Sampatra/ Sairat FF- Najwa (Heartburn). Chapter 11 UPDATED on page 18 - Page 7

Lovely update!!

Waiting for their spast conversation..

Continue soon... Happy writing!!

Virat ki jalebiya kabhi khatam nahi hoti. He has a never ending stock

Wow this is what you call talent!! I like your Pakhi version better .. thats how she is meant to be .. a true friend to Virat ( with respect, modesty and no intimate thoughts) .. the fans would embrace her more than she could ever imagine, on screen and off. Thank you for that ✌🏽

SaiRatlicious update...

Uff love is in the air

Haayee

Kya possesiveness hai navre ki

Dekhte hi baiko ko flat ho gya

The payal pehnana scene was so intense and of course the beat line was koi churake le gya to..??

Haaye so romantic

Loved it

The start was the best but my heart ached for Pakhi and Bhavani. It was raw and wrenching 😭

It is sad that Pakhi has reached her limit and has stopped at the end. It is true though, the road to move on alone, ends at a place and Pakhi is already there. 🥺

Amazingly written Babe! I loved it!

This was just awesome

Loved it

Iam just loving this pakhi 😆

U just penned the scenes so well

Waiting for next update 🙂

Awesome update. I hope happiness would come soon in pakhi life.

This chapter is so beautiful and heart touching. I even felt sorry for both Pakhi and kaku. They were turned into who they were by circumstances and that's so sad.

An awesome update dear author!!🤩👍🏻 Looking forward to the next update ❤

Omg your writing made me tearful coz of Pakhi 😭 .. She is also human and needs to be loved. Perhaps if the series could focus on her alone ( her life, her emotions her feelings, her thoughts, her pain, her plans) for the whole day .. the audience might empathise 😬 this was wonderful but my heart is set on Sairat😂 thanks 🙏

Just love girl..... the way you put across the thoughts of Pakhi n kaku is amazing!!!

Continue soon!!! Getting greedy for samrat to return n Pakhi also get her share of companionship n even love!!!

Happy writing!! ❤️❤️