OS: A Serene Dawn - Page 2

very hurtful her pov.

Well written, loved that the culprits are being punished. They should have been, what they did isn't easily forgiven or forget.

Angre is divorcing her 👍🏼

Awesome..Riddhima shud pack her bags and leave the mansion for some time..then only ppl will realise her worth..

Good attempt. I loved it..part2 milega???

Please continue.it was beautiful. Thanks for this wonderful piece 👏🙏

I knew it... Jo cheez show ke writers humein nahi de sakte woh IF ke writers zarur denge

Thank you Vampgirl for this 🤗

It was really good...

That family didn't value her, didn't really care for her, always tried to kill her.

And now when they're truly punished, it all because of their own wrongdoings

They deserved it 😡

Keep writing more.. really love your writing. 😳

Originally posted by: Anupa1902

Nice reading a story from Dadi's pov... 💕

And yes, tired of seeing Riddhima being tortured...

Thank you 😊. Exactly it feels as if only Riddhima has to get punish for anything that goes wrong in VR Mansion😵

Originally posted by: Pavi10989

Wow,👏..I really want this to happen in show.. one day riddhima should leave this zoo n go.. they all should suffer like tis...😈

I know right, if something like this happens in the show it will be a dream come true.

Thank you😊

Originally posted by: kuhelidebbarma

Just awesome👏

Thank you 💖

Originally posted by: -Ayushi-

Amazing one.👍🏼

Serves them right for their wrongdoings.

Thank you ❤️. I know right😊

Originally posted by: ashsamik

This was so nice...👏...and yes I too am fed up of what is going on in the show....

Do continue if your going to....what happened to Ridhima and why is Aryan in jail...

Ishani ne kya kiya.....Kabir Anupriya kaha hai....so many things...

It's nice if you are going to continue...👍🏼

Thanks a lot dear😊. I am not sure if I am going to continue. I have base idea in my mind what I want to happen here, let's see😉