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Posted: 5 years ago
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So I never made my theories or thoughts public but today I thought to write,I know damage is done...nothing can be salvaged now..but I always imagined story on these lines regarding their various tracks,they could play it out such...what you guys think....its all what they shown but little bit different.

Take example of revenge track,a character like vansh's revenge track could be very much interesting combined with his jealousy for Kabir,angst between vansh and riddhima,his dealing with everyone who betrayed him including Kabir,so much exciting it could be with all his traits intact not what they shown introducing other one as wife just revenge of giving pain which he thought he get and definetely not throwing her out and just to quench his thirst for revenge and once done with it than reality strike what he had done and revenge should be with other's also and an elaborate one with AP,kabir,Aryan whoever betrayed but what we got,I don't even want to remember than after that they could show him being done with revenge satisfied but Riddhima going away and his obsession for her to keep with him,meanwhile Kabir ousted for playing against him could again enter their life with Riddhima's parents truth known to him blackmailing Vansh meanwhile vansh already going crazy becoz of his fear of revenge track,Riddhima already trying to run away from him,Kabir playing with him using that parents truth(not knowing Ishani is the culprit),than they can show Riddhima forgave him for revenge after much mehnat of his but get to know about her parent's death truth Kabir winning and again friction between RiAnsh but than Ishani for his brother told her truth ask forgiveness and Riddhima after some emotional turmoil decide to forgive Ishani for humanity sake becoz she is genuinely regretting meanwhile Riddhima getting to know about his JC days,his torture his panic attacks,she tried to help him meanwhile Kabir going crazy for her after being defeated planned to take Ridhima as revenge from Vansh not becoz of some 2 min. Of his love,Vansh dealing with his fears,Kabir with his revenge this time Riddhima centre point and Riddhima dealing with Vansh's JC pain and no need of pregnancy here and than again to increase his fears they could add Mafia angle where Kabir already joined hand with his Mafia rival and not this stupid diamond stealing from his room,and try to cash on his fear and vulnerability and vansh dealing with his fears but also have hint of conspiracy going against him in mafia world amd Riddhima becoming his emotional support/strength not knowing whats happening,helping him dealing with his jc days pain and ensuring him,nothing bad would happen amd they can still wait for pregnancy track.His voicing out fears of having family,becoming father and Riddhima trying to understand his fears,helping him to open up regarding his JC days meanwhile Kabir along with mafia rival(with whom he joined hand using his police status and not stealing vansh's diamnond and all,no need to show dumb vansh)planning something big,causing vansh problems so in between some mafia action they could show.

So in this way they can always keep the Kabir in picture without making vansh dumb and riddhima doormat.


So what you guys think.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Good Nephy....

Lets wait what ott platform bring to us. Without fear of itv Aunties

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Posted: 5 years ago
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It can only be possible in fanfictions ......


Writers did their manmani actually.......it could have been really a best track (the way you have written) .............jahan pe audience ki baat nahi sunni chahiye thi (vihan track) wahan unhone suna aur jahan sunni chahiye thi( e.g separation track )wahan unhone suna.......................


Now,we all are really sad, hearing the news...

I really wanted to see Vansh's obsession track,,,,oh god ,it will remain unfulfilled šŸ’”šŸ’”

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: whitewitch

Good Nephy....

Lets wait what ott platform bring to us. Without fear of itv Aunties

Thank you for appreciation.


Actually more than trp aunties I am scared of mamta Aunty.šŸ˜†

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Madhuilove

It can only be possible in fanfictions ......


Writers did their manmani actually.......it could have been really a best track (the way you have written) .............jahan pe audience ki baat nahi sunni chahiye thi (vihan track) wahan unhone suna aur jahan sunni chahiye thi( e.g separation track )wahan unhone suna.......................


Now,we all are really sad, hearing the news...

I really wanted to see Vansh's obsession track,,,,oh god ,it will remain unfulfilled šŸ’”šŸ’”

Thank you for saying it as best,actually they are wrting so worst that it looked nice.šŸ˜†

I know yaar it is possible in imaginations.


These are their tracks only but I have presented them differently and in each track kabir also present(not in irritable manner or at cost of Vansh or RiAnsh),they could very well use their supporting cast also as they can show that mafia rival(nothing to do with diamond,some purana rival)which I mentioned above attacked Ishani particularly(not accidently) for revenge from vansh(happens in Mafia world)resulting in her miscarriage resulting increased vansh fears while ishani repenting on her actions,realizing that despite making riddhima orphan she forgave her,and its her karma resulting in her miscarriage(something different than cliche) and meanwhile Angre supporting her and their relationship bajaye direct ILY could move forward slowly and simultaneously that jc track with siya helping Riddhima in understanding vansh's pain while kabir planning with mafia rival,vansh dealing with mafia rival as well as riddhima with his fears.


Yaar first I also assume they listen to fans but truth is they do whatever they want.


There were so many things we want to see which I don't know will ever get....I was toh excited for revenge track also but no words I have to say about it,such pathetic it turn out to be.


They can't understand that vulnerabilities doesn't make a person dumb.


They tried every khichdi but for once, continous one week they didn't gave vansh as smart,planning,plotting with his mysterious and dangerous aura as they lresented him to us as if they knew that will increase trp and they in every situation doesn't want it so they like delibrately avoid it.šŸ˜’

Edited by Nephy - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nephy

So I never made my theories or thoughts public but today I thought to write,I know damage is done...nothing can be salvaged now..but I always imagined story on these lines regarding their various tracks,they could play it out such...what you guys think....its all what they shown but little bit different.

Take example of revenge track,a character like vansh's revenge track could be very much interesting combined with his jealousy for Kabir,angst between vansh and riddhima,his dealing with everyone who betrayed him including Kabir,so much exciting it could be with all his traits intact not what they shown introducing other one as wife just revenge of giving pain which he thought he get and definetely not throwing her out and just to quench his thirst for revenge and once done with it than reality strike what he had done and revenge should be with other's also and an elaborate one with AP,kabir,Aryan whoever betrayed but what we got,I don't even want to remember than after that they could show him being done with revenge satisfied but Riddhima going away and his obsession for her to keep with him,meanwhile Kabir ousted for playing against him could again enter their life with Riddhima's parents truth known to him blackmailing Vansh meanwhile vansh already going crazy becoz of his fear of revenge track,Riddhima already trying to run away from him,Kabir playing with him using that parents truth(not knowing Ishani is the culprit),than they can show Riddhima forgave him for revenge after much mehnat of his but get to know about her parent's death truth Kabir winning and again friction between RiAnsh but than Ishani for his brother told her truth ask forgiveness and Riddhima after some emotional turmoil decide to forgive Ishani for humanity sake becoz she is genuinely regretting meanwhile Riddhima getting to know about his JC days,his torture his panic attacks,she tried to help him meanwhile Kabir going crazy for her after being defeated planned to take Ridhima as revenge from Vansh not becoz of some 2 min. Of his love,Vansh dealing with his fears,Kabir with his revenge this time Riddhima centre point and Riddhima dealing with Vansh's JC pain and no need of pregnancy here and than again to increase his fears they could add Mafia angle where Kabir already joined hand with his Mafia rival and not this stupid diamond stealing from his room,and try to cash on his fear and vulnerability and vansh dealing with his fears but also have hint of conspiracy going against him in mafia world amd Riddhima becoming his emotional support/strength not knowing whats happening,helping him dealing with his jc days pain and ensuring him,nothing bad would happen amd they can still wait for pregnancy track.His voicing out fears of having family,becoming father and Riddhima trying to understand his fears,helping him to open up regarding his JC days meanwhile Kabir along with mafia rival(with whom he joined hand using his police status and not stealing vansh's diamnond and all,no need to show dumb vansh)planning something big,causing vansh problems so in between some mafia action they could show.

So in this way they can always keep the Kabir in picture without making vansh dumb and riddhima doormat.


So what you guys think.

Wow..kitna accha plot likha Nephia

Agar makers iss tarah se track execute kr lete na to TRP aaj kahan hoti...

Itna accha plot hai saare leads ko equal ss bhi milti..... story aur initial characterization bhi butcher na hoti...

Aur ye baat bilkul sahi likhi tumne ki abhi pregnancy track beech me add nahi krna chahiye tha.... juvenile center days ke trauma ko as a separate track show krna chahiye tha.

Inhone koi bhi track sahi se execute nahi kiya whether its ViVa, revenge or juvenile center.

Edited by PassionStar - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Waaahhhh nephy... Kya mast idea diya yaar


But unfortunately, leads ko dumb dikhaye bina kabir ki smart dikhana makers ko aata hi nahi hai

Issiliye pure show ka satyanash kar rakha hai 😵


But agar aisa kuch hota toh kya maza aata yaar

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: PassionStar

Wow..kitna accha plot likha Nephia

Agar makers iss tarah se track execute kr lete na to TRP aaj kahan hoti...

Itna accha plot hai saare leads ko equal ss bhi milti..... story aur initial characterization bhi butcher na hoti...

Aur ye baat bilkul sahi likhi tumne ki abhi pregnancy track beech me add nahi krna chahiye tha.... juvenile center days ke trauma ko as a separate track show krna chahiye tha.

Inhone koi bhi track sahi se execute nahi kiya whether its ViVa, revenge or juvenile center.

Thank you Akanksha for appreciation... inke hi different plots hai bas meine unka execution thoda sa different tarah se present karne ki koshish ki hai jisse mein closure hai tracks ka aur ek dusre se connection bhi aur supporting cast ko bhi itna negative nhi bnaya aur (individual story bhi dikha sakte the ki ishani apne miscarriage se deal kar rhi hai apne actions ka result maan rhi hai, aur Angre usko support kar rha hai dheere dheere unmein ek bond develop ho rha hai direct ILY ki jagah)....aur initial characterization bhi maintain rhe...aisa kuch soch ke meine likha ye...

Ki aisa soch ke daily episode writing karte na toh viva track ke se shuru hokar aur mafia activities tak jo likha meine last mein 250-300 episode toh aaram se ban jate aur age fir mafia va track continue ho jata aur ban sakte the episode

But vo log talented hai professional hai unhone kabada karna uchit samjha..šŸ¤”


Mere ko toh thik se likhna bhi nhi ata....vo log toh professional hai fir itna bekar kaise likh liya....

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: merryyura

Waaahhhh nephy... Kya mast idea diya yaar


But unfortunately, leads ko dumb dikhaye bina kabir ki smart dikhana makers ko aata hi nahi hai

Issiliye pure show ka satyanash kar rakha hai 😵


But agar aisa kuch hota toh kya maza aata yaar

Thank you Eeshu for appreciation,meine toh thoda execution different btaya inke tracks ka aur Kabir bhi hai har track mein...ki aisa kuch soch ke daily episode likh lete toh jyada badhiya nhi rehta..bas koshish ki meine acha laga ki tumhein acha laga....šŸ™‚

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Nephia itna acha plot


CVS k pass itna demaag Nahi baby,aisa sirf baki log soch sakte hai,not CVS , because they the most dumb creature God has created so far.



I really wanted to see vansh's obsession,his dark side

But ye khabi pura nhi huwa😭

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