Immj os - The Angel's Devil.. chap 27 page 21 completed - Page 4

Well done babs u made my day by insulting Ishani☺️🤗🤗😍.....

What a game played by Ayan👏👏...

Wow it's Interesting 🤗....I will be waiting for the next part ☺️☺️

For once I want Ayan and Riddhima to become lovers at the end, no Riansh please.

There are few stories with a different ending, so i want her to be happy but whom she loves dearly with honour and respect most of all with ❤️ It could be with Ayan or an independent life.

Chappy 3 is good and interesting to know more about ayan and his past looking forward for your upcoming update

Chapter 4 Ayan Flashback 3

It has been two weeks that he had stormed out on riddhima, two weeks of not talking and visiting her, it has taken a toll on him, he has become grumpy, snaps at people without, Raghuvir noticing his behavior had started taking Ayan with him to his other meetings.

And for the first time Ayan realizes that he may not be as clean as he thought, he has delved into all business except guns, drugs, and human trafficking. And though he didnt want to be a part of this, he wanted to be strong and powerful for riddhima, he never wanted to be weak.

And with that realization came another that he is somehow fallen irrevocably in love with riddhima, a love that is all consuming at least for him.

After the meeting he went straight to the orphanage to meet riddhima with her favourite chocolates and teddy bear as a sorry. Riddhima was having lunch at that, one look at him and huffed and glared and went back to her room.

Ayan knew he may have to grovel a bit, even beg her to forgive and he was ready to do that. He went to her room after taking permission from warden, she was scribbling angrily in her notebook

A- Riddhima, I am sorry please forgive me.

R-(huffed) Go Away

A- Please, (making a cute face)

R- I dont want to talk to you, you are a mean person. Go away.

A- okay then, i will give this chocolate and teddy to someone else.

R- (cute angry pout)No, give it to me they are mine. Then hitting ayan with a pillow, how dare you walk away like that huh?

I was so scared when you didnt come to meet me, say something?

A- (holding his ears and making a cute face) I am sorry, wont do it again.

R - You better, otherwise i will not talk to you ever again.

Ayan felt at peace after seeing , riddhima and her she was also happy she got her friend back.

Present Riddhima pov

Riddhima was going in and out of consciousness due to the medicines, but all mind was conjuring up all memories of Raisinghania family and Vansh, how much she suffered for them and how little love she got from them.

Riddhima thinks how different and carefree she was before all the nuisances with kabir started, she remembered how he warned her not to do this mission, not go to VR mansion, and mafia world is not a bed of roses.

But enough is enough, she will rise like Phoenix and she will take her revenge for all the pain and humiliation she has suffered, she will destroy them. Riddhima suddenly felt a sense a calm washing , something that she felt only with him.

A- Please wake up, i am sorry i wasnt there when you needed me the most.

R- kitna baate karto, khadus grumpy insaan. Mere favourite chocolate kahan hain.

After such a long time they saw each other again. His jaan and her khadus grumpy insaan.

Question time

1. Do you guys want Raghuvir's point of view?
2. And should i show more Flashback right now, or the present ayan helping riddhima heal ?

Amazing update👏

My answer is YES to all your questions👍🏼

Chappy 4 is fantastic and fab update Raghuvir's pov is important to know about what he thinks about riddhima and ayan as well as Don't go to past and continue with persent to make her strong and healed one

Focus on present Ridhyan interactions more please...

Chapter 5 Raghuvir's Flashback

It was after a long time that Raghuvir was feeling this content and calm, the Raichands were know businessman and respected in the community, but no one knew the trials they had to go through.

Raghuvir had to join business quite early after his father's death but only he knew the truth that his father was murdered though he didnt have much proof about it.

Life was happening and he expanded his business and took interest in other type of business as well, it was during that time he met Ajay Raisinghania and his PA Mahesh Sharma, they were friends and Ajay and Raghuvir used to meet each other in regular business meetings and party.

Ajay Raisinghania was a master player especially in business arena his business grew at fast pace, even then he was not satisfied he had started doing business with mafia people but was not able to fulfill their demands, they regularly used threaten his family but somehow he kept them safe.

His PA Mahesh was altogether different story,always following rules,for him the world was divided into black and white, Raghu and Mahesh became close friends, so close that Mahesh invited him in the naming ceremony of his girl child, he had named her 'Riddhima ' she was such cute and chubby baby.

Raghuvir married a year later and had a little daughter named Aisha. What he didnt know was how his and mahesh life would be completely change in few months time.

Ajay's greed was increasingly day by day and now he was eyeing Raghuvir Raghuvir business, it he was who ordered the hit on him in which his family died. Mahesh came to know about the conspiracy , he collected all the proofs and when he was going to meet Raghuvir, it was the same goons who caused an accident in which Mahesh died.

What Ajay didnt know was Mahesh's wife and his daughter Riddhima was in the car as well. After the death of her parents riddhima was sent to the same orphanage which Raghuvir visited.

Mahesh had already sent the proofs he had collected to Raghuvir beforehand because he knew his life would be in danger. But with his wife and family death Raghuvir had become weak and Ajay was able save himself, he blamed everthing on Raghuvir's shady dealings, and mahesh case was considered accident done by drunk driver.

It was during the time when he was searching for his family's killer, he met Ayan, he saw so much of himself in Ayan young, reckless but also saw characteristics of his friend Mahesh always ready to help, cross every limit.

Adopting him was the best moment in his life, he got a son and Ayan got a father. Ayan had been achiever in academics, brilliant hacker, but it was the father-son moments like playing videogames or teaching him ropes of his business were the best.

The name Riddhima always filled his eyes with tears, he always blamed himself for Mahesh death, when he visited her orphanage he always hoped she is the same riddhima, unknown to her it was him who sponsored her studies.

The moment he saw Ayan and Riddhima he knew that Ayan loved her, he was always restless when he was at home but with riddhima he was always calm, Raghuvir always teased Ayan with Riddhima's name and laughed whenever Ayan was feeling jealous but he was always really happy for them and wished they always remained together and even though he knew riddhima may not love Ayan like that now, he really wished one day they will be together, what he didn't know that there is big storm coming towards Ayan and Riddhima.

PS. Here you guys Raghuvir pov i hope you guys like the twist, i hope it makes sense😂😂

1. For clarity - Ajay Raisinghania played by Ashish Chaudhary
2. Mahesh sharma by Amar Upadhyay

For next chapter i am thinking revenge from chanchal chachi and her gold what say?

Chappy 5 is so good and amazing update beautifully described the past of Raghuvir looking forward for your next update