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Posted: 5 years ago
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Chapter 3

Jalal turned and looked at Jodha, for few seconds he even forgot to blink his eyes, and Jodha was in shock she couldn't believe it was this same guy whom she saw in her dreams, their eyes were glued on eachother... Jodha didn't know how she got to see Jalal in her dream that too without even knowing who he was, she was lost in her thoughts she kept looking into his face, he looked very very handsome, she was equally beautiful to Jalal; guys were always behind her but her heart didn't melt for anyone but today she felt like her heart found the one for her.

After looking at Jodha's face for few seconds, Jalal threw an attitude like "she is nothing great", but though Jodha was looking at his face she didn't notice his reaction, she was lost in her thoughts... Moti shook Jodha, she looked at Moti and Moti said did I not tell you he is very smart, looks like you are lost in his charm, Jodha said nothing as such and stood up to walk, Hema asked where are you going Jodha? She said I will be right back, I'm going to washroom and walked away from there.

Jodha's mind was again and again thinking about Jalal and her dream. She was so confused about her dream... She went to the washroom and was going back to her friends who were in the canteen, and a guy stopped her way, she looked at his face, he was the same guy who stopped them on the very 1st day to college; I am your senior, if you do whatever I say then you can go from here, Jodha looked at him blankly... He pointed his finger towards Adham and said look there, the guy in "Red and Black t shirt" you should go say "I love you" to him... No I can't said Jodha, ok then say I love you to your history professor, he said... What? Asked Jodha, yes choice is yours and it is just for fun he said; Jodha thought for a while, she knew Adham so she decided to say I love you to him so that she can immediately make him understand that she was asked to do so.

Jodha agreed and walked towards him, Adham was standing alone fiddling his phone, as Jodha walked close to Adham from no where Jalal came and stood beside him, he put his hands around Adham's shoulders and said why are you standing alone here? Nothing you go I will come in sometime said Adham by then Jodha came stood in front of them, they both looked at her and she looked deep into Jalal's eyes and said "I love you." They both were in shock, Adham looked disappointed and Jalal didn't know how to react, while Jodha walked away immediately, the guy who asked Jodha to propose Adham came to them laughing, an angry Adham yelled at him, what did I say and what have u done you dumb; his friend laughed saying hare I clearly said "red and black t shirt I think she misunderstood it as "Red t-shirt and black pant", who asked u to come in between Adham showed his frustration on Jalal, but Jalal didn't understand what was going on? He still didn't come out of the shock with Jodha's proposal, when his friend told him about how he and Adham planned to rag Jodha and it turned out to be a flop show, Jalal walked away without saying or reacting for the same.

On the other side, Jodha went back to her friends but she did not tell them about the ragging, all she thought was she agreed to propose Adham because she knew him and she can explain to him, that she was asked to do so but she wondered what made her say "I love you" to Jalal.

She decided to talk to Jalal and tell him that she proposed to him as part of ragging. In the evening after the last class, Jodha saw Jalal walking alone she told her friends I will go to the library and come back, she ran towards Jalal and call out his name only once, and he immediately turned he saw her running towards him so he stopped there waiting for her to reach him; Jodha reached him and said actually I proposed you because but Jalal showed his palm to her and said proposal from girls are not new to me and he walked away.

To be continued...

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Posted: 5 years ago
#22

Amazing 🤩

Please update lengthy chapters 🥺

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Posted: 5 years ago
#23

Oh seems Jo has a crush on Jalal and Jalal has no interest at her 😳. fate showed her a dream... Let's see how story continues

Awesome part.

Thx for pm

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Posted: 5 years ago
#24

Welcome to India forum,

Nice story,

pm me when you update next part.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#25

Amazing chapter didi 💖

But why is jalal showing so much attitude😡

Not liking it

But if it is not there then there will be no interest in the story so it is accepted 😅😅

But please write long chapters also didi

Thx for pm 🙂

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Posted: 5 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: MahiraSingh3030

Amazing 🤩

Please update lengthy chapters 🥺

I shall try, little busy with the other stories dear.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Soso70

Oh seems Jo has a crush on Jalal and Jalal has no interest at her 😳. fate showed her a dream... Let's see how story continues

Awesome part.

Thx for pm


Thank u for d wonderful feedback. U can expect a twist in d story very soon.😆

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Posted: 5 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: divyaJA

Welcome to India forum,

Nice story,

pm me when you update next part.


Thank u Divya❤️

Sure, I will do that👍🏼

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Posted: 5 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: SayaniSharma

Amazing chapter didi 💖

But why is jalal showing so much attitude😡

Not liking it

But if it is not there then there will be no interest in the story so it is accepted 😅😅

But please write long chapters also didi

Thx for pm 🙂


Thank u for the feedback Sayani, that encourages me to keep writing❤️

You can expect twist in d story very soon n I'm sure u will enjoy reading.

I will try to write long.👍🏼

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Posted: 5 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: J6705

I shall try, little busy with the other stories dear.

Have you updated the FB one ?

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