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Chapter 11


Hello friends. I am a little dissapointed with your lack of feedbacks in the last chapter. Please give some more. It gives me encouragement.

Here we go......


Shaurya looked at his wife and Arjun and growled at their behaviour. It seems like Anokhi is enjoying Arjun's company a little too much. For god's sake they just met few week ago

" Anokhi. " He said a bit too loudly " please come with me and help me finding a important file. "

Both Anokhi and Arjun looked at him, confused with his sudden outburst.

" Chill bhai, why are so agitated? What's the matter?" Arjun asked.

" I have a important seminar and I want my file. Anokhi would you please?" Shaurya grimaced.

" Ji. Main dekhti hoon. " Anokhi answered.

" Bhai, don't be so hard on poor Nikki. Pehle badi Mami din bhar bechari se kaam karwati hai...." Arjun Said.

" Arjun it's okay. You wait a little. " Anokhi said.

" Bhaiya. " Shaurya said " he is your bhaiya, not Arjun. And Arjun she is your bhabhi not Anokhi. "

" We have only three years difference, bhai. We are young people and don't use such outdated words. We are friends. " Arjun replied.

" Yes we are friends. " Anokhi smiled.

" Anokhi. My. File. " Shaurya said loudly.



Anokhi sprinted towards the room and opened the cupboard and took out the file.

" Here it is. " Anokhi said and was about to walk out when Shaurya grabbed her hand and pulled her towards him.

" Why are you always avoiding my presence?" He asked pulling her towards him.

" I am not ........ I know I am a burden here. I know I am unwanted and I don't want to be a constant reminder in your life..... that I am a mistake. " Anokhi replied and freed herself from his grip and walked out.

Shaurya looked at her retreating form and sat down on the couch , " don't know why but I am used to you now. Your presence, your care and your warmth. In many years I never received this much care......"



Anokhi walked out towards the kitchen and started chopping vegetables all the while remembering Shaurya's question. I can't understand this man. A few days ago he was the one who was avoiding me, he was the one who rejected me and now he is asking this. What is wrong with him?


" Anokhiiiii. " Arjun shouted loudly.

" Huh. " Anokhi said " what happened? Why are you shouting?"

" Oh, so here I am talking to you about something very important and you are busy in your own little world. " Arjun complained.

" Sorry I was just thinking something....."

" About Shaurya bhaiya's behaviour. " Arjun concluded.

" How do you know?"

" Ofcourse I do. I know him, how he is. It's just his......."

" What?"

He leaned forward and whispered in her ear" jealousy. "

" Mr Sabharwal is jealous, but why?" Anokhi asked.

" Lots of reasons. " Arjun said.

" But......"

" Ufff leave it for now. I was telling you something important. You like to write and you are a literature lover right?"

" Mmhmm. "

" That's why I have something for you. There is a literary festival and I am invited there for seminars and workshops. I could take a partner with me and guess what who am I choosing?" Arjun asked.

" Your favourite, Shaurya bhaiya. " Anokhi answered teasing him.

" Now I am bhaiya. " Shaurya interrupted them.

" Noo I.....not..... like that. I was.... just teasing...him. " Anokhi stuttered.

" Bhai, this much jealousy is not good for health. " Arjun teased him.

Anokhi came forward and handed him his coffee " how could one drink this poison?" She whispered.

" I will be late tonight. " He said and smiled slightly at her words.

" What is wrong with him? Pehle bhi late ate the tab to inform nahi karte the. " Anokhi whispered to herself.

" Bhai, where is Anokhi's hug? Don't worry I am going give her your love. " Arjun said and started walking out.

" I am going. " Shaurya announced and sprinted out of the room.

" Arjun, please stop it now. You are so mean." Anokhi said barely hiding her blush.

" Am I? Alright, leave it for now. I am thinking about...... would you like to accompany me there? A lot of famous authors and poets will be there. " He asked.

" I don't know.....I have to ask badi ma about this. Then I will tell. " Anokhi said.

" Anokhi, I know you want to come and don't worry about badi mami. I will talk to her. " Arjun said.

" Don't worry Arjun. I will do it myself. " Anokhi assured him, " and yes I made chocolate milkshake. Do you want some?"

" Alright, that would be great. Along with some of your stories and my poetries. "

Anokhi nodded excitedly.



Shaurya looked at the mirror in his office and examined himself. No doubt he is handsome, but he is old too. Especially, a bit too much outdated for a young girl. Arjun and Anokhi . They were bonding so good. How they managed to know each other this much, this soon. And here he is, don't know anything about his wife even after four months of marriage. They are literally strangers. But ofcourse it's him who didn't try hard enough. She tried to please him in many ways, took care of him and what did he do? Nothing. But he could do something for her. Atleast she deserves this much......



" Hello Aastha, how are you?" Shaan asked entering the familiar coffee shop. This was same coffee shop, they used to visit every week when they were college students.

" Really Shaan? You are asking me this?" Aastha said. " How changed you are. "

" A lot has changed in this time. There is a lot to talk about ....."





This is for now.

Friends please support me and my story.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Oh my my i just finished reading the last chapter and got another new update 😍😍😍 you 😍😍😍😭😭😭 ajao idhar jhappi le jao!

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Originally posted by: mahiaana

Oh my my i just finished reading the last chapter and got another new update 😍😍😍 you 😍😍😍😭😭😭 ajao idhar jhappi le jao!

Dedo mujhe bahut jaroorat hai. Kesa laga chapter?

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Chapter 10

1) Shaurya frowned seeing her distressed face, looked like she was missing her mother very much. Poor girl. He started caressing her head softly and kissed her forehead. @bold1 :- ohmymy ladky ko thoda akal ayi pehli bar thora haq and pyaar jataya. 😍😍😍😍



2) " Don't worry, soon you will be with your family. " He whispered to her. @bold2 :- shauryaaaaa she's your wife ! Aise maat bolo yaar. Dude when ever he says something like this mera bp high hojata hein..matlab kuch garbar na kardy.

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By far 11th chapter is the best one! Finally shaurya is getting affected by anokhi! Jealousy sy hi shuru ho but shuru to hon! I hope woh usky liye juch achccha plan kary...dinner aur ghumne jana! Taki nikki usky saath bhi aise hasne khile laag jaye.. ..


Jealous shaurya is a absolute treat to watch and read but i want him to get more possessive and jealous shayed tabh usko akal aye!


Arjun is a good guy at least he is keeping nikki in peace. And i really hope he pushes his brother and bhabi a little so they could understand their relation and agey barey! Apnaye ek dusre ko!

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Originally posted by: RaarA

Chapter 11


Hello friends. I am a little dissapointed with your lack of feedbacks in the last chapter. Please give some more. It gives me encouragement.

Here we go......


Shaurya looked at his wife and Arjun and growled at their behaviour. It seems like Anokhi is enjoying Arjun's company a little too much. For god's sake they just met few week ago

" Anokhi. " He said a bit too loudly " please come with me and help me finding a important file. "

Both Anokhi and Arjun looked at him, confused with his sudden outburst.

" Chill bhai, why are so agitated? What's the matter?" Arjun asked.

" I have a important seminar and I want my file. Anokhi would you please?" Shaurya grimaced.

" Ji. Main dekhti hoon. " Anokhi answered.

" Bhai, don't be so hard on poor Nikki. Pehle badi Mami din bhar bechari se kaam karwati hai...." Arjun Said.

" Arjun it's okay. You wait a little. " Anokhi said.

" Bhaiya. " Shaurya said " he is your bhaiya, not Arjun. And Arjun she is your bhabhi not Anokhi. "

" We have only three years difference, bhai. We are young people and don't use such outdated words. We are friends. " Arjun replied.

" Yes we are friends. " Anokhi smiled.

" Anokhi. My. File. " Shaurya said loudly.



Anokhi sprinted towards the room and opened the cupboard and took out the file.

" Here it is. " Anokhi said and was about to walk out when Shaurya grabbed her hand and pulled her towards him.

" Why are you always avoiding my presence?" He asked pulling her towards him.

" I am not ........ I know I am a burden here. I know I am unwanted and I don't want to be a constant reminder in your life..... that I am a mistake. " Anokhi replied and freed herself from his grip and walked out.

Shaurya looked at her retreating form and sat down on the couch , " don't know why but I am used to you now. Your presence, your care and your warmth. In many years I never received this much care......"



Anokhi walked out towards the kitchen and started chopping vegetables all the while remembering Shaurya's question. I can't understand this man. A few days ago he was the one who was avoiding me, he was the one who rejected me and now he is asking this. What is wrong with him?


" Anokhiiiii. " Arjun shouted loudly.

" Huh. " Anokhi said " what happened? Why are you shouting?"

" Oh, so here I am talking to you about something very important and you are busy in your own little world. " Arjun complained.

" Sorry I was just thinking something....."

" About Shaurya bhaiya's behaviour. " Arjun concluded.

" How do you know?"

" Ofcourse I do. I know him, how he is. It's just his......."

" What?"

He leaned forward and whispered in her ear" jealousy. "

" Mr Sabharwal is jealous, but why?" Anokhi asked.

" Lots of reasons. " Arjun said.

" But......"

" Ufff leave it for now. I was telling you something important. You like to write and you are a literature lover right?"

" Mmhmm. "

" That's why I have something for you. There is a literary festival and I am invited there for seminars and workshops. I could take a partner with me and guess what who am I choosing?" Arjun asked.

" Your favourite, Shaurya bhaiya. " Anokhi answered teasing him.

" Now I am bhaiya. " Shaurya interrupted them.

" Noo I.....not..... like that. I was.... just teasing...him. " Anokhi stuttered.

" Bhai, this much jealousy is not good for health. " Arjun teased him.

Anokhi came forward and handed him his coffee " how could one drink this poison?" She whispered.

" I will be late tonight. " He said and smiled slightly at her words.

" What is wrong with him? Pehle bhi late ate the tab to inform nahi karte the. " Anokhi whispered to herself.

" Bhai, where is Anokhi's hug? Don't worry I am going give her your love. " Arjun said and started walking out.

" I am going. " Shaurya announced and sprinted out of the room.

" Arjun, please stop it now. You are so mean." Anokhi said barely hiding her blush.

" Am I? Alright, leave it for now. I am thinking about...... would you like to accompany me there? A lot of famous authors and poets will be there. " He asked.

" I don't know.....I have to ask badi ma about this. Then I will tell. " Anokhi said.

" Anokhi, I know you want to come and don't worry about badi mami. I will talk to her. " Arjun said.

" Don't worry Arjun. I will do it myself. " Anokhi assured him, " and yes I made chocolate milkshake. Do you want some?"

" Alright, that would be great. Along with some of your stories and my poetries. "

Anokhi nodded excitedly.



Shaurya looked at the mirror in his office and examined himself. No doubt he is handsome, but he is old too. Especially, a bit too much outdated for a young girl. Arjun and Anokhi . They were bonding so good. How they managed to know each other this much, this soon. And here he is, don't know anything about his wife even after four months of marriage. They are literally strangers. But ofcourse it's him who didn't try hard enough. She tried to please him in many ways, took care of him and what did he do? Nothing. But he could do something for her. Atleast she deserves this much......



" Hello Aastha, how are you?" Shaan asked entering the familiar coffee shop. This was same coffee shop, they used to visit every week when they were college students.

" Really Shaan? You are asking me this?" Aastha said. " How changed you are. "

" A lot has changed in this time. There is a lot to talk about ....."





This is for now.

Friends please support me and my story.

Thank you

uff khatam kyun hogayai am mad crazy

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: RaarA

Dedo mujhe bahut jaroorat hai. Kesa laga chapter?

*sending you virtual hugs and kisses* chapter was good..mainly the last chapter..finally shaurya ny kuch progress dikhaya react kiya!


Dont feel down because of lack of feedbacks or responses. shakhi scenes increase kardo dekhna feedbacks ki aag lagjayegi yeha! Plot to hein hi bohut interesting..bas shakhi scenes barah do! Mainly all readers are literally sucking and dying to get more and more shakhi either on screen or forum stories. (I'm sorry if i went beyond the line but just friendly suggest kardiya 😅😅😅 i know tumhari khudki ek plot hein kaise story ko agey lena hein)

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Originally posted by: chinnu_kaku

uff khatam kyun hogayai am mad crazy

Mujhe pata hein tujhko kya chahiye hota hein 🌚😌😂 ruk ja thori is story mein woh saab aney mein thora wakt laag jayega 😭😭😭😭 tab tak sabr beti sabr!

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Originally posted by: mahiaana

Mujhe pata hein tujhko kya chahiye hota hein 🌚😌😂 ruk ja thori is story mein woh saab aney mein thora wakt laag jayega 😭😭😭😭 tab tak sabr beti sabr!

🤣lekin too much boldness nahi..

its not about that alone yaar..i will give the same reaction for thrillers too...

how many of you have read books of enid blyton and mahadevi varmas short stories? i love short stories more than novels.

Then famous five..


whenever i read OS ,SS and ff i remember my childhood days yaar..😭 i really wanted to write an OS on shaadi mubaarak with no romance but a woman centric one..could never pen up one..


i would love to write an OS on #shaki with no romance but on relation which is purely based on trust,respect,and understanding...soulmates ka story. no physical attraction, who become one through their soulss..pata nahi kaisaey kahoon🤣 (not to be mistaken for horror)ya jungle mein thriller series with shaaki🤣.


Then comics too..Tinkel,chandamama,chacha chaudary...


when my kids start going to school i may sit down for writting as they will be having o line classes... tab tak show khatamna hojayaen🤣

Edited by chinnu_kaku - 5 years ago

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