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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Soso70

Now Jalal comes to know about Jodha's condition and why she's in coma. Also he saw his little daughter and is charmed by her โค๏ธ

With their little princess he tries to get Jodha conscious. She wakes up by Myras crying.

Does she really not recognize Jalal? Let's see ...

Loved it little sis ๐Ÿ’•. Awesome part๐Ÿ’–

thank you for pm sweety ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ˜˜

Thank you sissy๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’•

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hey diiii๐Ÿค—

Hope everything's good

You havn't updated yet๐Ÿ˜ข

Update soon and take care๐Ÿ˜‡

Regards,

Ananya

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Mango_1

Hey diiii๐Ÿค—

Hope everything's good

You havn't updated yet๐Ÿ˜ข

Update soon and take care๐Ÿ˜‡

Regards,

Ananya

Sorry dear... i was not feeling well from past few days... i will update today๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 4 years ago

Relieved to hear that๐Ÿ™‚

Will be waiting

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Posted: 4 years ago

CHAPTER 33



"Jodhaaaa .... when did you get conscious ?" Asked jalal in tears.

"long ago.... before you bring our daughter.." replied jodha softly.

"So you've been out of your coma since earlier sweetheart ???"

"Your hand grip brought me back my husband. and the voice of our daughter's crying gave me strength to speak ..." replied jodha.

"You don't talk to much... let me call the doctor."

"Baby, look... your mother has regained her conscious, are you happy again?" said Jalal to his daughter who was still crying. Jodha stretched out her hand to touch myra, Jalal who realized what Jodha want to do immediately brought myra closer to jodha. jodha caressed myra's head and myra slowly stop her crying.

"Look ... as soon as you touch her, she stop crying immediately. That means she doesn't want to be away from you sweetheart." said jalal amazed by what he just saw. After myra calmed down, Jalal called maan and asked him to call the doctor. A nurse came and took myra from there to put in the incubator. Their family who had been waiting for them outside the room were happy when they heard jodha got her condcious. As soon as the doctor came, the doctor immediately checked the condition of jodha and gave a sedative injection so that jodha could sleep for a while.

"I have given a sedative to your wife, for the next 1 hour your wife will fall asleep, when she wake up, Hopefully her condition is much better." doctor says to jalal.

"Thank you doctor.." said Jalal.

"Jalal.. now you go and take rest" said hamida.

"i will rest in this room only, i wont go away from jodha"

"but jalal..."

"its ok ma'am, let him rest on next bed over there" said the doctor smilingly. Now both jodha and jalal were treated in the same room. currently they are still under sedation to restore their condition. Jodha first came back to consciousness. she opens her eyes slowly And she looked around the room and she saw her husband sleeping on next bed beside her, jalal was sleeping peacefully, she couldnot hold back her tears because gratitude was so great that God still gave her the opportunity to be withthe person she loved so much.. her husband jalal ...

"i will never go from your side again" thought jodha. After a few minutes, Jalal began to open his eyes slowly, as soon as he turned to his side he saw Jodha looking at him with love. No words were spoken from their lips but their hearts expressed their longing for each other.

"jalaaall..." call jodha softly but jalal turn away his face and didnt answer jodha.

"what happen jalal?.. are you mad at me?" Asked jodha but jalal remains silent as he didnt hear anything.

"Jalal... i m sorry.." jodha began to cry. jalal couldn't stand it. He got up from bed and walked slowly towards jodha but remained silent.

"please forgive me jalal ..." Jalal did not pay attention to Jodha's words, suddenly jalal lift jodha hospital gown and cried when he saw the stitch marks on her stomach, jalal gently caressed the wound and kiss it gently.

"Does it hurt ..." Asked jalal, gently touching the wound.

"not as painful as when you were not beside me" answered jodha in tears.

"Do not ever repeat things like this jodha.... I will not be able to forgive myself if something happens to you and myra" said jalal firmly.

"You are my world jalal ... I can't let my world be destroyed." said jodha softly, which made jalal cry even more. Then Jalal sit to jodha's side. jalal slap jodha's cheek gently.

" Do not ever do this." said jalal firmly.

"i love u.." replied jodha.

"I will punish you."

"i love u..."

" I'm mad at you."

"i love u"

"I won't talk to you again."

"i love u.."

"I will ..." before jalal could continue his words jodha captured jalal's lips with hers. Jalal's anger melt with jodha's passionate kiss.

**********

"jalaaaall ..."

"hmmm ..." replied jalal with his eyes closed hugging jodha.

"Sorry I did not ask for your consent to name our daughter as myra," Said Jodha who was lying comfortably on jalal's chest. (But i already asked mahira di๐Ÿ˜‚)

"its a beautiful name ... as beautiful as our daughter, I love that name."

"Really .. ??? thank you hubby...." this is a new start of life for jalal, jodha with myra. they vowed to be together under any circumstances.

********************

For 2 months they were hospitalized, now the 3 of them have been allowed to go home. For the time, they all went to jodha's house which is 3x bigger than jalal's house. Jalal could not cover his amazement at seeing his father-in-law's house which was more worthy of being called a palace. This makes jalal embarrassed remembering what he had said about jodha, that jodha is a rickety, cheesy, tacky, poor, old-fashioned girl, tacky, village girl and what not. jalal did not expect jodha will leave all the luxury she got by choosing to become a doctor in the village with a simple life. Jalal was grateful to himself that he got jodha as hid wife... the saviour of his soul.. the wife he loved more than his life.

"I will not let go of you MY JEWEL." Thought jalal while looking at jodha..

*******************

Jodha was singing lullaby for myra to sleep. Myra looks sleeping peacefully in her mother's arms. Jalal was endlessly grateful for what he saw from far. He approached his wife.

"Is my little princess already sleep?" Jalal asked softly as he dont want to disturb myra.

"She's already in a sweet dream. Look ... when she falls asleep she looks very much like you." said jodha.

"She is indeed the daughter of Jalalludin Akbar." said jalal proudly. Jodha slowly put myra in her baby box. "You've been with myra all day now, it's my turn to get your attention, "

"Don't say you're getting jealous of your daughter."

"little ..." replied jalal which made jodha glare at him.

"now what do you want ?!" Asked jodha annoyed.

"I hope you did not forget that you still have one debt to me ... you have to grant my 3 wishes and 1 wish left that you have not granted.

"Oh God ... I thought you forgot.."

"I won't forget sweetheart."

"Hurry and say your last wish so I don't have any more debt to you." said jodha.

"I'll say my wish but not in front of our little princess." replied jalal who suddenly carried Jodha out from myra's room to their room with a mischievous gleam.

"I miss you sweetheart .." jalal whispered in jodha's ear as he laid jodha on bed.

"jalaal ... you just recovered."

"You are a medicine for me sweetheart and I really want you." Jalal said hoarsely in Jodha's ear. Jodha looked closely at jalal's eyes, there was a lot of love and desire in his eyes, jodha couldnt able to hold back her desire.

"I miss you too ..."

"I love you sweetheart .."

**************

FORGIVE ME FOR SPELLING AND GRAMMATICAL MISTAKES....

THANK YOUUU๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’•

Edited by ParijatGirl - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Loved it dear

Awesome part ๐Ÿ™‚

Finally saare gile shikve door ho gaye & both are safe & sound along with Myra

I loved how things turn out to be positive & all three are free to go home

Jalal had made a promise to himself that he won't let his family stay apart

It was a beautiful journey

Hope we get epilogue

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon๐Ÿ™‚

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Posted: 4 years ago

Amazing chappy

Loved it

Finally all well

Update soon

Thanks for Pm

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Posted: 4 years ago

Fabulous update ๐Ÿ˜

Beautifully pennedโค

Loved the way emotions/feelings have been written....seems real

I like the name myra ๐Ÿ‘

Btw when is the next update

Update soon

Regards,

Ananya

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: golden_aura

Loved it dear

Awesome part ๐Ÿ™‚

Finally saare gile shikve door ho gaye & both are safe & sound along with Myra

I loved how things turn out to be positive & all three are free to go home

Jalal had made a promise to himself that he won't let his family stay apart

It was a beautiful journey

Hope we get epilogue

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon๐Ÿ™‚

Thank you didi๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’•

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

Amazing chappy

Loved it

Finally all well

Update soon

Thanks for Pm

Thank you didi๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’•

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