Sukoon | OS - Page 2

Girl I loved it.! The light hearted scene, their feelings etched perfectly.

Please do write more.

You are exceptional👏

Really... You write so well and express every emotion so perfectly, that I actually felt the ache Virat was feeling, and had tears in my eyes while feeling the guilt Sai was feeling

I absolutely love your stories ❤️

Please write more and more🤗

You have written so well. Loved it. I always had a feeling that it will be Virat who will fight with his feelings since Sayi is still unaware of what she feels for him. I hope to see something like this in the show.

Awesome .....beautifully written ❤

What an exceptional writer you are. My face is wet. My heart hurts. But I am smiling. Thank you for sharing this with us.

Aww..this was beautiful!

Both their emotions were so well portrayed. Sais innocence, curiosity, eagerness to learn about love and Virats angst and fighting himself to not show his feelings because he doesn’t want to confront those emotions maybe but still being to acknowledge to himself that he’s in love with Sai....beautiful.

Please keep writing. Eagerly look forward to reading lots more OSs

Really good read. I like how everything is held back but just about. Enjoyed reading.

What is this writing....!!⭐️ I am in absolute awe! I.. I could taste the restraint. In Virat. The ache and longing. Full bodied. His emotions rising and rising and swirling around just beneath in his abyss of yearning. And you wrote their push pull so well. The Virat you have written, so full of angst yet holding himself together behind this facade.. Snorting while thinking about insipid Aniket😆. The command to her to ask even though it means a slow death for him😭. Even in the show there's these moments where Virat does this quiet command thing that Sai responds to instinctively. And your writing in the final scene on the windowsill is sheer brilliance. The he wanted three freaking times that almost pushed me over the edge. His need to stain her as she him. All of it..There's something about the characters, the actors, something..that makes you feel like Sai and Virat have that Charlotte Brontë esque string under the left ribs, chord of communion thing. And, truly, as you said I too want Virat to realise first since he is the one who built the boundaries. He deserves to wallow in it for one infinity. But I also think Sai would be as in the depths as him but trying to be resilient and fight her way up without ever letting on.

Another well thought of piece by you👏

I loved this concept of yours. would love to see something like this on the show....

Creatives on the show are not creative at all...always the same old drama and plots.

Kudos to you for this lovely work.

Heartwarming....

You have very beautifully written Virat's ache for her love and Sai's determination to give his peace back by leaving, obvious that his definition of peace is her....

There is so much longing and pain.....

Your writing is soooo good....

My sincere request is.....if possible please write one shot on their confession in continuation of this....probably at the time of her leaving......