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Posted: 5 years ago
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Wohoo..

Loved it👏👍🏼

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Chapter 18 - Suprises, kisses


After confession their feelings, both Ayan and Riddhima felt light and excited for the future. Even though Ayan was excited he was still cautious he didn't want Riddhima to feel pressured to love.


They were both usually busy with their work, but still they tried to make time for each other. Ayan used to cook breakfast for her,whereas Riddhima used to cook dinner for them.


They would tease each other as well like how Riddhima shouldn't be a Doctor but like a detective or something always curious about something, she had asked Ayan why he hadn't written in his diary after the day she told him about Kabir. He stilled for a second and then said in a firm tone that he didn't want to talk about it.


Riddhima had sensed she had pressed a wrong nerve and before she can say sorry he went into his room and closed the door something he hadn't done in a long time.


Here Ayan was thinking how i do tell her the truth that i was planning to tell her that i love her,how i went to search Kabir, and he was the responsible for my accident when i came to know the truth, i didn't want to make feel guilty.


Next morning Ayan had left the house before Riddhima was up since he a meeting and Riddhima had a day off so she decided to plan a suprise for Ayan. She had ordered a variety of flowers like Blue violets, tulips and yellow roses which symbolize trustworthiness, love, faith and friendship.


She had turned the living into a little pillow fort and put fairy lights around it, and had made fried rice and manchurian for him and white sauce pasta for her. She switched off the lights when she heard the door opening.


Ayan entered the house and it was dark he was sure that Riddhima was at home,he called out Riddhima's name-

A- Riddhima?

R- (coming out of her hiding place)- SUPRISE!!!

A- Just Staring every where.

R- You khadus, you really are buzz kill🙈😡

A- No, i liked it i am really surprised and i wanted to say sorry and i bought something for you as well but seeing all this my suprise feels small.

R -(excited) - what did you bring for me?

A- Goes outside and brings a big teddy with a sign hug me on it.

R- TEDDY!!! Thank you so much i love it. Now come on lets eat dinner before it gets cold.

After eating dinner they were lying in pillow fort and talking about random things. Ayan could see Riddhima was feeling sleepy. He said

A- Riddhima its late lets go to sleep.

R- No, i want to stay here ,and she suddenly hugs him tightly.

A- Riddhima you want be able to sleep comfortably and i dont want you kick me in your sleep.

R- 😡😡 She gets up and hits him with a pillow, Ayan tries to stop and yanks her towards him and accidentally their lips meet. They both stilled for a moment and then slowly started kissing each other softly and slowly it became passionate and dominating. Ayan was the one to back off slowly, he didn't want to Riddhima to regret anything.

R- Ayan stop overthinking, i dont regret rather i enjoyed it. She blushed realising what she said.

A- Really Now😏😏

R- Shut up🙈🙈

A- Chalo, it is really late we really should go to sleep.Goodnight jaan

R- teasing him- Good night Teddy and she hugged her teddy.😏😍😍 Ayan backhugged Riddhima and they slept peacefully.

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Wow kahani me twist... Ab maza ayega👏

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This is amazing 👏

Waiting for the next update👍🏼😳

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Chapter 19 - Beginning of the Downfall


Vansh was pissed at his Chachu, how dare he do this him, it seems his family are nothing but a bunch of backstabbers. He came into the living and called for his chachu

V- CHACHU COME OUT RIGHT NOW!!!😡😡

RU- What happened Vansh?

V- Really,aapko kuch nahi pata, apne na sirf dhoke se business apne naam karwaya bilki uss business ko barbard bhi kar diya, we are going to be bankrupt soon, because apne saare galat deals ki and humara saare business loss mein chale gaya.

Ru(angry)- I had to do it, kyunki tumhe toh koi interest nahi hai kisi cheez except Riddhima, uske liya itna deewane ho gaya ki kuch tumhe samaj nahi aata.

This is all happening because of you, na tum uski insult karte ,na woh ghar se jati and na tum itna obsessed behave karte. Tumhari galti ki saaza ye family bhugat rahi hain.

And jis tarah mein tumhe deceive kiya tha usi tarah muje bhi kisi ne deceive kiya koi Ayan Raichand.

Vansh was surprised to hear Ayan's name he didn't know that he was this big a business man. He left from their and went to his study he was thinking how to overcome this problem when he received a call from an unknown number.

D- Hello Mr. Raisinghania, mujhe kabar mili hain ki aap mere baare mein kafi information search kar rahe toh socho i should call you.

V- What fo you want?

D- Tch tch itna attitude, it doesn't suit a person who going to lose everything.

V- I wont loose anything dont you know you need only a moment to change the game.

D- Well, i am giving you a week, if you can save your family and business well and good . Nahi toh ek hafte baad VR Mansion ki nilaami hone wali hain, i quite like it and i want to buy for my Jaan.😎😎😎


Vansh tried eveything in his power to save his business but no one was ready to help,the people he did business with, his mafia contacts everyone backed out, what he didn't know was the fear of Devil was present in them and they were ordered not to help him. Vansh had to tell his family that soon VR mansion will be sold. Everyone was in state of panic and fear.


After one week, the auction was held and the mansion was sold for 50 crores (🤭🤭sorry if it is too less). Ayan was present in the auction and Vansh thought that he worked for the Devil. To add their misery Ayan asked Dadi to handover the keys.


Dadi though sad was going to give the keys to him ,but he suddenly stopped her and said-

A- I wanted to buy this mansion for my jaan.🥰🥰and it would be better if you gaves the keys to her.

Dadi- Who is it?

Ayan asks them to look towards the door. And to everyone shock Riddhima was standing at the door.

PS- So Riddhima and Ayan will now live in the mansion, lets see what more will happen.

Please comment too guys, even if you just like it.

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I loved it❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️....

Really excited for the next chapter 🤗🤗...

Now Riddhima is going to rule VR mansion and vansh's business too☺️☺️....I want to see ishani's reaction 😊

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Posted: 5 years ago
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This is awesome. She is with Ayan, hope it last. ❤️

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Chapter 20- Bow down to the Queen


Everyone turned to look towards the door, Riddhima was standing there she looked totally different she has smoky eye make and high ponytail, tear drop earrings and Red lace back less dress and pump heels. She looked graceful yet sexy.


Ayan went towards her and Riddhima playfully glared him, and teased him- For this you cancelled our date night. Ayan replied that this was way than date night. He pulled her towards Dadi and asked her to give her the keys.


Dadi said she is happy to give keys to the bahu of this house and before Ayan could have said anything ,Riddhima said in firm tone- I am not your Bahu, i have already given divorce paper to Vansh and you lost the right to call me Bahu when you stood and watched my humiliation and called someone else your Bahu.


One more thing since i am the owner of this mansion, i am allowing you guys to stay here and someone who doesn't want to can leave i won't stop them. Suddenly Ayan picked her in his arms.


R- What are you doing Ayan?😳😳

A-Well i was going to show you our room, and i know your feet must be hurting after wearing the heels all day.🤭🤭

R- Well thank you🥰🥰.

Everyone was shocked, and surprised to see her playful side and Vansh was totally jealous and seething seeing her in his arms.


The next morning Ayan and Riddhima were having breakfast when others and Ishani came and started taunting Riddhima again for changing partners quickly. A loud sound of someone being slapped was heard.


R- I think it is time i set some ground rules. Since i have full control of VR business from now everyone will get only a stipulated amount of money for their needs.

Aryan you need to start working, and if you dont all your credit cards will be blocked.

Chanchal all your needs will fulfilled by your husband's money and not a penny from me.

Ishani you will need prove your worth by working till then your credit cards will be blocked. Vansh and Angre can take care of themselves and Dadi and Sia.

Every decision big and small will be discussed with us.

And Ayan, i would request you not to eat anything which is not made by me or take anything from anyone, i dont want you to get hurt.🥰🥰And now it is time for you to go to office and me to go to the hospital. Anyone who has a problem can leave when ever they want.

A(teasing)- Madam ji if your speech is over then your driver is waiting for you.🙊🙈

R- Lets go bhaiya😎😎🙈🙈🙈


They went out of the mansion hand in hand, while everyone was present in the house. Kabir had gone out for some work,he was shocked to know whatever that had happened and was thinking of a way to manipulate Riddhima, but what he didn't know was this Riddhima cannot be manipulated and also that his past was going to come infront of him. Ayan was alive and this time he will take his revenge from him.


PS- Did you like the slap scene, kabir is now going to be tortured soon😈😈Ayan is not weak anymore he has his jaan with him.

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Chapter 21- Manipulation


Kabir was cursing his luck, why was everything slipping away from his hands, first Riddhima falls in love Vansh, and now the whole business was in her hands. And Vansh is behaving like a small puppy, following her around everywhere trying to win her back.


Riddhima had came back from the work, she felt weirded out,coming back to the place where she had been humiliated but it was important yo teach them a lesson that just because they had money and power they couldn't play with someone's feelings. She was resting on the sofa when a glass with strawberry milkshake came in front of her.

V- Here have it you will feel refreshed.

R- No, thank you Mr. Raisinghania, i dont like strawberry milkshake anymore.

V-I thought it was your favourite.

R-Not anymore, ( looking directly into his eyes) when people can change, so can their preferences.

V- I am sorry Riddhima, please give my a chance.

R-Did you give me a chance to explain myself, did you tried to give a relationship a chance with whole heart. If you had then you wouldn't have done what you did. If you have to right to move on even if it was act why cannot i do that. And for the last time i don't want to talk you , so please stop following me around.


Riddhima went away to her room and she didn't saw Ayan had came back home, but he had heard everything and he knew she will be pissed and not have any dinner. So he made aloo parathas for them and took them to her room, all the while Vansh was saying them.


A- Madam ji aapke liya dinner aaya hain.

R- Ayan when did you return? And is it aloo paratha. Wow give me give me.

A- I came just now, and wow you really are hungry.

Riddhima saw Vansh standing by door watching the scene she felt irritated and went and closed the door on his face and closed the curtains as well.

R- Did you eat? Come on i will feed you.😍😍

Vansh was feeling lonely and dejected that even being in the same house Riddhima was not talking to him, at the same time Kabir came in front of him.

K- tch tch, what happened to the great VR, what did you used to say jo mera hain usse mein hassil karke rehte hun. Ab kya hua?

V- Kabir,i am not in mood for your nonsense.

K- But i want to help, i want money and you want Riddhima, so why not join hands. We can always show that Ayan was cheating on her and then i am sure she will come crying to you. What's say partners (extending his hand).


Vansh didn't say anything but went away thinking should I take kabir's help in getting back my Riddhima, Ayan can find himself in a scandal and it will cause riddhima to lose her trust in him and maybe i can help and soothe her at that time.


He made a plan that they will keep a party on the account of Sia's birthday and this party will pave way in destroying Ayan's reputation and also breaking Riddhima's trust. He smirked if he had to play dirty to get Riddhima he wouldn't hesitate to do that, Ayan needs to know his place and what limits he is ready to cross to get to Riddhima.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Wow nice update 😊😊😊😊

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