OS: Of Realizations and Reconciliation - Page 2

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Another awesome short and sweet story by you . How well you recreated that one famous airport scene where kushi was struggling to give herself a clean chit about her and Shyam’s relation and that dense headed Arnav was acting like Asr at the airport who refused to believe her and walked away heavy hearted.

He wanted to believe kushi but didn’t his mind did not agree to do so because of his anger. But when he began to miss her in the solitude of the hotel room he tried to put the missing pieces of the puzzle together and then his detective brain made him find the right answers and found that his kushi was and is innocent that realization made him pack his bags and rush back to RM.

Lovely it was too good.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: ssttuuttii

It was a sweet reconciliation 😳.

Like you said, all Arnav needed was time to think and being away from Shyam and Khushi helped him clear his mind. I think the Gupta house track in actual show does a bit similar thing where being away from Shyam helps in making him see Khushi's innocent and child-like behavior for what it is. But just as starts to soften up, the gift wrapping paper ruins things .


I'm glad that here nothing like that happened and he figured things out himself. Khushi being true to her nature, forgives him without him even asking.

Cute OS. Keep writing more 😳.


Love,

Stuti


Thanks a lot Stuti. I kinda wanted him to figure it out himself. The guy was constantly hounded by Khushi's antics or Shyam's vileness in the show, leaving no space for him to think and figure things out. Will keep the flow up by writing a few more OSs before I entirely get back into my flow😳.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: coderlady

Nice. He should have hired that investigator long ago.


Thanks🤗. Yes I agree he should have done it the moment he found out about him

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: PriyaArshiSarun

Beautiful and thoughtful OS 🥳


Thanks a lot Priya🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Savera84

Wonderful OS! Yes, there are so many moments, where he could have realized there is something wrong or things are not adding up.

This is a fresh revelation. She said she was engaged to Shyam and he simply discarded her claim as a made up story.

You are so right. He needed some time away from home. Whenever he got a doubt, they were squashed by the constant interference from family or Shyam's timely interventions.

I can't deny the fact that if we want more episodes, the interference is necessary too!

This OS was just perfect. Their reaction after he returned was so well narrated. Loved it.

Now that you are out of your writer's block, would love to catch up on the ongoing stories of yours.

Cheers.......



Thanks a lot Raji🤗. Arnav discarded almost everything she said on the bridge. He didn't want to believe anything other than what he saw on the terrace that night.


I agree the interferences gave us a lot of episodes😆.


Will try to get back to them as soon as I can😳

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bhavisweet03

Such an impressive OS. It was a sweet cute story.

The realization track was quite good. Over all I liked that no one interfere between them, Specially that shyam. Arnav himself realized his mistake and accepted also.

Loved their reconciliation how beautifully you have described it. 🤗❤️


Keep writing dear Aboli🤗


Thanks Bhavi🤗. Yes, it was a matter that was between them and needed to be sorted out between them.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShiriFictionPen

Amazing OS!

The reconciliation part was so cute ❤


Keep writing 🤗


Thanks a lot Shiri🤗. And the chapter of Story of the Decade was amazing❤️.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: abivicky86

Another awesome short and sweet story by you . How well you recreated that one famous airport scene where kushi was struggling to give herself a clean chit about her and Shyam’s relation and that dense headed Arnav was acting like Asr at the airport who refused to believe her and walked away heavy hearted.

He wanted to believe kushi but didn’t his mind did not agree to do so because of his anger. But when he began to miss her in the solitude of the hotel room he tried to put the missing pieces of the puzzle together and then his detective brain made him find the right answers and found that his kushi was and is innocent that realization made him pack his bags and rush back to RM.

Lovely it was too good.


Thanks a lot dear🤗. Sometimes all you need is solitude to get your thoughts together. I agree Arnav was dense headed at times inspite of having a shaatir dimaag😆.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Thanks a lot dear🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
#20

Nice OS👍🏼Loved the reconciliation part😳

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