ShaKhi OS - Silent Conversation

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Posted: 5 years ago
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NOTE - ShaKhi are too adorable for words,the new promo has the whole fandom in full spirit and this show certainly deserves more hype and attention.


This OS is something I just wrote on a whim and on the same posting it here.


SHAKHI OS - SILENT CONVERSATIONS



Anokhi stood dumbstruck as she grasped the fact that her Aastha Mam was Shaurya's Sir mother.So it meant Shaan Sir and Aastha Mam are husband and wife.


Then why did she stayed away from her husband and son?.Why did she asked her to not mention her in SIAC before?.



There were plethora of questions bubbling up in her mind.



She made a move to step away from the door but the exact moment door opened and Shaurya walked out.



Grief,Pain,Worry all of it were stark evident in his eyes.He seemed to be taken aback for a moment but she watched as he pulled himself together,pulled over his hoodie and walked out.



It didn't feel right to her to go in as yet ,she didnt want to put Aastha Mam in an uncomfortable sitiuation by letting her know she is aware Shaurya Sir is her son neither she wanted to probe into their family matter.



Deciding to take a walk in the hospital garden she stopped short seeing Shaurya Sir sitting still on the bench hidden amongst trees with a faraway look in his eyes.



She didn't know him well,he was her professor but she has realised there resided an innate goodness and kindness in him and to see him looking so forlorn disturbed her.



She turned back and heaved a sigh of relief as she returned finding him still sitting there.



Hoping she wasn't crossing a line,she took tentative steps ahead and called out" Sir"



She watch him getting agitated and wordlessly forwarded the coffee cup to him.



Shaurya hesitated for a second but then took it from her and averted his gaze away.



Not knowing what to say and yet not wanting to leave just yet

Anokhi said conservatively-



"Chandigarh tends to get cooler during night".



She wasn't expecting a reply abut heard him say gruffly -



"You are new here Miss Bhalla,it will take you little time to get used to the weather".



He swallowed the liquid in one swift gulp and got up throwing the cup in the trashcan walking away.


Anokhi turned to go inside the hospital again when she heard him say


"You better coatup MissBhalla,you wouldn't want to miss more of your classes if you fell ill would you?".





Anokhi smiled as he walked away with those parting words satisfied she was able to distract him albeit for few minutes while Shaurya walked away feeling lighter with the little if it could be called the conversation he just had with Miss Bhalla.He had been agitated seeing her there but the fact she didn't say or ask anything was such a welcome reprieve from the evergoing loud happenings that happen in his home or the clashes he has been recently having with his father.




SOMETIMES SILENT COMPANIONSHIP HOLDS THE CAPABILITY TO WORK WONDERS⭐✨

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Posted: 5 years ago
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First🙌🏻

Unres.


Beautiful and sweet one!❤❤❤

Do write more!!

Edited by TunesOfHeart - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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That’s a nice one👍🏼The last line is so apt to sum up the entire write up❤️

Loved it🤗 do write more❤️❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Thanks💕

This would be what I would ideally wanted to see ..non judgemental

Anoki I felt Crossed her limit when she told him off

She knows astha as a guru ..she is not a mother .. specifically his situation

The neglect the sadness he has felt is different

Plus even with their own mother children react to emo and physical neglect differently

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Please do write more and a longer one, waiting eagerly to read more stuff from you

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Beautifully expressed!

I loved this Anokhi! I think she crossed a line today so I'm really thrilled to read this version!

Keep writing more!

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Wonderful OS

These silent conversations, these small gestures are the best kind of companions.

This subtle, impartial support is beautiful that Anokhi gave him is so beautiful.

Loved it.

Looking forward to read more from you. You express soo well.

Love!!🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
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This one is what we call chota packet bada dhamaka

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Posted: 5 years ago
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So beautiful♥️

Their silent convo made Shaurya feel better

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Posted: 5 years ago
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It was really nice. Like a breath of fresh air.🤗


Truly, CVs should have shown such a version of ShaKhi.


Do write more like this. 😊

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