yes he believed lies and believes till date but no one can make him do something he doesn’t wish to, which I love. Def not under any emotional black mailing. You have shown this in the Os so beautifully too! Truly enjoyed this!

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Posted: 5 years ago
#26

I can't wait to see them in the same house sharing room..that bloody pindo was cute .how she couldn't kiss his forehead 😆for height difference

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Wow, I loved it. I can totally image Anokhi doing this. Thanks for writing dear ❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Thank you 😊
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Thank you so much for your feedback 😊
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Posted: 5 years ago
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we want extended part of this...

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