PRICE OF BETRAYAL Updated on page3 - Page 2

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Please continue this. Amazing.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#12

Awesome do continue its really interesting

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Posted: 5 years ago
#13

Continue, please. Vansh should suffer a lot. And the VR housemates should all suffer too.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Part 2

Vansh: yeh mujhe kya hogaya, Riddhima mujhse anjaane mein gunah ho gaya. Maine jaan bhoojkar kuch nahi kiya.

Riddhima: mujhse bhi sab anjaane mein hua tha, maanti hoon ki Kabir ke kehne par tumhari zindagi mein ayi thi. Haan Kabir mera pehla pyaar tha. Pehle pyaar ke liye bahaut si baatein kahin gayi hai, poems likhi gayi hai, par log yeh kehna bhool gaye, ki yeh zaroori nahin hai ki pehla pyaar sahi insaan se ho, galat insaan agar pehla pyar bankar aye toh woh sirf ek kadvi yaad bankar rehta hai. Jaise mere liye Kabir aur tumhare liye Raagini.

Tumne kabhi mujhe jelous hote hue dekha tumhare past se?, toh tum kyun hue?Main batati hoon kyu,? tumne pyaar ka matalab jaana hi nahin, tumhare liye pyaar haasil karne ka naam hai, haq jatane ka naam hai, mere liye pyaar dene ka naam hai.

Jab ehsaas hua ki mai galat hoon toh sab batana chahti thi, par tumne mujhme aur Kabir mein Kabir ke sach ko chuna.

Vansh: tum sahi ho, par main ek mauka maang raha hoon. Aaj main tumse keh raha hoon jo keemat magogi pyaar ki main dunga.

Riddhima: dekho na vansh kis mod pe kade hai hum, ek waqt tha jab mai tumhare pyaar ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti thi, ab tum meri jagah ho, puraani Riddhima ke liye rishte aur pyaar sabse important the, par ab nahi. Tum chahte ho ki main waapas aa jau toh meri kuch demands hai.

Pehle humare relationship ke rules tumne set kiye the ab main karungi. Vansh tumahre saamne ek nayi Riddhima hai jo emotional fool nahin hai, ab mujhe sirf pyaar nahin chahiye, power chahiye, Mrs VRS hone ka power, tumhare business ki signing authority main banugi, tumhare ghar ka power dynamic change hoga, uss ghar mein tumhare barabar ki authority chahiye, ab mujhe pyaar se zyaada respect chahiye.

Tumhare ghar walo ko main apne hisaab se rakhungi, tum mujhse unke saamne koi sawaal nahi karoge, tum ab sirf meri dhaal banoge, unhe mujhse protect nahi karoge.

Vansh: tumhe kya hogaya hai Riddhima?? Par tumahre badalne ki wajah mein hoon.

Thik hai tum jo kahogi main woh karunga,. Aaj se tum mere empire ki signing authority ho. Sab tumhare hisaab se hoga.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Riddhima rocked😎


Nice chapter👏

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Posted: 5 years ago
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It was nice....

But I don't want her to forgive them anytime soon....sab ko sabak sikana...👍🏼

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Posted: 5 years ago
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I like how she wants respect more than love now. This is how it should be. Respect is more important than some fictional love.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#18

Riddhima chha gayi.. Vansh baba shocked.

Loved the demands placed by Ridz..

She is going to make Vansh taste his own medicine.

But,still i could feel that Ridz who was soft spoken and caring,loving.

I hope Daadi and Sia are there...

Continue soooooonish.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Yess! Loved it please continue this you should honestly turn it into a short story!

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Posted: 5 years ago
#20

Very nice update👍🏼

Riddhima has finally changed for her own good

Would love to see her teaching them a lesson

Do continue

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