FF: Judaai I Ch 24 - Pg 125 - Page 67

Eagerly waiting for both update of fanfiction Broken & Judaai

Originally posted by: Dorarit

Happy new year abhyudya 🥳

Happy New year dear

Originally posted by: monty22

dear Abhyudaya 🤗 happy new year

i read both last two chapter.........it was awesome.😊

Chapter 15

i was hoping someone will definitely get heart attack in RS Clan when they meet Riddhima 2.0🤣but i forgot they don't have

vansh want to kill her, protect her -Ishq ki yahi baat to hain dard diya bhi nahi jata aur saha bhi jata..

love sher and Vansh scene.👍🏼

Chapter 16

aha what a chapter...👏 love the Riddhima "enola holms " and her team.....i know she became fooled by sher and The king....but love their bonding.

i had gut feeling long ago that Lizzy will be the first one who will hit Ishani and my prediction become true😆

Being nice is the worst thing a woman can be. Nice means you have to swallow your feelings and focus on everyone else's. Nice means you don't speak up when you're wrong. Nice means being a people pleaser and a conciliator and worrying yourself to death over others' opinions. Nice means never getting what you want... Authentic. Genuine.

100% True- whether we are living in old era or 21st century ....women have to follow this so called protocol.....here you have showed hypocrisy of society....woman have to do all sacrifice for sake of her home, family, society....but they forgot she is the one who made them. it can't be change just like that but ......if people just acknowledge her feelings, views, even though they disagree on her opinion but respect her, not judging her as per society's so called ideal women criteria....it will be enough for them .😳 isn't riddhima doing it for her love, so called family....she has sacrifised her career/her own thinking process/self respect/own safety/ own priorities/own feelings either she feels anger or hurt any emotions.😭 seeing riddhima 2.0 i am sure RS Family won't accept it....because she is not fitting in Ideal women criteria....who can't give reply back, who can't show anger, who doesn't own self respect....on top of that they can accept Mafia son/brother/brother in law/grandson but can't accept Mafia Daughter in Law/wife/sister in law.😳 she has accepted them as family even when they want to kill her/ harm her. she put everything on stake and try to protect them.........she never question them....she forgive them. but can Raisinghaniya family do the same???? aryan/chachi/Ishani can live as family even if they are murderer not to forget vansh is also there ( of course he is mafia) .....can Riddhu live as family knowing her as murderer????????????? Big NOOOOOOOOOO.

i am okay with less Vansh and Riddhu scene....actually i am more interested in other characters and their equation with Riddhima.😳

keep it up dear.and happy birthday to your nephew 🥳😊

take care.😊

Thank you so much dear

your comments actually give me a different perception on the story and make me feel think more vividly and touch the roots which didn't cross my mind.

Thanks for analyzing my updates, I'm humbled :)

Happy new year dear :)

Originally posted by: Sharmasanjana

Thanks, I'm eagerly waiting for next Chapters, I hope you'll update next Chapters today

Hi Dear,

Updating Broken today, tired due to nephew birthday, if have time certainly will update Judaai. If not please expect it to be updated tomorrow :)

Happy New year dear :)

Chapter 17

"I guess when you earn desperately for something, you will have it in the end"

says the King once Ridhima enters into her room.

"So now, do you started trusting me?"

asks Ridhima

King chuckles,

"I don't believe the people, especially not the ones like you who put on an innocent face and do wicked things."

Though King has said it lightly, it has hurt Ridhima's pride because these are the same words which Vansh used upon her.

"You're also wicked"

shouts Ridhima while King replies,

"But, I'm not an innocent"

making Ridhima shut up.

King smiles at her childishness,

"Ridhima, I have a secret to share with you?"

making Ridhima look at the camera with raising her eyebrows and nods her head asking Lord to continue.

"Abilo is innocent. It is me who has killed Robin"

says the Alchemist making Ridhima lose her control over her body and fall.

"Are you saying, I killed an innocent?"

says Ridhima with painful eyes, though she wants to cry she cannot and remembering that she cannot cry, she smiles sadly at her fate.

"Not precisely,"

says King continuing,

"He is innocent in Robin's matter. However, he is not a total 100% innocent. He has his shares of crimes on his head; Over and above, he tried to double-cross me. So, yeah we have set an example on this cruise never mess with the King again"

says the Debt collector and making note of her emotions.

"How could you? I understand he has his share, then why I should be the one to kill him?"

shouts Ridhima

"Ah! wait, now let me replay the story to you. You have captured Abilo, while Sher is doing his part, you took the next place and killed him. Why did you do that? After Sher, Lizy, Tary or Richie could have completed him, why did you pick the knife, Ridhima? I didn't ask you to do it?"

asks the Kingmaker.

"I..."

suddenly Ridhima felt the loss of words. She knows caretaker is right. Why the hell she picked the knife? He never asked to kill Abilo. Then why?

"I admit that it was a bit cruel, but if that is the only way you feel to survive in Mafia, then, there's no need to avoid it. I'm with you Riddhu"

says her caretaker making her feel more guilt.

"Are you doing this to ruin my life? Is that it? If that's what you are thinking, don't even dream. It won't happen. I won't be broken so easily"

says Ridhima breaking the wine glasses while The Judge is happy enjoying her restlessness.

"Riddhu, I'm not ruining your life. In my defence, I would say that you worked hard. You worked hard to live, to survive, and to reach this far. I assure you that your most beautiful days are yet to come"

says the Freelancer making Ridhima cringe on the usage of his words.

"Because of you, my life is in chaos. You threw a stone into a calm lake. You must reckon for what you did"

says Ridhima with anguish while Monarch is feeling uncomfortable with her words; While Ridhima continues

"You shouldn't have made me trust and respect you. You shouldn't have made me think of you as my saviour"

says Ridhima while taking the help of the couch to stand her foot. Another side, Ridhima words have stirred unknown emotions in the heart of the Major. Making sure he regain his cold emotions back again, The director asks,

"Do you want to die?"

while Ridhima chuckles and says,

"I'm already dead"

making him feel more uncomfortable to have this conversation with her.

"From now, I'm going to stop using my anger to motive myself. I will protect the people and the things that matter to me. I won't be blinded by the past because that's stupid and going forward I don't trust you"

shouts Ridhima

'What is that you have to protect, Ridhima? A family or friends? You are an orphan and the team works for me. No matter they are your friends, but then, I'm their priority"

says the Forecaster making Ridhima halt before opening her room door.

"If you want to break up my organization, then you have to hit the head, not the tail. And, I'm the head, my dear Riddhu"

says the Architect by lighting a cigarette for himself.

Understanding the gravity of her situation Ridhima slumps near the door and sits silents. It has been an hour none has spoken. While Ridhima sat silently, the Debt Collector is watching her with mixed emotions. At last, Ridhima looks up the camera and says,

"One thing puts my mind at ease. The fact that you didn't betray me, I'm relieved to know that. I've been betrayed so many times by those I once trusted. You at least told me the truth of Abilo and Robin sooner"

says Ridhima while getting up

"Nobody is to be trusted in this world, Riddhu, remember it always. Maybe one day I will betray you very badly, who knows"

says the Cook.

"Having said that, if you didn't come to my life, I might have lived a wall around myself like a ghost who roams around even though I'm alive"

says the Invisible Hand making her heart feel the warmth again.

"Is it so wrong for one person to belive another?"

asks Ridhima with utmost sincerity in her voice

“Riddhu, trust is something you should earn. And it wasn't something you give easy. Too often, it was a tool your enemies uses to hurt you with. 'Give them nothing, darling. Not until you have no choice. The world is harsh and it is cold. People can be good and decent, but most of them are only out for themselves and they'll hurt anyone they can"

says The Pharmacist while Ridhima asks,

"Why me?"

asks Ridhima herself while the Pawnbroker heard her.

"I don't know,"

says the Crytobanker while Ridhima chuckles,

"What I know is, you know everything,"

says Ridhima

"Lying with the knowledge and not being able to answer because you don't know is entirely apart,"

says the Hawaladar.

"Why are you so brutally honest with your answers? Is it a special treat for me or everyone else?"

asks Ridhima

"What you want to know, Ridhima?"

asks the caretaker

“I had met people who had tried to fit in. I had met people who tried to stand out. But until then I had never met anyone who simply tried to be themselves without expecting anything from those around them. It was a refreshing experience"

says Ridhima while King chuckles,

"I'm not here to impress anyone, Ridhima. I've had people validate me my whole life. I had to live my life for me -be me- nothing more, nothing less. Who you are as a human is its success. I wasn't obligated to impress or appease anyone with achievements. Now, Good Night Riddhu"

says the King while seeing her covered her in the bedsheets while he opens picture from his drawer and looks at the picture with unread mixed emotions,

"She takes after you, she has a heart of gold. She always has to help those who need help. And when she opens up to someone, she stays loyal to that person"

while keeping that image near his heart and for the first time in ages thinking to have some sleep.

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The Next Morning: -

“You know, when you talked about good days and bad days, do you think right now counts as the good days?”

asks Ridhima to Aliza post the workout session.

“It depends. How do you feel right now?”

Aliza asks

Ridhima closed her eyes when she said,

“I feel strange. I haven’t felt like this for a long time.”

Aliza took a deep breath.

“How so?”

Ridhima shrugged.

“Perhaps, it’s because I’m in a whole new place, where I haven’t set my foot before; the air smelt different and I’m talking to a stranger who became my friend since a month. It made me feel like I’ve just had all my memories erased and replaced with new ones.”

While both the girls lost in their talks, Sher arrives while Ridhima turns away from while he catches her hand and says,

"I'm sorry"

while Lizy left them to talk as last night Sher told the team what happened with Robin

"Sorry, for what?"

asks Ridhima knowing why he is saying it

"You know"

replies Sher

"These days, I'm not using my brain much. So why don't you remind me?"

asks Ridhima

"Robin"

replies Sher making her move away from him

"I know, I should have told you but then again, we thought to punish Vansh for whatever he did with you,"

says Sher

Ridhima locks her eyes with him and takes a step forward,

"I betrayed Vansh first. I lied to him. So he assumed whatever he saw and betrayed me. Yes, I'm hurt but, I'm glad we are even now"

says Ridhma making Sher beam with pride to know that she started moving away from him.

"But, I didn't expect this from you Sher,"

says Ridhima while once again turning away from him. Whereas Sher follows her. However, she turns back and says,

"You know what, I just got remind of something, like I have nothing more to lose, so what's the harm in trusting something that could be just another lie? Isn't it?"

asks Ridhima with rage in her eyes.

"Just tell me one thing Sher, Am I an enemy or am I a comrade,"

asks Ridhima making Sher shut his eyes in regret

"Why don't you ask your caretaker. Why it is me who you always fight with? When you talk to him as if, as if...'

Sher doesn't know with what kind of words he should fill the line

"As if he is my saviour"

Ridhima completes the line making Sher nod his head.

"Because he doesn't lie to me, Sher. He is what he is. Whereas you say my friend and then, you know what you do"

shouts Ridhima while Sher looks at her helplessly.

"You know what I'm thinking since last night, your betrayal. Once again my life proved me that, no matter how much I thought about it, there is no reason for me to live. Why am I trying so hard to stay alive? Even if it ends, there wouldn't be any sad person. Even if my life ends today, there's nothing to lose"

says Ridhima with a painful cry. Sher hugs her while pats her back, Ridhima gives in and says,

"Don't shake me, please. Don't make me have expectations."

While Sher says,

"In my life, no one asked me for my friendship, so I didn't imagine you would be needing it very badly, Riddhu. I promise, as a friend, I will kill myself for you. Having said that, please remember, my loyalty always likes with the King"

making Ridhima come out of the hug and look at his face.

"I understand. I'm fine with your friendship and trust. As I know on whom you will shower loyalty on"

says Ridhima while moving away from him but then she turns back and says,

"After going through painful love, I pretended to know everything about the word, pretending to be old enough, but looks like I don't know anything."

Sher follows her to the deck of the cruise,

"The pain you gave me, I wasn't able to avoid. How do you feel seeing me all messed up? Perhaps, you think you won something? Isn't"

asks Ridhima; While Sher reaches before her,

"I have no excuses, I know I hurt you,"

says Sher locking his eyes with her.

"You fooled me good all along,"

says Ridhima

"Why don't you trust me one more time?"

asks Sher who is losing his patience now

"Don't think only about what you want to say, but read the other person too Ridhima"

shouts Sher while holding her tightly in his hands. Sher takes a moment and lessens the grip on her and says,

"I'm sorry. But it is necessary. We didn't plan this game to hurt Vansh. However, he became part of it so we led it to happen. Sorry to think we can hurt him behalf of you. I promise, going forward in matters of VR, I will let you know the first"

making Ridhima feel guilty.

"Now, coming to the matters of Robin, you didn't kill an innocent. He deserves that death, so don't feel guilty for him"

while making Ridhima come out of his grip. Sher tries to leave the deck but he stands beside her and says,

"The Mafia world is a battlefield. In a battlefield where bullets are flying, those with warm hearts die first"

making Ridhima realize she has a long way to walk.

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While Ridhima is going back to her room, security chief informs Vansh has agreed on Ridhima to be Sia's doctor made her way towards Sia room and while notices Vansh already in the room with Sia.

"I will start her treatment tomorrow morning. I have checked her vitals. Dr Malik has gone great work on her. With no time your sister will be back to normal life and stand on her feet"

says Ridhima nonchalantly making Vansh feel like strangers. Ridhima can feel his steady gaze on her, so she decides to live while she hears him saying,

"You've changed. I don't know this Ridhima"

says Vansh

Ridhima turns back and smiles,

"You and I never tried to know each other, Vansh. I always tried to know who you are while you did the same. But, we tried different techniques rather than communication. Because, whenever we thought to talk, we always lied"

making Vansh realize she is right.

"I agree, but this wild Ridhima, I never thought I would see you killing a person,"

says Vansh

"Nah! Don't say that Vansh. You accused me of harming your sister. That sums up all"

says Ridhima with posed manner making Vansh rage with anger

"It is you who caused all this"

shouts Vansh

"Okay then, I'm sorry Vansh,"

says Ridhima making him burn with the anger

"Are you think I'm a fool, Ridhima"

shouts Vansh while she starts taking steps near him,

"Vansh Rai Singhania, just because someone loves you doesn't mean you have the right to step on their pride. Just because someone liked your first doesn't mean you have the power to rule them either. I liked the caring person in you, but not it seems I don't think I love who you are as a person"

says Ridhima while saying,

"I also think you don't like me as a person. You need a wife who loves you, trusts you blindly, not question you while get harmed by your family members and all?" Isn't it?"

asks Ridhima while Vansh realizes what all he and his family done with her. Yet he says,

"I thought my wife would beat the odds"

making Ridhima chuckle.

"Once was enough, don't overdo it, Vansh,"

says Ridhima

"Vansh: Ah?

Ridhima: Don't come with those rhetoric lines, Vansh. Thinking I could do anything; You know what, you never cared. Vansh, every person in your family has hurt me. If Sia is your family and you got evidence saying I had hurt her, due to which you throw me out of your life, what is the punishment you're going to give to Chanchal, Aryan and Ishani? Why they are still in your life? Oh yes, I'm not your wife since day one. I'm the woman whom you married because you doubt that she is a spy which eventually turned true. So doubt cleared, hence, no need to continue the marriage. Am I right or Am I right?"

asks Ridhima while making Vansh feel as if she slapped on his face.

"I did my best. I wanted to create a perfect world for you"

says Vansh

"A perfect world? You needed that world, not for me, but for you to prove that you did your best. Your perfect collapsed now, Vansh"

replies Ridhima with venom dripping from her words.

"Vansh, if it weren't you nothing would have happened to me. If it weren't you, Kabir would never need me. If it weren't you, I would have lived in peace as I have all these years, being thankful for being completely alone. If it weren't you, I wouldn't resent someone for making me this way. If it weren't you, I wouldn't do something stupid like having hope because of some stupid love. I despise you more than anyone in the entire world. So, please, disappear from my life"

says Ridhima while leaving with one question, "So much pain, why no tears in her eyes?"

Vansh follows her and catches hold of her asking,

"Why you are not crying, Ridhima? Where are your tears?"

making her turn her face another side.

"What an irony? Even today you want me to cry for you?"

asks Ridhima hatred in her eyes.

"Vansh if I get chance I want to pull out my eyes that fell for you, rip out the lips that said I love you, and kill the that trusted you,"

says Ridhima while Vansh holds her tightly.

'Where are your tears, Ridhima?"

asks Vansh once again

"Because I don't waste my tears on you. I trust my tears, Vansh Rai Singhania, they won't fall until I say so"

says Ridhima while coming out of his grip and moves away to her room, while Vansh stood rooted understanding she is lying and something had happened with her.

The Last year been tough for all of us, for whatever reasons, however, we all have built this fictional world for ourself to get out of the reality for a couple of minutes. So, let's thoroughly enjoy this fictional world and each second we spend here.

I only wish good luck, health and wealth all come on your way guys. Wishing each one of you and your family members a very Happy New Year and hoping to receive the same love going forward from all of you :) Stay Blessed lovely people ❤️❤️❤️❤️

Until next update - be safe, Kind, healthy and courageous :)

Chapter 18 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5196200?pn=92#155425304

Chappy 27 is heart touching update dear I liked the conversation between riddhi and king about trust so much coming to conversation between riddhi and sher is very good a normal between two friends can vansh and riddhi conversation is amazing finally riddhi tell her heartfelt feelings about the pain given by him and his so called family when he came to know the reason for riddhi unable to shed tears definitely he drowned in his own guilt good luck yaar keep rocking stay safe and positive

Originally posted by: KV2711

Chappy 27 is heart touching update dear I liked the conversation between riddhi and king about trust so much coming to conversation between riddhi and sher is very good a normal between two friends can vansh and riddhi conversation is amazing finally riddhi tell her heartfelt feelings about the pain given by him and his so called family when he came to know the reason for riddhi unable to shed tears definitely he drowned in his own guilt good luck yaar keep rocking stay safe and positive

Thank you so much dear 😃

Vansh yet to know the truth dear but yes he is thinking in that way

Let's see whether he would be able to know the truth or not

Awwww Abhi 😭 Poor Ridhhima, I'm glad she didn't cry but I can feel how hurt she is. I'm proud of this Ridhima ❤️ She should not tolerate the shit anymore. Very well written.

I love how Vansh is slowly burning in the fire he himself started. Beautiful update.

Happy New year 🤗

Emotional plot ....

Convo b/w riddhima and Sher ...and

Convo b/w riddhima and king

Was really heart touching..

Wish you happy New year....

Continue soon

Waiting for your next update

Originally posted by: SnehaSneha

Awwww Abhi 😭 Poor Ridhhima, I'm glad she didn't cry but I can feel how hurt she is. I'm proud of this Ridhima ❤️ She should not tolerate the shit anymore. Very well written.

I love how Vansh is slowly burning in the fire he himself started. Beautiful update.

Happy New year 🤗

Happy new year

Thank you dear 🙂