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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: SayaniSharma

Amazing chapter didi chapter 14

Loved it whole ๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’“

Toh abhi jalal ka mission hai uske village girl ko puri achi tarah se jaanaa โ˜บ๏ธ

Omg the great jalal has become a kiss stealer ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

Chalo ab mission knowing my village girl start kiya jaye

When jalal said na my village girl I was like uff โ˜บ๏ธ

Continue it soon ๐Ÿ™‚

Thank you sweety๐Ÿ˜

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: ParijatGirl

Thank you sweety๐Ÿ˜

Didi update kitna baje tak aayega??

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: SayaniSharma

Didi update kitna baje tak aayega??

india ke time se 5-6 ke beech mein

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: ParijatGirl

I will update today๐Ÿ˜‰

Waiting๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Mango_1

Waiting๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Me toooooooooo ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Edited by SayaniSharma - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

CHAPTER 15



"hello ... are you all right ???" jalal kept looking at jodha. "jalaaaaal.."

"hey .... why are you screaming.. I'm not deaf??"

"I've been calling you but you're silent !!! why are you not going to work??? just start to work and already in leave!!! where is your dedication to the company ??"

"Ohhh god... early in the morning, don't be noisy !!! What will your neighbors say if they hear you screaming at your husband !! Are you not ashamed if they think you're a crazy wife !!"

"What?!?! You said I am crazy?!?! How can I am not crazy if you act all by yourself !!!" jalal just ignores jodha's scolding. He leaves jodha and went towards the dining table.

"Where's my coffee ..?!?" said jalal coolly while sitting at the dining table, while jodha didnt stop her lecture. "Hi moti... happy to see you... you look so beautiful." jalal greets moti when she brings breakfast to the dining table, suddenly jalal's words make moti and jodha look at jalal in disbelief.

"You're really rude !!! How can you flirt with other women in front of your wife......" Jodha again start her scolding lecture, while jalal ignore jodha's scolding.

"Sorry moti last night I did not introduce myself well to you because it was late, so my name is Jalalludin Akbar... just call me jalal, DOCTOR JODHA'S husband" said jalal.

"I'm moti." they start their light conversation which makes jodha feel annoyed at feeling neglected by them.

"Hmm ... Moti, can you show me where is the kitchen?."

"what do you want jalal?"

"I'm unwanted husband of my wife, she doesn't even want to make me coffee." while glancing at jodha who is getting annoyed because of jalal.

"Oh ... poor you jalal, if your wife doesn't want to, let me just make it for you." said moti while glancing at jodha.

"I will make coffee!!!!" said jodha curtly as she walked away to make jalal coffee.

"thanks sweetheart." jalal teases.

"I'm not your sweetheart !!!" jodha replied irritably. moti and jalal can't help laughing seeing jodha's annoy face.

*********

Jodha's day was quite busy, after checking to one of the residents who give birth, she also gave health counseling at the village hall which was attended by all villagers. they are so enthusiastic to hear explanations from jodha, especially men, often they ask random questions just to get attention from beautiful doctor, this made jalal really annoyed, that day jalal accompanied jodha to work, following his wife wherever she went he received alots of compliments from ladies who were fascinated by his good looks. Sometimes, jalal also received strange question from few ladies, but he manage to answer them politely. jodha watches jalal from far and she was amazed by his patience with his fans. It was dusk when they finished their activities for the day. they walk to home through the rice fields.

jalal walks by holding jodha's hand, while the other hand is carrying jodha bag and stuffs, they chat with each other joking, sometimes interrupted by unimportant arguments but what they don't realize these things bringing them closer. when they were busy joking suddenly jodha accidentally fell into a muddy ponf which made her body full of mud. it makes jodha scream hysterically and jalal laugh so hard seeing the state of jodha.

"aaaaahhh ... why are you laughing?!?! hurry up and help me to stand up !!!"

"hahaha ..., let me help you up." Jodha is annoyed at jalal, so as a revenge, she pull jalal's hand tightly which he reaches out trying to help jodha. In the end, both were look like 2 ducks playing with mud.

jodha laughs loudly because she successfully made jalal's fate equal to her. and they laugh out loud together. the farmers who were looking at them and crossed them could only shake their heads at their behavior. They found a tap near the field and both wash themselves. the sun start to setting down. for some reason jodha's heart was so happy, jalal's grip on her gave warmth to her heart. They walked silently enjoying every moment of their togetherness, but suddenly jodha was surprised when Jalal suddenly pulled herself in his arms and without any warning Jalal captured her lips with his. Jodha is only able to stare in shock at what jalal is doing ... at first jalal wait for a response from jodha but jodha remain silent, jalal gives jodha a small bite on her lips, it made jodha shiver in pleasure, then jalal continues his action by tracing each curve Jodha's lips with his tongue, this made jodha lose her mind, jodha finally can no longer hold herself. She responds to jalal's kiss by opening her mouth slightly and jalal insert his tongue in her mouth explore her sweet mouth. jalal's hands caressing jodha's waist while jodha's fingers have slipped between jalal's hair.

they were moaning and didn't care about their surroundings, as if they were in another world. jodha broke the kisses as she need air to breath.

"We better go home now. If someone sees what we did just now we might be taken to the police station on charges of committing obscenity in a public place." jalal said as he start to walk while holding jodha's hand. while jodha is couldnt able to say anything she just bowed her head hiding her blushing face with shame.

*********

moti is so surprised to see the condition of jodha jalal.

"Oh my God ... what has happened to you both? Why are your clothes full of mud ?!?" asked Moti full of worry.

"My wife was in the mood for a mud bath. So this is how we end up," said Jalal chuckling who got a annoyed gaze from jodha.

"Alright ... now clean yourself first, I'll prepare dinner." said Moti as she went to the kitchen. but when jodha was about to leave jalal held her. and whispered in jodha's ear.

"thanks for today, I love it." while touching jodha's lips with his thumb and walked away without waiting for reaction from jodha. Jodha just stood there, feeling her face burning with shame.

"oh ... God what have I done ??? how can I lose my control and kiss him back." jodha mind is confused about what happened to her. It's been a long time since she broke up with her fiance, she never lose her control to any men not even with her fiance. but somehow jalal's kiss was able to make her lose control.

"This shoukd not happen again." jodha determination in heart. While jalal was so happy to get the first passionate kiss from Jodha, a satisfied smile did not disappear from his lips. he's like a teenager who just got his first kiss from his girlfriend.

"it was so sweet and passionate." jalal said to himself while holding his lips feeling jodha's response on his lips.

"He's really intoxicating ... !!! I don't know if I can control myself not to kiss him again. Thought jodha to herself.

After cleaning themselves, they had dinner together in an awkward atmosphere, Moti who realized something had happened between them tried to break the ice.

"Are you staying here again tonight?"

"NO/YES" replied jodha and jalal in unison, making moti even more confused.

"I have an important meeting tomorrow, so I have to go home tonight."

"I'm staying here, because tomorrow there is a visiting work for village people." jodha said making jalal surprised.

"alright ... be careful and come home when it's finish." replied jalal.

"I will."

*****

"dad ... mom ... thanks for married me to jodha. My jodha is my angel"

*******

FORGIVE ME FOR SPELLING AND GRAMMATICAL MISTAKES..

THANK YOUUU...๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ’•

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: MahiraSingh3030

india ke time se 5-6 ke beech mein

Did i update on correct time as you mention??๐Ÿ˜

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Posted: 5 years ago

Awesome chappy

Annoyed jo

Kissing kissing

My jodha my angel ๐Ÿ‘

Update soon

Thanks for Pm

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Posted: 5 years ago

Omg omg omg!!! Such a fantabulous update

Loved their cute nok jhok and the kissing part was amazing..I am still blushing!

Mud bath๐Ÿคฃ 'my angel' oh god jalal referring his wife as his angel and thanking his parentsโค๏ธ just want to see that successful businessman in jalal as he has that strong essence around him to make everyone awestruck...will be waiting till he actually becomes one๐Ÿ˜ณ loved the update left me awestruck ๐Ÿ˜‰

Just have one doubt has jalal seen jodha's real face๐Ÿค”

Update soon๐Ÿ˜›

Take careโค๏ธ

Regards,

Ananya

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Posted: 5 years ago

great chapter ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜, loved it sweety ๐Ÿ’–

Their teasing is beautiful ๐Ÿ˜†

Now Jalal seen the work of doctor Jodha. The mud bath scene was funny ๐Ÿคฃ. And then their kiss ... Both could not hold back. After that Jodha cursed herself for loosing control.

Both are attracted by each other. I'm excited how it's going on and what happens when Surya comes into play. Not to forget Ruks. She will certainly cause trouble

Precap sounds interesting "my Jodha, my angel

Thanks for update and pm little sis ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ˜˜

Waiting for next part

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