Originally posted by: vallu123
His revenge was not out of character in my opinion ...whatever he said in intial episodes he did that....the problem is not with character sketch n arc...it is with the whole story...see in writing the story has to progress in multiple fronts. It has to be tight n gripping...with no room for plot holes n errors...n most important is closure...which we could not see for past 50 episodes in immj 2...
Writer is clueless..he gets the core n essence of riansh correct...but the story doesn't do justice...
For eg for any viewer ridz is someone with biggest double standard...without knowing vansh he declared him murder..she was dreaming about ragini begging n crying...n now after kabir's proud confession ..she isn't doing anything..like as if ragini never existed
Second ex is vansh...with ridz is revenge would be extreme that we knew but aryan n kabir going off his radar doesn't make sense..
That is because writer is some where failing in developing story at multiple fronts...can't create various dynamics which are necessary for a story...
@bold-I agree with you...as a writer he needs to work on multi fronts in the story in which writer is failing due to which overall outcome comes very bizzare and as an audience you loose connection.
I understand your POV,revenge and extremeness from Vansh character both are justified but due to writing it came out as very hypocritic and cheap...they failed in execution.
Still Rrahul manages I must say,he is the reason somewhere people connect with Vansh becoz on writing basis it was completely missing.
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