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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: N_sharmaa


We blame you for this again. Your writing magic .😳

Yes 💯 💯

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: zalima

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: anjali0111

Sounoor has that magic. Romance is not just romance with them its combo of tension, frustration and comedy🤣

Yeah. They have that natural thing in them.


Romance is actually one big circus 😆

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Originally posted by: anjali0111

every third angle in every romantic movie is better than crappy🤣


💯🤣🤣 just can't take her 🤣 panoti

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: anjali0111

Bas bholu ko pata nahi hai ki uske charche kaha kaha tak mashoor hain🤣🤣

You should tell him and see his reaction🤣

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: anjali0111

no it has only three chapters

third is longer but couldn't divide it due to continuity problem.


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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 3 (last part)


“Ok…challenge accepted….we will see…you will melt like butter in my arms Khurana.” Neil resolved. “We will see.” Mini replied back.

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After that argument Neil didn’t leave any chance to seduce Mini whether it by walking just in towel after shower or wearing clothes which she gifted him, wearing her favorite cologne. Being extra sweet around her, being gentleman, showing chivalry where it was not even needed like opening doors for her, pulling chair for her. He was not leaving any chance to touch her whether it is by keeping her hand on her shoulders or waist, hugging her more than necessary.


Mini was noticing all this and finding it very awkward. It was not like she was not habituated with his touches. They hugged each other all the time as friendly gesture but now since the reason behind it changed Mini couldn’t digest it at all. She knew Neil had his way with girls. He knew how to impress them, take care of them and swept them off their feet. She knew his every move but then also she was a girl in the end and she couldnt stop herself from liking all of it. She was taking special care to avoid Neil more and more because no matter how much she keeps denying it but Neil’s behaviour was slowly affecting her and she didn’t want to lose the challenge at any cost.

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All the friends decided to go for a movie. Bobby brought the popcorn while Neil was buying tickets. Mini, Preet and Jazz was standing near the theater door. Some pervert type of guys were constantly looking at girls. Girls decided to avoid them. But Neil and Bobby noticed this.They tried to teach them a lesson but girls stop them as they didn’t want to create any scene.


When the theatre door was opened, everyone started going inside. Everyone including Jazz and Preet went inside quickly but Mini couldn’t as her phone fell down from her hands. She picked it up and saw those pervert guys were standing at the door as if only waiting for her so that they can take advantage of the crowd and get a chance to touch her. She nervously went near the door when Neil returned back. “Where were you wifey? Chalo movie start hone wali hai.” Neil asked loudly to make it clear to those guys what Mini means to him and then give deadly glare as if warning to stay away if they don’t want to get punched in the face. The guys backed off and Neil took Mini inside by holding her protectively from her waist. Mini’s heart did a somersault. Neil was always protective about her as a friend but this was first time he did that as a husband and she didn’t know why but she kinda liked it very much.


“Where are we going? Sab log toh waha baithe hain.” Mini asked pointing towards other row. “Oh, I have bought corner tickets for us wifey.” Neil winked. Mini gasped, “Stop it now Oberoi. Koi fayda nahi hone wala is sab ka. You are gonna lose it.” “We will see that wifey.” Neil replied again. “Stop calling me wifey.” Mini snapped back. “Actually I realized that I cant call you Khurana anymore because technically we both are Oberois now….so…wifey it is.” Neil explained the reason. Mini was about to argue but then suddenly realized he was right actually. “Then call me Mini not wifey.” Mini finally said.


“Mini toh sab bulate hain…phir isme special kya hai?” Neil said and then thought for sometime. “Ok, from now on I’ll call you sweetheart.” Neil smiled. “Yuck! No way.” Mini replied. “Then Baby?” Neil asked. “I’ll strangle you.” Mini replied angrily. “Then honey?” Neil asked again to irritate her. “I’ll murder you Oberoi.” Mini threatened. Neil couldn’t stop his laughter. “Ok, then wifey it is.” Neil said and Mini looked at him in anger pointing her finger at him. Neil kissed on her finger and Mini pulled it back immediately. “Aur tum bhi mujhe ye Oberoi bulana chhod do…I am your husband give me some respect.” Neil said to rile her up again. “Yes, I have a perfect name for you…I will call you loser once you will lose this challenge.”Mini replied with gritted teeth making Neil laugh some more.

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Mini feared that she will lose the challenge so to avoid him completely she shifted in another room. When Neil tried to stop her they had fight over it and stopped talking to each other. They were on no talking terms since a week now. Though both lived in same house and saw each other whole day in the college also but they were missing each other like crazy. They had never fought in their life. This was their very first fight and it was taking toll on them and they were losing their sanity.


“Good morning darling” Seema wished Mini on breakfast table. “Morning aunty…oops…sorry…morning mom.” Mini corrected her mistake and Seema just ruffled her hair. “So Mini beta tum kab se office join karogi? Tumhare papa ke jaane ke baad main ekdum akela ho gaya hoon. I need support.” Yash shared his worries. Just then Neil came there, he heard everything. Even though he was not talking to Mini but he knew her wounds are still raw and Yash reminding her of that will do no good.


“Dad, relax. Itni bhi kya jaldi hai? kar legi wo aapko join.” Neil replied. Mini looked at Neil. She knew why he said that.That’s why he was her best friend. He knew what to say when to say and what not to say. He understood her more than anyone else. “Don’t know why he is so hell bent on making our friendship awkward by putting his ‘tharkiness’ into it.”Mini wondered and rolled her eyes.


“Dad, don’t worry I will join you soon. Exam over ho jaye uske baad I’ll assist you…aapse sab kuch seekhna bhi toh hai.” Mini replied. “Thank you beta. Bas tumse si ummeede hain. Neil se toh main kab ki ummeed chhod chukka hoon. Achha khaasa family business hai apna lekin pata nahi ye writer banne ka bhoot sar par kyu chadh gaya hai? Ye mahashay to MBA bhi beech mein chhodna chahte the wo toh jaise taise tumne hi convince kiya tha ki at least course to complete kar le nahi toh…” Yash continued his rant. Mini noticed Neil become stiff. He hated this career debate with his dad. Uncle being old school didn’t understand that Neil is passionate about writing. So she tried to control the situation before it went out of her hands. “Dad let it be na….Main hoon na aapko support karne ke liye…Neil ko karne dijiye use jo karna hai.” Mini cheered up yash. Neil looked at her in gratitude. She avoided yet another fight between him and dad. He loved the fact that she always supported him no matter whatever the situation is. “They were best friends but they were compatible more than any lovey dovey couple then why she is avoiding physical proximity with him. What will change after that? Now that they are married why she doesnt want to explore the possibilities.” Neil wondered.


Neil and Mini went to the college separately after breakfast. “Ye aaj alag alag kyu gaye? Inhe kya ho gaya?” Yash asked from Seema. “Don’t know. I am noticing from some days something is off between them. Mini even sleeping in different room since few days.” Seema informed. “What?Inme pehle toh kabhi jhagda nahi hua….I think hume in dono se baat karni chahiye.” Yash suggested. “I don’t think so. They have been friends with each other since childhood but this marriage is new to them. May be they are confused over the new feelings…we should give them sometime. I am sure they will sort it out on their own.” Seema replied.

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Mini was sitting with Preet when she noticed Ria walked upto Neil and started flirting with him. Mini was surprised when she saw Neil was flirting back. She couldn’t help but overhear their conversation. “Why don’t we meet for a drink at your favorite place?” Ria asked. Neil wanted to say no but he noticed Mini was listening. Though she was pretending to look into her phone but her focus was on him so to rile her up Neil agreed with Ria. Mini stood up suddenly from there and went outside. Neil followed her to see where she is going. On her way Mini bumped into Mickey. “Hey! Watch out.” Mickey said. Mini was about to say sorry but then noticed Neil was coming towards her. “Mickey are you free tonight? Will you come with me for a drink at club?” Mini asked sweetly and Neil gasped at her. “Ok…sure why not?” Mickey agreed.


Later in the evening Mini took Mickey at the same place Neil and Ria went. “I know what you are trying to do Neil Oberoi. Two can play this game.” Mini said and invited Mickey for a dance. Neil saw that he also joined the dance floor with Ria. Both of them were trying to make other jealous and both were succeeding also. Mini came too close to Mickey in her game unconsciously and Mickey hugged her in response. This was Neil’s limit he pushed away Ria and marched towards Mini angrily. Neil pulled her away from Mickey with a jerk. “Hey dude, relax. What are you doing?” Mickey tried to interfere and got a punch from Neil right on the nose. “I know how to handle my wife. You keep your advice to yourself.” Neil replied and dragged Mini from there. He brought the car out and kept pressing the horn till Mini came and sit inside with him.


Mini looked at him. He looked downright angry. She had never seen him like this before. She wanted to say something in her defense but she knew she kinda f**ked up this time. She herself didn’t realize when she went so close to Mickey. She just wanted to make Neil jealous. “Hell! It was all Neil’s fault. He was trying to do the same…making her jealous by dancing with that Ria.” Mini thought but got reply from the inner voice almost instantly. “But he never crossed his limit. He was maintaining a healthy distance from her and you just threw your mind out of window and got carried away in your game.” Mini wanted to say sorry but she couldn’t as Neil was looking dangerously angry.


They reached their house and Neil went in his room. Mini after lots of thinking followed him inside. “Neil…listen to me…I was just…it was nothing between me and Mickey…we were just…ok..I am sorry.” Mini managed to say somehow. “To hell with your sorry. I saw it myself what were you trying to do.” Neil shouted. Mini was taken aback with his behavior. “F**k you Oberoi. You were doing the same. And you started it so don’t blame on me.” Mini shouted back. “You forced me for doing it. Clearly you were losing the challenge so you started avoiding me and even left this room. I had to do something to gain your attention.” Neil defended himself. “Don’t you dare lie to me. You were enjoying with that Ria.” Mini pointed her finger at him. “No I was not.” Neil countered. “F**k you!...” Mini screamed and was about to throw many profanities at his way but Neil interrupted her. “..ya exactly….thats what I wanted in first place if you have agreed than none of this would have happened.”


“Oh I cant believe you….d**k headed man, you pervert….I’ll kill you.” Mini marched towards him and held him by collar.“Leave me you jungli…is this the way to behave?” Neil caught her hands but Mini kept fighting and hitting him on chest. She even pulled his hair. “Aaaaaa! Enough is enough.” Neil said and indulged in fighting. Now he was also pulling her hairs. Both were fighting like kindergarten kids. Neil hit his knee and fell on bed and Mini not wanting to lose this opportunity came on top of him to punch him across the face. Neil caught her hand just in right time and flipped her on the bed. Mini started kicking in the air to get free from his hold due to which he lost his balance and almost fell upon her.


Suddenly Mini stopped moving realizing their position. She was on bed and he was on top of her, pressing her down by his body weight. Their legs were entangled, chest pressed up against each other, faces just inches away. Neil stopped breathing when he took in their closeness. All the frustration, anger, yearning since their fight started shadowing his mind and he growled when he remembered how she was dancing with that Mickey. Before he knew he had pinned her hands above her head and had started kissing her. Mini’s mind went numb for the first few seconds as she didn’t know how to react but then he bit her lower lip and she moaned, opening her mouth. He deepened the kiss and all Mini could remember was the way he was trying to seduce her all these days, her heart melting each time but not showing it, his little gestures as her husband, his protective hold and embrace, him flirting with Ria. And before she could have started thinking rationally she found herself responding to his kisses with equal vigor.


Neil pulled up to remove his clothes but Mini didn’t let him break the contact as she kept kissing him all the while, not letting him go even for a second. They have had enough of things bottled up in these few days that it all were adding fuel to the fire. In just few minutes their clothes were lying on the floor. Neil caressed her whole body and showered her with wet kisses. Mini went mad with desires as she felt him down there. Both of them reached to the point of no return. The heat, the restlessness was too much to take in. Mini bit him on shoulder when she felt him claiming her. They moaned each others names as they made making wild and passionate love.

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Once the passionate haze cleared both of them realized what they did. Mini had almost panicked. It felt so weird yet so satisfying. Neil calmed her down with difficulty. Mini grabbed her clothes and left the room. She spent sometime alone trying to figure it out how it happened? Why it happened? Why the hell she liked it so much? Neil was also stunned because of sudden turn of events. He was the one who was pestering her to consummate the marriage but he was thinking that they will take it slow. First kissing, then making out and then when both of them will become comfortable they will have sex but suddenly everything just went out of hands. He thought about Mini. He knew she will be as confused as him may be even more. He needed to talk to her. So he went into her room after sometime. "We need to talk. come out." He said and took her for a long drive with beer crates. They reached their favorite spot. Mini was silent all the while.


“We need to talk Khurana.” Neil handed her a can of beer. Mini looked at him after hearing Khurana from his mouth after a longtime. She smiled and took the beer can. Right now she needed her best friend not the husband with whom she had made passionate love just a while ago. She shook her head to clear those images again from her mind.


“Is it weird? I mean, do I sound weird if I say I actually…uh….I actually liked it. It was one of my best so far…I mean…with you Oberoi..of all the people..how it can be….Arrrhhgg! its all so confusing.” Mini admitted as she gulped down whole can of beer. “You are not alone….I felt the same way Khurana. God! It was mind blowing. And yes it seems weird at first but I think…I think because of the connection we have between us…and yes the tension from last few days made it explosive.” Neil concluded and opened another beer can.


“But we are best friends.” Mini said helplessly. “Now husband and wife.” Neil reminded her. “Yes but…how it can be…I mean we never felt anything for each other beyond normal friendship then how come suddenly these kind of feelings…this jealousy, attraction, sexual tension…how come these things grew in our heart and become so strong to push us this much?” Mini questioned.


“I don’t know Khurana. May be all the people are right when they say marriage changes the equation between two individuals. We have always been there for each other, emotionally, but now since we have this…this facility to be there…to support or should I say to comfort each other physically….I think that’s the thing kept playing in our mind…we are human beings…we have our needs after all. We wont get anything from suppressing it.” Neil tried to explain.


“Then what about our relationship now? Who are we? Best friends? Lovers? Husband-wife? What?” Mini put forward her doubt as she wanted to know where they stand now. “Lovers? I don’t think so. Husband-wife, yes but we are more best friends and I don’t want to lose this friendship for anything.” Neil clarified. “Even I value our friendship more than anything.” Mini agreed. “Hmm…then till we sort out the confusion about these changing feelings we can call it ‘friends with benefits’.” Neil suggested a name.


Mini started laughing at him. "Oberoi...you are so tharki. I thought you will say till we sort out this confusion we will stay away from each other." “What? No, never. You were so damn good in bed Khurana. I am not going to make any false promise to you about not touching you again. I’ll rather f**k you everyday if I have a chance. Oh man! Why we didn’t do it earlier. It was superb.” Neil said while Mini just hit him on the shoulder. “Shut up you shameless man.” Neil laughed at her expressions. He pulled into a hug as they emptied their beer can.


It took some time for both of them to get accustomed to this newly developed physical proximity but soon they become habituated or rather addicted to it, to each other. They found that comfort zone where they were old besties in the light of the day while exploring each other sexually in the cozy darkness of their bedroom.


One night they were lying in each others arms, naked, under the sheets. “I like it when you call me wifey.” Mini confessed suddenly out of no where. “We should stop calling each other by surnames.” Mini suggested. “Why suddenly you came up with this idea?” Neil questioned. “I don’t know.” Mini shrugged. “Fine. I’ll call you wifey in the privacy of our room and Mini, in front of everyone.” Neil said not bothering about the reason of sudden change in names. He also liked it. He himself was thinking about it from sometime. “Ok then, I’ll also call you hubby in private while Neil in front of everyone.” Mini agreed.


“Ok wifey. What about we go for round two?” Neil asked as he turned towards her. “I think hubby, we should sleep now because we have test tomorrow.” Mini replied as she tried to push him away. “I am not worried about it. I know you’ll let me copy wifey.” Neil said and started caressing her under the sheet. “Stop it you pervert or else I wont allow you to copy my answers.” Mini giggled at the ticklish feeling. “Oh Really? Not even if I make you happy with my services?.” Neil winked and came on top of her once again and before Mini could have stopped him she found his hot and wet mouth wrecking havoc on her bare breast. She arched her back in anticipation as she saw him going down on her. After few minutes her legs quivered and toes curled as she experienced mind blowing orgasm. "Hubby....if you keep giving me these services then forget about copy....I myself will write your test paper." Mini whispered still riling from the after effects while Neil laughed at her. Before she could have recovered fully and gather her senses he had already claimed her and now was trying to take her to yet another fulfilling experience.

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Months passed and their academic year was about to get over. “Oye main kab se tujhse baat kar raha hoon. Tera dhyan kidhar hai?” Bobby asked from Neil when he didn’t answer him third time also. Bobby saw where he was looking and smiled. Neil was busy watching Mini. She was engrossed in her studies and making notes while Neil was just watching her. “Yaar teri hi biwi hai…kahi nahi ja rahi. Ghar par bhi to tu uske sath hi rehta hai. Kam se kam yaha to use ghoorna band kar.” Bobby teased him and Neil came out trance. “Kya hai? Bore mat kar yaar Bobby. Pata hai Mini bechari kitni tensed hai exams ko lekar. Raat mein bhi padhai karti rehti hai.” Neil replied and went towards Mini to sit with her. She was struggling with her hair which were falling on her face again and again. Neil sat beside her and put her hairs behind her ear. She smiled at him. Neil took a book and started helping her.


“Wow! They look so pretty together.” Preet said dreamily. “Neil bahut badal gaya hai nahi pichle kuch mahino mein? In fact ye dono hi bahut badal gaye hain. I mean they were always best friends but ab kuch jyada hi ek dusre ke sath rehte hain, zarurat se jyada parvaah karte hain, Never seen Neil like this with any girl.” Bobby commented. “Because, Mini is not any girl. She is his wife. Told you na, they will change slowly?” Preet reminded him of her prediction. “Ya, but unka ye smile karna, privates jokes par hasna…thoda ajeeb nahi hai?” Jazz questioned as she also joined the discussion. “Isme ajeeb kya hai Jazz? They are so much in love. Its common for any lovey dovey couple to behave like that.” Preet answered. “But do they realize this that they love each other?” Jazz questioned again. “I don’t think so.” Bobby answered. “Hmm….I think they can feel it but need some kind of trigger to voice out the feelings.” Preet made another observation.

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Their final exams were about to over. It was their last paper. Neil knew Mini was tensed about it. It was the most difficult paper. Neil just wanted to pass somehow so that his parents wont bother him about education and leave him alone to fulfill his dream of becoming writer but Mini was very serious about her results. Since his dad has started expecting from Mini that she will join him in the business, She didn’t want to disappoint dad in any way. She wanted to prove that she was worthy of it.


Neil saw how much efforts Mini had put in. She had spent almost all her days and nights also sometimes in studying since 3 months. And it was also Mini’s birthday today. So Neil wanted to give her surprise party. For it, he had been planning secretly. Everything from décor to food to music to drinks Neil wanted according to Mini’s choice.


“Sir, I am extremely sorry. We couldn’t get your gift on time.” Party planner informed Neil. “WHAT! But this surprise party is incomplete without that gift.” Neil expressed his views. He wanted to gift a special collage made of Mini and her family’s photo on her birthday. He knew how much she misses her family and this was her first birthday without them so he wanted to make it special for her. “But you said everything was all set then what happened?” Neil asked from the party planner. “Sir, I had sent my man to fetch the collage from the photo studio but it is located at other corner of the city. Right now some protest against government is going on in that area and administration has declared curfew there so our man is stuck because of it.” Party planner explained. “No, this is special party for Mini. Nothing can go wrong.” Neil said and saw the time. “There is still the time. I will go myself.” Neil said and before anyone could stop him he left the house.


Party planner informed this to Neil’s parents. “Neil, son come back. News mein aa raha hai us area mein law and order situation theek nahi hai. Mini ko gift baad mein de dena.” Seema requested. “No way mom. Its for Mini…my Mini…its her first birthday as my wife and I wont leave any chance to make it special. Wo aane wali hogi. Aap log surprise kariye use and keep her busy till I return.”Neil said and cut the call.


After her exams were over Mini wanted to return home as soon as possible but as per Neil’s plan her friends kept her busy till evening. Mini was upset that Neil left the college without her and he didn’t even wish her since morning. Around 7.00 pm Mini returned home and found the house empty. It was dark, not even a single light was on. She was wondering what happened when all lights turned on and everybody shouted, “SURPRISE.”


Mini was on cloud nine to see the surprise party. Mom, dad and all friends came one by one to wish her happy birthday but Mini didn’t see the face she was dying to see, her Neil. She knew it all must be his idea only. She was searching here and there for him when Yash noticed her restlessness. “Don’t worry, Neil will come soon.” “Wo tumhara special birthday gift lene gaya hai bas aata hi hoga.” Seema informed. Just then Yash’s phone rang and he picked it up. All colors drained from his face when he finally cut the call. “What happened? Kiska call tha?” Seema asked in worry. “Police….call from Police….a riot broke out in that area where Neil was gone and some people got severly injured. Neil is also injured and is admitted to the city hospital.” Yash informed.


Mini felt like her world came crushing down on her. Everything around her was revolving and she felt nauseated. She was about to fall down when Yash caught her. “Mini, are you alright?” he asked out of concern. Mini somehow managed to stand straight. “Dad, lets go to the city hospital. What are we waiting for?” Mini cried. All of them rushed to the hospital. They got to know that Neil has got head injury and was unconcious.


“Doctor, what has happened to him?” Seema rushed to the doctor and inquired. “The injury is not that serious but he is unconcious from some time now. We had run tests and waiting for the reports to see if there is any serious internal damage.” Doctor informed. Seema started crying while Yash consoled her. Mini was shocked. She couldn’t react. For her it was like a replay of that fateful incident when she lost her whole family. Her whole world was lost in just hours. She remembered those dark and cold days she spent crying for them. She remembered the feeling that lonely feeling like someone was sucking out her soul. The realization that she don’t have anyone in this world to call her own. Then she remembered how Neil gave her support during the darkest phase of her life. He was the only ray of hope on which she was clinging like her life depends upon it. How he brought her out of that phase. She got a family back by marrying him. How he became her family, her friend, her husband, her love…LOVE? Yes she loves him. Loves him more than anything in this world. He was everything to her….everything.


Mini marched into his room. Even though nurse tried to stop her but she didn’t listen. “Get up Oberoi. Get up right now. Enough of your tantrums. I am telling you I will kill you if you even thought about leaving me.” Mini fought with him as she held his collar. Nurse tried to stop her as she thought Mini might hurt Neil. “Let it be sister. They are best friends. Who knows if she can bring him back out of unconscious state." Yash said. Nurse wanted to argue with them that this is not some bollywood movie going on but looking at their emotional state she stayed quiet.


“I know you can hear me Oberoi. You are just teasing all of us here by doing this drama. But its pathetic….I’ll punch right on your face if you don’t stop this right now.” Mini threatened him once again. But Neil didn’t open his eyes. Mini started crying now. “Open your eyes Neil…please please don’t do this to me…I cant live without you…I love you….I love you so much…I’ll die if….” Mini was now continuosly crying. Her head was on Neil’s chest. She couldn’t see that he opened his eyes. “And I love you too wifey.” Neil whispered.


Mini pulled back and saw him smiling at her.“Sorry it took time and almost life threatening scenario to realize it but better late than never.” Neil said as he tried to laugh but grimaced when he felt the pain on his head. “Don’t laugh stupid.” Mini admonished him. “I was returning home with your gift when out of no where a petrol bomb was thrown at my car. It blasted just in front of me and everything went blank.” Neil told about the incident. “What was the need to go there even after knowing situation was not right there?” Mini complained. “I wanted to gift you a collage made up of your family photos. I know you miss them a lot. This was your first birthday without them so…” Neil stopped when Mini put her finger on his lips. “They are gone Neil. Yes I miss them but now you are my everything. Why you put yourself in danger for few photos?” Mini asked.


“I wanted to see that content smile on your face. I can do anything for it.” Neil confessed. “You are stupid. Next time you want to see that smile, you just come and hug me…ok? Nothing is more pleasing and comforting to me than your embrace.” Mini confessed. “When that bomb dropped on my car I thought my time has come I wont be able to see you again and that’s when all our moments flashed before my eyes and I realized how much I love you. At that moment I just wanted to see you once…just to confess my love.” Neil shared his near death experience. Mini just hugged him and rested her head on his chest while Neil hugged from his less injured hand.


Nurse was watching them with her mouth open. “Ok, I wont condemn now those stupid movies with hospital climax scene.” She resolved in her heart. Neil’s parents kept watching them for sometime with tear filled eyes. They were happy their son was alright and both the children loved each other so much. They left the room to give them privacy. Outside doctor also informed them that Neil’s reports are all clear. Nothing to worry about.

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Two Years Later



“There she was…my friend…my wife…my love, smiling at me. I hugged her and whispered “I love you” before placing a kiss on her forehead. “I love you too.” She replied as she returned the gesture.” Neil finished reading his book and looked up to see the reaction of listeners. He found everybody has that cute dreamy smile on their faces. It was a special reading session organised by publishers of Neil’s first book as it turned out to be the best seller and huge hit.


“ So guys hope you liked it listening from none other than Mr. Neil Oberoi, the author of the book, ‘Dil, dosti, yaari ….etc.’ Thanks for gracing this event with your presence. Now we start our interaction session. You can ask your questions to him.” The lady who was hosting the program announced.


“How are you feeling sir? First book and its huge success?” one media person asked. “It’s a great feeling. I am very excited and nervous also as now sabki ummeede meri agli book se aur badh jayengi.” Neil answered. “Sir, is it true that this story is based on your own life?” another media person asked. “Yes, its true. When I decided to write a book I struggled a lot with plot then I thought why not start with my own life story.” Neil replied.


“Sir, finally what are your views about a relation between a boy and girl? Do we have a clear answer now? Kya ek ladka aur ladki sirf dost ho sakte hain?” one man asked. “Yes, why not?” Neil answered confidently. “But you yourself fell in love with your best friend afterall.” Man argued. “Yes its true. But it doesn’t happen with everyone. See, I would like to answer your question in a different way. A boy and girl by nature are meant to get attracted to each other but they can maintain platonic relationship if they want to. I mean if my wife’s parents hadn’t died. If we had option of not getting married then who knows….we would still have been best friends. To sum up I’ll say all boy-girl friends have this potential to turn into lovers if circumstances allow them, if not then they can remain what they are.”


“Sir last question, Aapki book ki heroine se toh hum achhi taraf familiar ho chuke hain but aapki real life heroine I mean aapki wife ke sath aapka ek pic lena chahte hain. Fans ko bahut pasand ayega.” One girl requested. “Ya, sure why not.” Neil said and stood up from his seat. He came down from the stage and helped his wife Mini to stand up who was sitting in the very first row just like some fan girl to listen him reading his book. He supported her from back as she was 7 months pregnant now. He held her protectively from her waist as he posed for a picture with her. Everyone present there was in awe of this beautiful much in love couple. Now they could understand what made his book a huge success in spite of being just another love story, its because he poured his heart out into the book and it touched the heart of readers.

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The End.

Edited by anjali0111 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Neil writer just like you Anjali. Hope one day even your dream turn into reality.

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Wild MiNeil☺️🤣 they loved it . 🤣 so did we ☺️🤣

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And finally they fell in love their confession and mini preg how beautiful

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