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Posted: 5 years ago
#21

It seems that Jeev is asking Mishti to do what she never did till her marriage. Anand & Bela appreciated Mishti's cooking. Sad that Mishti is unable to understand that Jeev is trying to make Mishti a better person. Annand & Bela overheard Mishti's hurtful words towards Jeev. The ff seems to be interesting.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#22

Yes I am doing good.Thank u so much.Same to u


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hi hope you are well.

Happy New Year.... All the best

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Thank u very much




Ae mere dil...Oh my heart... Part 5

After some days Mishti really lost her cool and yelled at Jeev.

Mishti:I did everything you wanted.Now you might be sure that till death you will get a comfortable life here.Still why are you not signing the papers?You are so selfish that you don’t care about me.It’s good that you are going to die.It’s because of your selfish nature that God gave you an illness which will take your life soon.

Jeev’s heart got pierced.

Mishti:I guess you forgot why I married a dying patient like you.I married you only to get your signature so that I can have power over my properties.I married a cancer patient like you so that you will leave my life soon and I can enjoy my life all alone.For that I did everything you said.

To their shock Anand-Bela were standing near the door.They had overheard everything.

Anand:What were you saying?

Jeev and Mishti were silent.

Anand:Tell me..what we heard is true?You guys were fooling us?

Jeev-Mishti were silent.

Anand-Bela were shattered.

Anand:So whatever change you showed recently was your pretence. But we were foolish to believe it.

Anand-Bela wept.Seeing that unknowingly Mishti became upset.

Anand:We feel ashamed of ourselves for not being able to bring you up well.

Bela:Anandji,there is no need of saying anything.She won’t understand anything.

Jeev:Please you both stop scolding Mishti.Mishti deserves her property.

Jeev took the papers and signed them.

Jeev:Keep them with you Mishti.I am leaving this house as my role in your life is over.

Mishti was shocked as she did not expect Jeev to take a sudden decision to leave the house.

Jeev:You spent money for my stay here.Right?I don’t want your favour anymore.My small savings is enough to pay it back to you.

He took a cheque and signed it after writing the amount there.He gave it to Mishti.

Jeev:Keep it with you.

She was stunned as she never expected him to do it.

Jeev packed the bag and walked towards the door.

Anand-Bela looked at him painfully.

Anand:I am not stopping you from going as you deserve better.I am not sympathizing you for your illness.Because compared to the terrible life you were leading here even illness and death are nothing.

Bela:But we will miss you.

Jeev looked at them tearfully.

Jeev:I will also miss you both.An orphan like me got maximum love from you both.I can never forget that.Thank you so much for that.

Anand-Bela cried.

Mishti was staring at Jeev.She did not know what she was undergoing.

Jeev:Thank you Mishti for fulfilling my wishes.

Mishti was stunned.

Jeev:Good bye.

He left the house.

Anand stared at Mishti:Jeev is such a nice boy.But you were so heartless to use him.You married him only to wait for his death.How could you be so heartless?

Mishti became upset.

Anand:You know why agreed to get you married to Jeev?

Mishti was silent.

Anand:Remember ..I had talked to Jeev personally when you brought him home.

Flash back…

Anand:Do you really love Mishti?

Jeev:Yes Uncle.I really love Mishti.

Anand:Do you really want to marry her?

Jeev:Yes.I want to marry her.

Anand:Any boy will get attracted towards a pretty girl.It’s easy to say I love you to her.But that’s a bubble which can break at any time.When you enter the real life ie married life it’s not easy.Only if you accept a person as he/she is and love the soul of that person the married life will have depth.Do you know the real personality of Mishti?Did you love her and decide to marry her only after knowing her truly or you took this decision by seeing her externally?

Jeev:I fell in love with her without knowing her personally.But now I know her very well.Still I love her very much.

Anand asked him in a sarcastic tone:Really you know her?Are you serious?

Jeev:Yes..I know her very well.She is not at all like other gils.She is selfish,greedy,proud,arrogant,greedy..She does’nt have any feelings for others.She does’nt even respect elders.Still my love for her did not change.I realized how much I love her.That’s why I decided to marry her.

Anand-Bela were surprised.They smiled.

Anand:Mishti might do many things which may be not likable to you.But please never leave her hand.

Jeev:Please don’t worry.I promise you that I will not change my word and will love her till the end of my life.

Anand-Bela became very happy.

Anand patted his shoulder.

Anand:You are the man we dreamt of for Mishti.But I never ever thought that Mishti will get such a nice boy.She is lucky to have a loving boy like you.

Jeev smiled and hugged Anand happily.

Present…

Mishti was stunned to hear it.

She thought:What?Jeev loves me?

Anand:Jeev loved you with all your defects.Still you hurt him every day.

Bela:How can you hurt the person who loves you unconditionally like the way you are?

Mishti became very upset.She herself did not understand what she was feeling that moment.

Anand looked at Bela:Why are you asking this question to her Bela?Only those who have heart can understand all this.

Mishti became upset.

Mishti thought:Does Jeev really love me or was he lying to Anand uncle and Bela aunty?

Anand-Bela packed their luggage and came out of their room.

Anand:You wanted to enjoy alone without any burden.Right?We know that we are the biggest hurdles in your life.So we are leaving.You enjoy alone.You live your life as you please.

Bela:We won’t disturb you.

Mishti became upset.

Anand:Till now I looked after your father’s company.As you were irresponsible I could not hand over the company to you.Now since everything belongs to you,from now onwards you yourself manage the company.

Mishti's eyes got filled up with tears.

Mishti:Please don’t go.

Anand asked her sarcastically:You are trying to stop us?We are sure that there is no good intention behind it.

Mishti:No.Last few days I realized how rudely I behaved with you both.I really repent.Please don’t go.

Bela:We can’t believe you.If you had really realized your mistakes you would have understood how you treated your husband who is counting days.

Mishti became upset.Anand-Bela left the house.

Mishti burst into tears.

Days passed.

She was missing the care and affection of Anand-Bela.

Mishti:When I lost you both,I realized that you both never made me feel the pain of a child who lost her parents.I am a fool to not realize it before.

She remembered Jeev every moment.

Mishti:I wanted to get rid of you as soon as possible.Then why I feel upset when you left me?Why I am craving to see you?

Mishti was watching the sea waves at the beach.

Mishti:Like I wished I became the richest girl who has no one to control.I have full freedom now.Still I feel so empty.I feel that even after getting everything I don’t have anything.

Suddenly she saw herself walking along with Jeev.A smile appeared on her face.

Mohabbat ho gayi hai phir se shayad
Main phir se chaand ko paane chala hoon
Bahut roya tha jo ik baar kar
Wahi ghalti main dohraane chala hoon

She imagined Jeev carrying her on his back and walking there.

Ae mere dil
Na phir kisi se ishq kar
Ae mere dil
Na us gali se phir guzar

Ae mere dil
Na phir kisi se ishq kar
Ae mere dil
Na us gali se phir guzar
Tu sau dafa, toda gaya
Rota hua chhora gaya
Na dobara se wo bhool kar(
Ae mere dil-Music video).

She felt very happy.But when she realized that it was only her imagination she broke into tears.

Mishti:I miss you Jeev.I want you.I need you.Please come back to me.

Mishti met Palchin in her hospital.

Mishti:Is Jeev in your hospital?I want to see him.

Palchin:Jeev is not here.Why are you restless Mishti?

Mishti:I want to see Jeev.

Palchin:What happened Mishti?

Mishti told her everything and Palchin got shocked.

Palchin:This is shocking.Though you are my friend now I support them Mishti.Sorry.

Mishti:I know.Because even I know that I was wrong.Now I want to rectify my mistakes.

Palchin was stunned.

Palchin:What do you mean?

Mishti:I want all of them back Palchin.

Palchin:What?

Mishti:I want uncle,aunty and Jeev with me.

Palchin could not believe her ears.

Palchin:Jeev too?

Mishti:Yes.I can’t imagine a life without Jeev.I want his remaining days to be the happiest with me.

Palchin was surprised.

Mishti:Tell me where he is.

Palchin:He is in his house.I will give you his address.

Mishti went to Jeev’s house.

She saw him standing at the compound.

She felt emotional seeing him there.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#24

Finally Mishty realized how much love and care everyone gave her.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#25

Its still not too late for her to accept and rectify her mistakes.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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thanks for the pm

amazing update

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Posted: 5 years ago
#27

This part is exactly like reverse psychology. When Mishti wanted the property, she never cared for people & after getting what she wanted, she realizes how much Anand, Bela, & Jeev loves her.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#28

Part 5


Absolutely Fantastic and so Awesome Update

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Posted: 5 years ago
#29

Thank u so much friends.this ss ends here.plz write ur fav scene,fav character n the reasons



Ae mere dil...Oh my heart...Part 6

Mishti went to Jeev’s house.

She saw him standing at the compound.

She felt emotional seeing him there.She ran towards him and her foot got slipped.

In fear of falling down she called him:Jeev!

Suddenly Jeev saw him and held her by her waist to prevent her from falling down.

Mohabbat ho gayi hai phir se shayad
Main phir se chaand ko paane chala hoon
Bahut roya tha jo ik baar kar
Wahi ghalti main dohraane chala hoon

They shared an emotional eye lock.

Mohabbat ho gayi hai phir se shayad
Main phir se chaand ko paane chala hoon
Bahut roya tha jo ik baar kar
Wahi ghalti main dohraane chala hoon

Jeev moved away from her.

Jeev:Why are you here Mishti?You got everything from me.Right?Now what is left?

Mishti:No..I did not get everything which I want from you.I want Jeev;the husband for myself.

He looked at her in disbelief.

Ae mere dil
Na phir kisi se ishq kar
Ae mere dil
Na us gali se phir guzar

Mishti embraced him emotionally.Jeev was shocked.

Ae mere dil
Na phir kisi se ishq kar
Ae mere dil
Na us gali se phir guzar
Tu sau dafa, toda gaya
Rota hua chhora gaya
Na dobara se wo bhool kar

Jeev moved away from her.

Jeev:What do you mean Mishti?

It started raining.

Jeev:Anyways leave it.

He just started to walk away ignoring her.

Mishti walked after him.

Mishti:Jeev…please listen to me.

She held his hand.

He looked at her.

Mishti:I know that I hurt you a lot with my tongue.But please forgive me.I am really sorry.

Jeev gave her a cold reply:Ok.I forgive you.Now what?

Mishti:I married you for property.But now I don’t want any property.I want only you.

Jeev was stunned.


Ae mere dil
Na phir kisi se ishq kar
Ae mere dil
Na us gali se phir guzar

Mishti:In your absence I realized your importance in my life.I realized that I love you.

Jeev could not believe his eyes.

Doobi hui dard me
Ab ke chali jo hawa
Tu to bikhar jayega
Kaghazon ki tarah

Mishti:I want to live as your loving wife in your last days.

Jeev looked at her emotionally.

Baat ye kal ki to hai
Yaad nahin kya tujhe
Aankhon se khwab gire
Tu na rok saka

Jeev:I am not a patient like you think.I have no disease.

Mishti was shocked:What?

Jeev:It was a lie.

Mishti was shocked.

Mishti:Why did Palchin and you lie to me?

Jeev:The story starts from our college.

Mishti:Our college?

Jeev:Yes.I was also in your college.You have not noticed me.But I had noticed you.I used to love you without your own knowledge.



Flash back….

Jeev was looking at Mishti romantically in the college.

Present…

Jeev:I did not have the courage to confess my love to you.Later I visited Palchin’s hospital as she is my cousin.

Mishti was surprised:You are Palchin’s cousin?

Jeev:Yes.After I lost my parents it’s Palchin’s parents who looked after me.

Mishti:Oh so you are the cousin brother about whom Palchin used to tell me.But she used to address you as Jee.

Jeev:Yes.That was my pet name and she calls me like that.When I visited her hospital I saw you there.Then I asked her about you.She told me that you are her closest friend.I was surprised.Later she told me that you want a dying patient as your husband.

Flash back…

Jeev:I am ready to marry Mishti.

Palchin was shocked:What are you saying Jeev?You are not a patient.

Jeev:I will pretend to be a patient if you support me.

Palchin:But why do you want to marry Mishti?

Jeev:Becaue I have been loving her since our college days.

Jeev told her how he used to love her silently in college.

Palchin was surprised.

Palchin:But Jee…Mishti is a peculiar type.She is not interested in any relationship.

Jeev:I know.But I will teach her the value of relationships.I will make her understand that love is more important than money.

Palchin:It’s not easy Jee..

Jeev:I know.But I will try my best.I hav faith in my love.

Palchin smiled.

Present….

Mishti looked at Jeev emotionally.

Jeev:But then I felt that I failed.

Mishti:So you left me.But you have won.From you only I realized that I hurt Anand uncle and Bela aunty who lived only for me.From you only I learnt to respect them.From you only I learnt the value of relationships.You taught me to love.I really love you Jeev.Please don’t leave me alone.I beg of you.

Ae mere dil
Ae mere dil tu maan jaa
Had ho chuki
Ab ho chuki hai intеha
Tu sau dafa, toda gaya
Rota hua chhora gaya
Ae deewane ab to baaz aa

He looked at her teary eyes.Slowly he wiped her tears and pulled her closer.

They shared an emotional eye lock.

Ae mеre dil
Na phir kisi se ishq kar


Ae mere dil
Na us gali se phir guzar

Their lips touched each others with pure emotional love.

Ae mеre dil

Na phir kisi se ishq kar
Ae mere dil
Na us gali se phir guzar

Mishti spent the night with Jeev in his house.

The next morning….

Mishti was very upset thinking of Anand and Bela.

Jeev:What happened Mishti?Why are you looking sad?

He joked:Is it because I am not going to die?

Mishti placed her finger on his lips.

Mishti:Don’t dare to say that.When I fell in love with you I prayed to God to give you a long life.So that we can live together happily.But still I had no hope.Yet I waited for a miracle.And when I came to know that you are actually a healthy person..I can’t tell you how happy I am now. I can’t express my happiness.So please don’t say that again.

Mohabbat ho gayi hai phir se shayad
Main phir se chaand ko paane chala hoon
Bahut roya tha jo ik baar kar
Wahi ghalti main dohraane chala hoon

He smiled:No,I won’t repeat it.I am happy that you love me like I love you.

She smiled.

Ae mere dil
Na phir kisi se ishq kar
Ae mere dil
Na us gali se phir guzar(
Ae mere dil).


Mishti:I am very happy that I got you back.But my life will be complete only if Anand uncle and Bela aunty forgive me and come back to me.I am incomplete without them.

Jeev:Don’t feel incomplete Mishti.You are a lucky girl.

Mishti:Why did you say that?

Jeev took her to the living room.She was surprised to see Anand and Bela there.

Mishti became emotional:Anand uncle…Bela aunty…

Jeev:Don’t doubt.She is a changed person now.She is your daughter Mishti in every way.

Anand-Bela smiled emotionally.

Mishti ran towards them and hugged them weeping.Bela and Anand also wept.

Mishti:I am sorry.

Anand:Leave it Mishti.Let us forget the past.

Bela caressed her face:Yes.Don’t think about the past.We got our loving Mishti back.Nothing else matters to us now.

Mishti smiled.

Mishti:Please promise me that you both won’t leave me and go again.

Anand:No beta.We will be always together.

They were very happy.

Anand,Bela,Mishti and Jeev had a group hug.

Palchin who reached there smiled seeing their hug.

Jeev-Mishti:Palchin!

Palchin:Don’t move.Such a beautiful family scene before me.Let me click a picture.

They smiled.

Palchin took the camera from the table and clicked their family picture.

The end

Edited by jasminerahul - 5 years ago
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thanks for the pm

wonderful update

great end

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