RiAnsh SS :" Trapped ( Final Chapter on Page 46)[ update on 27/1/2021] - Page 10

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

too confusing frankly I m finding riddihima stupid just confess whole truth madame what are you afraid of. even he is not Vansh at least he knows the whole of he is imposter he is already scamming money which you can't stop

I understand what you mean , I am sorry if it was too confusing , as far as making Riddhima confess fully , i know it my fault because I haven't decided how to proceed with the story in that angle yet. And hence her delay to admit everything.

It was written from Riddhima perspective mostly , that the update seems more confusing I guess, hopefully if I update next which will be from Vansh perspective it will be better , at this point I don't know if I will extend it , so let see .

Thank you for your feedback ❤️.

Nice chapter dear 👍🏼

Riddhima give it back to kabir love that ❤️

Also liking game of vihaan n vansh 😆

Ishani loves his bro truly 😳

Continue

Keep writing ;)

Originally posted by @Blurred Lines

Wow each chapter gets better and better just waiting for the next...impatiently; it brilliantly written, well done👌👌👌

Originally posted by: Abhyudaya

Indeed. Having a lot of expectations on this track and hope makers fulfil it.

Yeah , wishing the same ❤️

Originally posted by: Tumpa12

Interesting loved it update soon

Thanks dear , Glad you liked it ❤️

Originally posted by: Dreamgirl08

Superb dear

Thank You , Glad you liked it ❤️

Originally posted by: SoniRSippu21

Thank you Nita for continuing🤗 I loved this chapter. I loved when Ridz replied back to kabir like a sherni😆. I am loving to see how Kabir is getting all scared seeing Vansh. Vihaan or vansh telling aangre to withdraw money lol its kinda like how its shown in today epi hehe Vihaan asking for money for puja n all haha

Hehe Ishaani i am liking her nowadays so the portion u wrote for her was good, glad daadi said to let vihaan aka vansh take decision regarding ridz but why vihaan u should have kicked KaAP out🤣

Continue soon, I am loving it

Thanks Soni 🤗. I am glad you liked it ❤️. And I have lots of questions on the show but in my rush to finish this update, I didn't even ask them from you. Because as you know I feared I would be MIA for few days and wanted to post it before that.

I do have some sort of idea with Vihaan as Vansh also Vansh as Vihaan idea for the next update 🤪. Let see if it materializes .

Regarding kicking out KaAP, does Vansh or Vihaan know about AP yet in the show? I was under the assumption he only knew about Kabir and Riddhima for now 😆

Originally posted by: Unique.Sheep

Yayyyy i read it😳 i know it must be difficult but so far you have written everything so accurately...esp Riddhima being confused just like she is in the show🤣 and the wise Dadi is my fav character <3

i would be happy if you continue but I love open endings too...thats my style!😆 If you decide not to continue, then I hope you bring in a new story!

I am confused about all the characters like Riddhima 🤣 , the basic thing in a show on how everyone address everyone I don't even know 😆.

Certain things you can pick up only if you watch , the characters most used dialogue or mannerisms and I feel like even if I continue this one , it may be missing , so if I continued I will try to wrap it in two or three chapters.

Thanks for the feedback Hinna , glad you liked it ❤️. open ending seems like a good idea at the moment too 😆. Let see

Originally posted by: MafiaQueen17

Nice chapter dear 👍🏼

Riddhima give it back to kabir love that ❤️

Also liking game of vihaan n vansh 😆

Ishani loves his bro truly 😳

Continue

Keep writing ;)

Thanks dear 🤗, glad you liked it ❤️. Will try to continue if I can .

Originally posted by: Wynn

Originally posted by @Blurred Lines

Wow each chapter gets better and better just waiting for the next...impatiently; it brilliantly written, well done👌👌👌

Thanks dear 🤗, Glad you liked it ❤️. Will try to continue