Story of the Decade | Chapter 13 by Bhavisweet03 | Pg 51 - Page 17

Originally posted by: canapoem

Nice update.

In this chapter, the one aspect which stood out for me was Khushi's survival instincts. Even in that stressful situation, she wrote the note to Payal not to disclose anything about her to the family and destroy the note. She also did not reveal anything to Arnav even when he asked her. For her the top most priority was to escape before Shyam saw her and to make sure that he would not find out about her presence there at any cost.

Khushi is a fighter and loved this spirit of hers.

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Yes Khushi is a fighter and is quick to make sure she left no traces of her presence and also give Payal a hint about the gravity of the situation.

Originally posted by: jyothirockz

Thank God Arnav is around, hope he can enquire all the details about Khushi, her innocence and the monster Shyam has been to her...

Thank you Jyoti for the comment.

Originally posted by: Unique.Sheep

So finally Khushi and Arnav had an actual conversation...looking forward to see more of their scenes together and how they heal each other

Hope Arnav believes her and continues to protect her. Looking forward to the confrontation between Shyam and Arnav.

Loved the flashback scene.

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Originally posted by: Just-do-it

Just read all the chapters and really liked the different layers that each of the authors have created for the story and characters!

It is also very good to read about an Arnav who doesn’t use his difficult past as an excuse for rudeness. So far despite the brooding image if his character, he’s been really good to Khushi even though he was skeptic in the beginning.

As for Khushi, she really is a survivor. It’s surprising how after all that she’s been through she still has so much trust left in her. I’m sure Arnav is going to be the one to tell her that she can’t run forever. And she will stop running when she has a solid support which I hope Arnav gives her even after knowing the reality of who she’s running from.

Thumbs up to all the four authors so far. Can’t wait to see what the next author has in store for us and see these two troubled souls find solace in one another.

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Khushi doesn't trust him but she had no choice but to go along with Arnav. A girl who has been through physical and mental trauma thanks to the betrayal from her own family won't trust anyone just like that.

Why Arnav helped her going out of his way for a stranger he doesn't trust will only be known as the story unfolds.

Originally posted by: Just-do-it

Forgot to add. I really wished the chapters were a tad bit longer! Wanted to read so much more.

Thank you for the comment. Yes I'd have liked if the Chapter was longer too but we have to go with the flow of the story as every writer brings their own creativity to each chapter. 🤗

Originally posted by: Mysticaldivine

This is some work from all of you,

I won't say who is good as this is a unanimous effort of all and it is going smooth.

A gripping storyline and you have many twists and turns. Let's see how you sail through it.

Thank you for the comment Faiqa. It's means a lot coming from senior writer like you who have been giving us such amazing stories and analysis over the years. 🤗

Originally posted by: ark17

Thank God Khushi is safe and with Arnav.

Beautiful progression of the story, every character is so beautifully etched. Last chapter was like sitting at the end of the chair while watching a mystery...Will shyam see her?? And then??

But now knowing she is in the next pair of safe hands, the first being Payal's, waiting to see how Arnav and khushi start their journey......

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Originally posted by: Pinnkiswan

That B#&$ Shyam, sweet smile after ruining poor Khushi's life. I am so hurt to know her trauma, her constant nightmares, her damage. She was so fragile and the way you described it was just awesome yaar❤❤❤❤

Everything from the rides to the aftermath... lovely👍🏼

And the way Arnav was feeling with her. He seems to be already healing under her. The sound sleep and all😄❤. Also he helped her...took a day off the office just for her, flied to Nainital, tried to talk to her, helped her in nightmares, even if his Di was there on visit....wow finally he cared more of Khushi 😛

And Payal too cared for her...like the smooth talk between her and Arnav. Both cared for Khushi already😁

Maybe Arnav will soon know what was the matter. Or maybe we can also know what exactly Shyam did. ASR is on misiion😁❤

Will be waiting to know😗😗😗

Well done...and quite twisted chapter with the sudden flee of Khushi...there is interesting turn in it.... from Payal now Arnav is her saviour😄🤗

Overall Lovely Chapter 😉

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Khushi doesn't trust him but she had no choice but to go along with Arnav. A girl who has been through physical and mental trauma thanks to the betrayal from her own family won't trust anyone just like that.

Why Arnav helped her going out of his way for a stranger he doesn't trust will only be known as the story unfolds.

Originally posted by: beingaditij

Great work done Radhika. It's pleasure to read this.

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Originally posted by: shiv456

Hope he believes her awesome

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He may or he may not. Let's wait for the story to unfold 😉