Maaneet ss- pehle pyaar ka pehla gum! Part 22- pg 20 / march 23. - Page 10

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Part-15

She was still struggling with all those weird feelings, trying to understand them..when her heart introduced a brand new emotion to her, which she had never experienced before.

It was lunch break. She was coming back in the class, she had went with meera to drink water.

As she entered the class..the sight greeted her, made her restless. She did not liked that at all.

Maan was at his seat. But he was not alone. A girl from their class was standing close to his seat, talking to him. And he was smiling at her!

She didn't know what they were talking but she didn't liked that... His talking to that girl. And his smile..she wanted to shout at him badly, to stop that smile! How can he smile like that at any random girl!

She tried very hard to ignore that thought. There was nothing wrong in talking to ur classmate and its his choice to talk with whomever he wants. He used to talk to them earlier also. And It never bothered her before. Then why it was troubling her now?

All that time, when he was talking to that girl, her eyes were fixed on them only. She tried but couldn't look away for some reason. After few minutes, that girl went away, but those few minutes were so hard for her to handle.
After that, she thought about her strange reaction to that incident, but instead of getting any answers, she was getting more confused.

As time passed, this used to happen more often. She did not like to see him talking with other girls. His smiling to them, started irritating her. It used to make her restless, still she tried her best to ignore. But it was becoming impposible for her to bear.

Then one day, they had their usual fight & she was really angry, so told him, " baat mat karna mujhse..tu!"

and went away from there.

It was nothing new for them to fight like that & then patch up again. As they cant stay without talking to eachother.

So, this time also, she was expecting him to come to her and finish off this fight..as it was his fault this time.

But she was surprised, when she found him chatting with his friends. And that was not it. Next, that same girl came to him & he got busy with her..smiling & laughing!

She didn't liked that! She felt so hurt seeing him enjoying..forgetting her. It was unbearable for her...his ignorance. She felt choked. If it wasn't that classroom, she would have cried surely. She some how controlled her tears.
Rest of the day went like that. He didn't tried talking to her. And she was so much hurt that didn't had in her to say anything to him.

As the last bell rang, she just picked her bag and rushed out of the class without looking at him. She didn't even waited for meera & pinky..just went home directly.

As soon as she reached home, she rushed to her room & locked the door.

Tears..which she was controlling from last 3 hours, were flowing freely now. And she didn't bother to stop them.
It was all getting really too much for her to bear. Firstly, these strange feelings for him were making her confuse. Then her increasing expectations from him and then this unknown pain which she felt, whenever she saw him with someone else & then today.. his ignorance!
It was all so difficult for her to handle.

She felt so helpless, what was happening to her. She had so many questions but there was noone who could answer her.
She cant say all this to anyone. What will they think about her? And she cant let him know anything about all this..what if he didn't liked it & stoped talking to her?
She didn't wanted to loose his friendship. She wont be able to bear if he broke their friendship!
So, what she was supposed to do?

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geet is very much jealous to see maan talking with other girls normally n it hurt her very much when maan ignore her after their fight n dint come for patch up

poor geet unable to know her feeling n not able to share her situation with any one

hi Shona.... how are you>

Part 15

beautiful update, superbly written

feeling for Geet

she is so jealous seeing Maan with that girl

sad that Maan did not pacify her

Geet's emotions well portrayed

can understand her swirling thoughts

she is upset and in tears

what does Maan feel for Geet

update soon

So sad. Geet not Abe to define her new found feelings which keeps getting stronger day by day

Finally the mail in the coffin maan not coming to talk to her after another fight brings her down. byt why is he not doing that. Trying to talk to her

Geet not able to get rid of her feelings fr maan and when talk to other girls she get jealous but can't stop him and after fight his ignoreness breaking hr heart

Part-16(A)

That was the first time, she had cried for him, actually for anyone so desperately! The pain was too much to bear. Her heart was hurt deeply.

Its really painful to know that the person who matters to you the most, doesn't even care if you exist or not! And that's exactly what she had felt at that time. That her presence or absence doesn't matter to him. Only the thought, itself was so painful. Her tears were not stoping, however hard she tried!

Admist of that immense pain, suddenly there was anger also. Anger at self & at him. Anger on self that why she was reacting like that? Why she was crying for such a silly thing?

And anger at him that he doesn't care! That he didn't even bothered to talk to her, forget saying a "sorry" instead he was busy with that new found friend!

However, the anger at him was more! Coz it was his fault and top of that he had ignored her!
After crying for so long & thinking about the whole thing, she took a decision. She decided that if he doesn't want to talk to her, then she will also not talk to him! She will show him that If he doesn't care, then she also doesn't care!
But was that so easy?

Next day, she started for school, determined to ignore him completely. And show him that she wasn't interested in talking to him as well. She entered the class with these thoughts, running in her mind.

But Unwillingly, her eyes went to his seat, searching for him and realised that he had not came yet. She went to her seat. She decided that she wont even look at him, when he will come.

There was still 15 minutes lefts for their first class to start. One by one students were coming. She started to solve some practice questions. She was trying to not to think about him & concentrate, but her heart was restlessly waiting for him to come. When only 3 minutes were left, a thought came to her mind, increasing her restlessness, "why he hasn't come yet?" or "isn't he going to come today?" with each passing second, her restlessness kept increasing.

The final bell rang and then the Teacher entered the classroom. And she felt disappointed that now he wont come! She was taking out the required books, but her heart was lost somewhere else! It was missing him. She felt her heart getting heavy. She looked down, trying to control her emotions.

After few seconds, she heard something which made her to look up instantly!

"may i come in sir?"...and there he was!

She didn't even realised that how her restless heart was at peace suddenly! With just a look at him and all the restlessness disappeared.

After getting the permission, he entered. He was going towards his seat. And she kept staring at him, unknowingly.

As soon as his eyes met hers, he gave his bright smile to her and unknown to her self, a sweet smile appeared on her own lips too!

All that pain, hurt and anger was forgotten in that moment. As if everything..that pain, hurt ,anger, every complain.. all was gone with just that one smile from him! Her heart was clam & at peace.

And then they were once again back to their old self..as if last day's fight never happened. And she also didn't mentioned anything about his last day's behaviour.

Geet was hurt and she decide not to give him importance but next day she get melt with his one smile

Hi Shona, thanks for updating again

Part 16a

fabulous update... well written

feeling for Geet.....

she is upset with Maan....

of cos she is worried not seeing him at school

well she is relieved when he does arrive

his one smile is enough to forget what happened

update soon