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MUJHE MAAF KARDO 17.4
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Hey I read the first three chapters and I must say the plotline is very interesting.
Plus Anokhi and Shaurya seem very much in character so kudos for that! Whatever they did didn't feel outlandish for their characters so I'm so happy you could maintain the characters integrity.
One thing I would like to say, that make use of passive voice a bit more or try using the POV format. That makes reading more interesting.
he stopped her, " if you are not too busy then would you give me some company. " He asked hesitantly.
Anokhi looked at him with a bewildered expression, but soon composed herself and nodded. She sat down opposite him .
" Soo.....are you settling here just fine?" He asked slowly.
Anokhi nodded slightly , " yes..... all are very good here. "
" And dad..... hope he doesn't trouble you much, I mean he...."
" No that's not true. Papa ji bohot ache hai, he has been helping me to settle here a lot. Why would you call him troublesome?"
" Not like that. But there could be......" He stopped realising his thoughts.
" But what , Mr Sabharwal?" Anokhi asked puzzled by his thoughts. " Is this about your mother ?"
" None of your concern. " He responded sternly.
" I know there is something bothering you. Because I could see it....."
" There is no need for you to see anything. You are just a guest here , there is no need for you to know anything. " He snapped angrily.
" But these people are my family. " Anokhi said.
" They are my family not yours. Remember it you are only here for a limited time. "
" Alright. " She whispered and walked away as tears rolled down her cheeks.
Anokhi ran away there and reached the terrace , she sat down on the ground and cried her heart out.
@bold :- what is this behaviour shaurya! In this whole part I went like awww to wtf! I mean he himself stopped her asked her to accompany him and then he again went back into khadoos mood. Shaurya ki saad py marky koyi usme akal dalo.
Finally some kanchan gayatri. I love this duo in the actual serial. And was eagerly waiting for their scenes in this FF and how they bond up with anokhi. Poor kanchan seems like even she is not happy with her hubby.
Loved that he at least accepted that he did wrong even thoug in maan hi maa but still and even think about Apologising 🤦♀️but anokhi maaf na kare achccha hoga...rulaya hein bechari ko..tu bhi ro shaurya.
Anyway nice uodate. And please don't feel bad i don't know why this forum is like this koyi kuch bolta hi nahi hein bas parky chali jati hein.... But as long as I'm not busy with my exams and all i will keep coming back to catch the amazing works of the writers in here which includes you too. What an amazing writer you are 💗💗💗💗
Originally posted by: Ariyatogether
Awesome updt
Loved it
Loved Shaurya Anokhi's little scene♥️but he got angryToo much observation haan😆
Did Anokhi collided wid Aastha?
Cont soon
Thank you so much.
Have some patience to know more.
Originally posted by: mahiaana
he stopped her, " if you are not too busy then would you give me some company. " He asked hesitantly.
Anokhi looked at him with a bewildered expression, but soon composed herself and nodded. She sat down opposite him .
" Soo.....are you settling here just fine?" He asked slowly.
Anokhi nodded slightly , " yes..... all are very good here. "
" And dad..... hope he doesn't trouble you much, I mean he...."
" No that's not true. Papa ji bohot ache hai, he has been helping me to settle here a lot. Why would you call him troublesome?"
" Not like that. But there could be......" He stopped realising his thoughts.
" But what , Mr Sabharwal?" Anokhi asked puzzled by his thoughts. " Is this about your mother ?"
" None of your concern. " He responded sternly.
" I know there is something bothering you. Because I could see it....."
" There is no need for you to see anything. You are just a guest here , there is no need for you to know anything. " He snapped angrily.
" But these people are my family. " Anokhi said.
" They are my family not yours. Remember it you are only here for a limited time. "
" Alright. " She whispered and walked away as tears rolled down her cheeks.
Anokhi ran away there and reached the terrace , she sat down on the ground and cried her heart out.
@bold :- what is this behaviour shaurya! In this whole part I went like awww to wtf! I mean he himself stopped her asked her to accompany him and then he again went back into khadoos mood. Shaurya ki saad py marky koyi usme akal dalo.
Finally some kanchan gayatri. I love this duo in the actual serial. And was eagerly waiting for their scenes in this FF and how they bond up with anokhi. Poor kanchan seems like even she is not happy with her hubby.
Loved that he at least accepted that he did wrong even thoug in maan hi maa but still and even think about Apologising 🤦♀️but anokhi maaf na kare achccha hoga...rulaya hein bechari ko..tu bhi ro shaurya.
Anyway nice uodate. And please don't feel bad i don't know why this forum is like this koyi kuch bolta hi nahi hein bas parky chali jati hein.... But as long as I'm not busy with my exams and all i will keep coming back to catch the amazing works of the writers in here which includes you too. What an amazing writer you are 💗💗💗💗
Thank you so much for all your love and support. You are the best .
And ofcourse I too love Kanchan and Gayatri a lot and there will be a lot of bonding between them in future.
Wait and watch how story unfolds.
Seher Hone Ko Hai
Anupamaa
