Pride & Prej with a twist - Page 96

She opened her bathroom door to peek at the flowers on her desk

Humungous arrangement on a sparkly bowl

She contemplated thanking him

“No don’t… he will take it as you trying to kiss up” her mind warned

“Hmm” she nodded

Yet another no thank you and no acknowledgment to Ranaav 😳

Does Veev like Raanav?”

“Pata nahi…. Ek dum shock mein hain who”

“Main baat karti hoon…. He is also BIG TROUBLE”

“Tum to aise kisi se nahi karwake dogi apni betiyon ki shaadi”

“I cant” Anu choked up

“Have a good evening… so jao jaldi”

“Naina ko sochkar neend bhi nahi aati…

A mother’s antenna is always up and protective when her children are in difficult situations. Whether she has to power to protect or not, she will definitely lose sleep over it thinking every possible combinations if the outcome. Hugs to Anu 🤗- from one mom to another

Naina fell in and out of love….

“Will you ask Raanav if he will meet me? He has blocked me”

“Umm.. I… uh… umm.. I don’t know if that’s a good idea”

“WHY NOT?” Naina held her head and sat on the bed

“Because I don’t even know him….”

“So you want to protect YOUR reputation”

“No Naina… jaanti nahi main bande ko”

“TO? SHAADI kaise karogi tum?” naina accused

“I don’t know…. I don’t know if I am”

“You just want to be selfishly happy, you don’t want me to join that family”

“Aisa nahi hai jaan” Viveka kneeled on the floor and begged

“Don’t you think its strange he proposed to you a second after Inder dumped me?”

She was a queen of conspiracy theories

Viveka did not tell her she had the proposal for 3 months now

Or 2?

“Umm.. yeah he told Papa anD Ma on Saturday”

“Achhe log nahi hai Veev… they are horrible, crooked, devious people” Naina hugged Viveka protectively

“Hmmm…”

“We BOTH are better off shunning them” naina visibly relaxed

Naina is so bipolar - she wants Viveka to talk to Ranaav about Inder abd her and in the same convo, she want to shun them. Confused heartbroken state 💔

I am also sad that she is so egocentric - not wiling to hear about Veevs state of mind and being happy for her. Instead constantly focusing on her breakup and bickering about story.

Inder blocked naina?!?!?🙄🙄🙄

Aakhir hua kya hai..dono ke beech!!!!!

Oh damn! Naina is being so vicious! Not just towards Viveka, but infact, towards all and sundry.. her parents, the Parashars..

I guess she's hurting, so she grudges the possibility of Viveka's happiness with Raanav.. doesn't want to face Inder and the Parashars since things didn't work out between them? I mean, the lot of them wasn't really supportive of the ex couple!

She's unable to accuse or fight with Inder and the Parashars, the only link she has with them now is her next best target!

But her heartbreak and grief is slowly losing significance for people.. she's coming across as totally self absorbed with the way she's reacting.

Also, her jibes at Viveka again make me wonder, just what does she grieve more? The loss of Inder or the loss of a rich boyfriend?!! Ughhh.. all that anger about her having a rich boyfriend or becoming a part of that family!

A quote comes to mind.. that said something to the effect that the real nature of a person is indicated by how they are at their lowest.

I loved All About Me and Misery Loves Company.

Loved that he sent flowers. His message.... simple and sweet ❤️

Felt a bit sad when her first reaction was about Abhishek. That she's still waiting for this Raanav thing to blow over. But then Abhishek is still the boyfriend!

But her being so conscious about receiving the flowers and her refusal to thank him gives a lot of hope 😳

Another favorite was Naina's illusions crashing a bit.. sadistic? Maybe... but she's going overboard with Viveka! Her accusations on her sister are outright spiteful.

Waiting for the next encounter with Raanav

Naina got her bubble burst. Viveka is so unassuming, she didn't even harbor the possibility that it was for her.

We still don't know what prompted Inder to dump Naina. Naina was all into that family when she thought she had the inroads, and now the same family is dirt when she doesn't.

@ Barrister, yes Naina assumed she had that "win" in her bag. She never had to compete with Viveka really. They have their own professional successes. They didnt even like the same type of man growing up

Now suddenly she finds her SJW sister being wooed by a gorgeous wealthy man

That too minutes after she was soundly dumped by her BF

@PravanG

Thank you... appreciate it. These characters are *mine* I bring these to life painstakingly by creating backstories and emotions for them.

This Forum is open and free and this tale is a classic, anyone can start a new adaptation from scratch. I am sure it will be a blockbuster. I suggest you should start one immediately😃

I have heard some fiction here receives a 1 lakh or a million likes per chapter

Your best bet is to go after those and convince those authors to accept the "a chapter by a reader" format, you will be assured of instant fame and stardom

I havent read any other fictions on this Forum in years. I post a chapter or two daily and hang out with my besties ❤️and go off and live my mundane life

I have a faithful readership of measly 30? 40? regulars.. max, that I would like to hang on to please if you dont mind😃

Thanks for reading