MiNeil SS "My Child Bride" last part pg 70 updt 20/02/2021 - Page 8

Originally posted by: N_sharmaa

She looks beautiful and this is Mini after make over pacifying her Akdu hubby Neil

Suits the character also 😉 their nok jhok. Jungli billi and akdu Neil

Originally posted by: Krithzz

Suits the character also 😉 their nok jhok. Jungli billi and akdu Neil

Ash 😆 she always helps us .

Originally posted by: Krithzz

Anjali look at the bride perfect 😉 suits here

https://www.instagram.com/p/CIVu76Opj-Z/?igshid=1qzfauz90cjgv

perfect...she listens to our heart...dil se dil tak telepathy😆

Originally posted by: sub_94

Ash 😆 she always helps us .

haan always always....she knows us😆

Originally posted by: Krithzz

Loved Shaku Mini encounter. Shows Mini's character as of now. Bubbly , tomboyish and innocent,immature ,raw and her equation with shaku budhiya . It will be interesting to see journey of Mini from calling her budhiya to babes . Neil started his push pull game 🤣 whenever mini is Violent he uses trick and make her nervous 😉🤣Naeem bhi🤣 yet again perfect character for her that typical pan aunty of 70's film who come to brides house to stay 🤣i hope mini trouble her a lot 🤣

thanks a lot

shaku ko bhudhiya se babes tak ka safar Mini jaldi pura karegi🤣

Neil shatir khiladi started push and pull...par yaha jyada kaam nahi aane wala🤣

Naeem bi and paan...inseparable😆

Originally posted by: anjali0111

thanks a lot

shaku ko bhudhiya se babes tak ka safar Mini jaldi pura karegi🤣

Neil shatir khiladi started push and pull...par yaha jyada kaam nahi aane wala🤣

Naeem bi and paan...inseparable😆

🤣push pull shouldn't work here🤣 Mini is jungli billi .it should not fall in trap soon🤣thats the fun .seeing Neil ,Mini tadap will be ☺️🔥🤣

SouNoor par suit ho raha hai

Sundar kahani

Mujhe ye film bhi bahut pasand hai

Aam chor mini ka character bahut hi accha hai. film mein bhi mujhe bada pasand hai🤣

Aur Neil ka character abh progress hoga shaadi ke baad

🤣 lekin bechara 🤣

Yahan par bahut patience chahiye Neil ko 🤣

Originally posted by: zalima

SouNoor par suit ho raha hai

Sundar kahani

Mujhe ye film bhi bahut pasand hai

Aam chor mini ka character bahut hi accha hai. film mein bhi mujhe bada pasand hai🤣

Aur Neil ka character abh progress hoga shaadi ke baad

🤣 lekin bechara 🤣

Yahan par bahut patience chahiye Neil ko 🤣

thanks

yes they should have done something like this sounoor par bahut suit hota....unke liye custom made lagta hai....is story par toh bahut movies aur shows bane hain....shayad future mein phir se bane aur sounoor ko cast kare

neil ka push and pull kaam nahi ayega yaha...par koshish wo phir bhi karega🤣

aam chor sabki fav hai...represents that rebellious side inside every girl

Part 4

“Stay quiet and stand properly, stop moving.” Naeem bi ordered as she was trying to make saree pleats for Mini and Mini just made faces looking at her. She was tired now. Its been a week since this Naeem bi has arrived and she has been pain in the ass from day one for Mini. When she got to know that Mini’s marriage was fix she had laughed on Mini for almost 10 minutes straight. “I cant believe someone has the courage to marry this jhalli girl of your Ashok.” Naeem bi had said earning an angry glare from Mini. Once Mini’s father had told Naeem bi about the whole thing, how they got this proposal and for what he has called Naeem bi, she was acting like a Hitler. She had took it upon herself that she will teach all the girly things to Mini and ever since then she has been constantly bossing around her.

“Now do this yourself.” Naeem bi now asked Mini to make saree pleats again all by herself. Mini tried few times but couldn’t do it. Atlast after some 5 attempts she managed to make very messy pleats and before she could tuck them in it slipped from her hands. “F**k this! I am tired of it. Why is it so necessary to wear sarees? Its so bloody difficult and on the top of that its not even comfortable. I swear if I got the person who invented this pathetic dress I will strangle him to death.” Mini shouted and threw the saree away. “Itne bade khandan ki bahu banne wali ho shadi ke baad saree nahi toh kya apne ye ladko wale pant shirt pehen kar ghumogi? Chupchap khadi raho aur seekho. Cant believe how dumb you can be….pura din ho gaya aur ek saree pehen ni nahi aayi.” Naeem bi scolded her.

Mini wanted to scream at her but then one of the kid from her gang came in the window and gestured her to come out. Mini saw him and nodded her head. She started thinking of some idea to get rid of this Naeem bi. “Naeem bi, sorry, please aap ek bar aur khud pehen kar bata dijiye na main pakka seekh jaungi.” Mini requested in sweet voice. “Ok, give to me and learn properly.” Naeem bi took saree from her hands and started tying it around her waist. When she was busy looking down Mini snatched the one corner of saree from her hands and started wrapping it around her whole body. Naeem bi kept shouting but Mini kept laughing at her and at the end she wrapped the saree around her mouth tightly. Mini quickly changed in her favorite jeans and t shirt and jumped from the window to join her friends while Naeem bi tried to stop her but due to the saree she couldn’t move and instead hopped towards the window only to fall with face first on the ground.

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“Shakuntala we heard you gave Neil’s marriage proposal to that wild daughter of Ashok Khurana. Is it true? Neil is like some prince and that girl…she is one wild, uncouthed girl. And apart from this, Ashok is just your servant. There is no match neither in the boy and girl nor in the class and status.” Shakuntala’s friends who had come home for kitty party shared their doubts. “I know Saroj but Neil ki zidd ke aage mujhe haar maanni padi.”Shakuntala replied. “Kya zidd?” another friend asked. “He says he has fallen in love with that mango thief and he will only marry her. If I tried to fix his marriage with some other girl then he will leave the house immediately and wont get married his whole life.” Shakuntala explained.

“What? Such strong feelings for that chorni! Has she done some black magic over your son or what?” one more friend asked. “I don’t know. Neil says he has never seen a girl more beautiful than her and its like they are made for each other.” Shakuntala replied. “Hmm…sambhal kar rehna Shakuntala. Tera beta toh abhi se us chorni ke peechhe deewana hai kahi aisa na ho shadi ke baad tujhe importance dena hi chhod de.” Saroj tried to put doubt in Shakuntala’s mind. “No, this can never happen. Neil is young…I can understand his state of mind right now…young rebellious love….but he can never disrespect me for anyone. Neil ke papa ke jaane ke baad hum dono maa bete hi ek dusre ka sahara bane hain…Neil will never defy me.” Shakuntala replied proudly. “Hum bhi dekhte hain…kab tak tumhara beta tumhari sunta hai. Shadi ke baad achhe achhe shravan kumar bhi badal jaate hain aur tumhare case mein toh Neil pehle se hi is kadar fidaa hai us ladki par.” Saroj laughed and everyone else joined her while Shakuntala become worried for the first time as she thought can Mini snatch her son away from her?

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Mini was going to sneak out of the house again while Naeem bi was not paying attention but she caught Mini on the gate. “Where are you going you brat? Last time you fooled me but this time I will not let you escape so easily. Come inside, its time to learn some cooking.” Naeem bi pulled Mini inside and took her to the kitchen. “You will make dinner for us today, this is your task. Come now make a dough for chapatis and boil rice first.” Naeem bi instructed.

First Mini made the dough almost like a runny paste then she tried again this time ended up making it hard like some stone. She tried to make chapati but ended up making maps of different countries. All the while Naeem bi kept scolding her to do everything right. At last when she couldn’t take it she took the hot tawa from the gas stove and threatened Naeem bi with it. “Let me go Hitler or face the consequences.” Mini said in warning tone. “Baap re, kis jungli se paala pada hai…arre allah maari sasural mein jakar hamari naak katayegi ki kuch nahi seekh kar aayi maayke se….kuch toh seekh le. ”Naeem bi tried to reason. “To hell with sasural and to hell with your cooking class.” Mini said and banged the tawa on the kitchen platform due to which the plate containing flour flipped in the air and all the flour fell on Naeem bi’s head. Mini couldn’t stop her laughter after this and before Naeem bi could have washed her face Mini ran away.

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“I want everything best for Mini. The bed shouldn’t be too low or too high. Cupboard should have enough space to to keep her things.” Neil instructed the interior designer. “Once she will come here I will shower her with gifts. I will give whatever she wants.” Neil thought and resolved in his heart. Like any lovesick boy he was dreaming about his future with his beautiful wife. He wanted to re decorate his bedroom to make it more comfortable for Mini and more of a bedroom suitable for married couple as right now everything from the furniture to wall paintings everything gave a bachelor’s room vibes.

Shakuntala passed by his room and stopped to look how happy his son was. Neil noticed Shakuntala and went towards her, “Maa, have you started shopping for Mini? I think we should consult with a fashion designer and not just buy anything from local shops.” Neil gave his opinion. “Ya, jis ladki ko dhang se ladkiyo wale kapde pehen ne ki tameez nahi hai uske liye designer clothes…my son has really lost it.” Shakuntala thought. Seeing Neil’s excitement and all the things he is doing for that chorni Shakuntala couldn’t help but remember her friend Saroj’s words. “kahi aisa na ho shadi ke baad Neil tujhe importance dena hi chhod de.” She brushed off those thoughts as she could see how happy her son was and if that chorni gives him happiness then she will do all whatever he asks for her. “Maa, I cant tell you how ecstatic I was when Mini said yes to this marriage. I love her so much. I cant wait to start my life with her.” Neil said not knowing that actually Mini never said yes to the marriage. It was her father who agreed and took decision on Mini’s behalf.

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“Allah maari, zara ruk ja. Toofan mail ki tarah kaha bhagi ja rahi hai?” Naeem bi stopped Mini when she was about to jump from her window to get away from her. “No where Naeem bi.” Mini lied. “Jhooti kahi ki. Aur ab ye bandaro ki tarah uchhalna kudna band kar. Bade ghar ki bahu aisi harketin karte hue shobha nahi deti. Zara ladkiyo wali nazakat aur adaayein seekh.” Naeem bi replied. “Nazakat…adaayein…” Mini mocked her and started laughing. “Naeem bi, please keep your gyan to yourself….ye nazakat aur adaayein na abla naari types ladkiyo ko suit karti hain not on me.” Mini replied in attitude.

“Allah maari, teri shadi hone wali hai. Ye sab nahi ayega to pati ko kya uchhal kud karke rijhaayegi.” Naeem bi argued. “Rijhaayegi…what?Yuck! Naeem bi….mujhse nahi hoga ye sab.” Mini made a puking face. “Ya Allah! kya karu is jahil ka? Pata tha mujhe….kuch bhi nahi pata hoga is jhalli ko.” Naeem bi threw her hands up in frustration. She took deep breaths to calm down and then approached Mini again with different words now. “See Mini, you are going to be Neil’s wife. Apart from the relation of two hearts and soul, a marriage also signifies the union of …of two…bodies….” Naeem bi started nervously but Mini stopped her. “Chhee Naeem bi…ye aisi sab baatein karne ke liye aapne mujhe roka hai. Aapko sharam nahi aati budhiya hokar aap ye sab gandi gandi baatein kar rahi ho. ”Mini said and hid her face in her palms to hide her embarrassment.

“Offo! Kaise samjhaun is nasamjh ladki ko. Dekh Mini, jitna possible hua tujhe jaise taise maine ghar ke kaam kaaj sikha diya….You havent learned anything with perfection but atleast have an idea about it. See all these behaviour, manners, cooking etc is to please your mother in law and fit in their household. But what I am saying about your wifely duties is related to your husband. You can survive there if you do mistake in household chores but don’t do anything to offend your husband. Never show disinterest or push him away…ok?” Naeem bi gave her the advice which she believed was the ultimate formulae of successful marriage life.

Mini just nodded her head just to end this topic. She became very uncomfortable as she realized she hadnt thought about this much. Apart from curbing her freedom and changing her lifestyle this marriage is going to bring this cringeworthy thing in her life. She was not totally naïve, she knew about physical proximity but apart from what they show in some adult rated english movies she used to see sometimes, she was more or less clueless about it. And whatever she saw she used to find it yuckish, downright embarrassing that she used to skip that part. To add to that she was tomboyish. She didn’t have many girl friends who would share their experience on it. Her gang consists of mostly small boys so she couldn’t develop these kinds of feelings while growing up. She was truly a virgin…untouched in all senses….body, mind, heart and even by those feelings. Mini remembered her encounters with Neil and how she got those alien feelings which made her nervous like hell. That’s why she always used to run away from him but now…he is going to be her husband…how will she avoid him and till when? Mini wondered and become worried more than ever now. She felt frustrated when she couldnt understand any of this. “I hate you Neil Oberoi. Because of you my freedom is gone, because of you I am going through the torture of learning all sorts of household chores, because of you I am receiving lectures daily.” Mini thought.

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“What? Biji and dadu cant come for my marriage.” Mini asked in disbelief. “Mini, your dadu is not feeling well so Biji cant come leaving him alone.” Ashok explained. “Then ask those Oberois to postpone the marriage. How I can get married without my Biji and dadu?” Mini argued. “I tried beta. I went to badi malkin to discuss about postponing the wedding but she said that their pandit ji has finalised only this muhurat. This is some very auspicious muhurat to start new life and if they missed this date then due to some kundali dosh or something like that there is no other muhurat for 3 months.” Ashok repeated Shakuntala’s words. “Then postpone this marriage for 3 months.” Mini reasoned as 3 months was not that much of a long time that they cant agree. “Beta badi malkin told me that Neil is going back to Delhi after two months. He will become busy in his MBA. So they cant postpone the marriage.” Ashok replied.

“But papa….how can I….you know how much I love Biji and dadu and dadu is sick and you expect me to do marriage?” Mini started sobbing now. “Please try to understand Mini, badi malkin ki baat bhi toh sahi hai na….kya kar sakte hain.” Ashok tried to explain. “You know what….I will not get married without my Biji and dadu’s presence….never ever…its my final decision.” Mini declared and shut the door of her room.

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After a week Mini found herself being taken to the mandap dressed up as bride. After announcing her decision of not getting married she was made to swallow her pride and get ready as she had no other option. Her papa and Naeem bi had emotionally blackmailed her into saying yes or else they would not eat anything and end up falling sick themselves. After two days Mini couldn’t resists and gave up. She knew she was doomed now. She hated this marriage and wanted to run away till the last minute but she knew her father would not be able to survive this shame. So with heavy heart she accepted her fate.

Neil looked at Mini. She looked even more beautiful than his dreams in bridal red saree. He still cant believe she was going to be his…his precious little doll…his jungli billi….his beautiful bride. When pandit ji instructed, Neil took the pinch of sindoor and put it in Mini’s mang. While doing so he came closer and whispered so that only she could hear it, “Mine.” Neil smiled while Mini who was looking down till now, looked up for the first time with shock and tension written all over her face as the meaning of his word dawned upon her. She hated him more now to announce his claim over her like this. All she wanted to do was to give a punch on his snobbish nose but couldn’t as he tied the mangalsutra around her neck and after that pandit ji asked them to stand up for the pheras. She took the pheras absent mindedly and before she came back to her senses, they were pronounced as husband and wife.

to be continued....

Saroj🤣 gave her perfect bitching role 🤣like we see those aunty kitty party friends of in laws 🤣 poor Mini and poor Neil 🤣 both will have tough time 🤣 but they are married that's most beautiful.