Immj os - The Angel's Devil.. chap 27 page 21 completed - Page 3

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hey for the story character sketch is


  • Helly Shah- As Riddhima, she ayan's childhood not really an orphan some mystery related to Raghuvir.
  • Vijayendra kumeria- As Ayan Raichand, riddhima friend and he secretly loves her.
  • Vinay Jain - As Raghuvir Raichand, adopted ayan and knows the truth of riddhima's parents.

Sorry if you guys wanted pics but i am not able to post it.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#22

Hi wonderful update.

Only Riansh please but Vansh should suffer and beg for forgiveness.

Next would want to see flipper dadi being the next target...

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Posted: 5 years ago
#23

Loved your story so far..

Ishani should cry blood tears 😎😬

Vansh should suffer too

Kabir should suffer the most

As well as Ahana!

Liking Ayan

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: aartee22

Hi wonderful update.

Only Riansh please but Vansh should suffer and beg for forgiveness.

Next would want to see flipper dadi being the next target...

I really dont consider dadi as an important character what do you think should happen to her?

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Ayan Flashback-2


Ayan was informed by the doctor that riddhima has woken up, he was so happy he went to visit her, but all he saw was her staring in one direction and mumbling 'vansh betrayed' me again and again, he couldnt control himself and went outside, breaking down and remembering a time when she was chirpy and happy.


Ayan had starting working in shop near her hostel whenever he was free, and riddhima was always shopping from that because he always sneaked in her favourite kitkat chocolate whenever she came to buy something he was happy not knowing his life was going to change drastically again.


It was a normal day when he met Raghuvir Raichand, who would later become his dad and reason why he is so powerful today. Raghuvir had came to the orphanage with his wife and daughter, it was her birthday and he wanted her to celebrate with the kids from orphanage and as usual riddhima and his daughter became fast friends.


What he didnt know that a member from his rival party had ordered a shootout on them,as they were leaving a van stopped in front of them and started shooting since Raghuvir was still a bit far from wife and daughter he wasn't hit but his wife and daughter instantly.


Ayan tried to shield riddhima from seeing all the blood but it was too late she had seen everything ,he made her go back to hostel and Raghuvir to somehow reach the hospital.


Following months Raghu came there asked for people help to get justice for his family but they refused because they were scared what if something happens to them


That is when Ayan helped him by giving the description of the shooter and van number as well. Raghuvir had become closer to ayan in the following months and decided to adopt him but ayan was a little hesitant because he didn't want to leave riddhima


But it was Riddhima who convinced him to go with Raghuvir because she wanted a good life for him. And that day he became Ayan Raichand but he always made a point to visit her.


Ayan never knew when he fell in love with, maybe it was the first time he saw her, or the time when she used to visit him in the shop or the time when she mentioned she had crush on someone in her class.


Ayan had been learning the ropes of business from Raghu and then he went to visit riddhima she was behaving fidgety and nervous. He still remembers the conversation after which he stormed out of the place without telling her goodbye

A- kya hua itna weird kyun behave kar rahi ho?

R(nervous)- kuch bhi toh nahi.

A- koi baat hain kya, you know you can share anything with me.

R- Aacha baato kabhi aise feel hota hain kya tumhe kisi ke liye jaise if they smile at everything is so beautiful, ya phir ek baar woh tumhari taraf dekhe uske intezaar ?

R- yah phir sirf usse hi dekthe rahe?

A- laughs, you have a crush on someone.

R - (huffing) han toh hasne ki kya baat hai ?


Ayan felt a horrible uncomfortable feeling bubbling inside of him, here she was talking about her crush when all of sudden he just stood up and ran from there and even though riddhima was calling out for him he didnt stop.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#26

Waoo

Amazing writing

U are absolutely doing justice to the story

I want vansh jealouay track

And some triangle kind of thing

And some romance among them

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Posted: 5 years ago
#27

Loved your updates👏

Keep writing more🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: raveena0605

One more thing should there be romance between Ayan and riddhima because i am rooting for them, but if you want only moral support only then it will only one sided..


You can make Aayan and ridhima as a couple....

Being done with everyone else now...🤗

Nice plot...👏

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Posted: 5 years ago
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No pregnancy please🤗 and I would love to see selfless and true love between them☺️😍

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Interesting. Please continue soon

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