Hi,
Thank you for updating the next part. It was lovely, but I don't know something felt missing or like it was incomplete in some way I am not able to say or get what is missing or incomplete. I might be wrong but truth fully this just felt like i am reading a comment and not a part of the story.
Sorry if I offended you in anyway that was not my intention, I just thought that yo would like if I commented truthfully.
Rest is upon you. All the best for your future parts.[:-)].
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