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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 71


Fabulous and Heart Warming


Dadi and Aditi speaking and it seems like

Dadi wants both Geet and Aditi to be around her

Geet now realizes that she cannot blame the families

though she still blames Maan fully and she is not yet

prepared to take half the blame because their separation is because

of both Geet and Maan together not understanding the situation

Maan will really miss both Aditi and Geet

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Posted: 5 years ago

71

nice

daadi trying to converse with geet through aditi

maan is upset as geet is going

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 71

incredible update... well written

dadi seems to have bonded with Aditi.

Geet realises that the families were not at fault and she blames Maan.

well the families did play a role in their separation.

Maan is not the only one to blame.

sad that Geet is leaving

of cos Maan is upset...

will they ever get back together?>

wish that they would speak about everything

update soon


thanks for the pm

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Part - 72


Geet is worried about the tickets....

Geet: Dev, when is our flight?

Dev: God only knows

Geet: what? you haven't booked the tickets yet?

Dev: nahi Geet, tickets milna mushkil lagtha hai

Geet: that's why I wanted to book the return tickets too

Dev: I booked then on Sunday Geet, but how would we know that there would be such a lock down?

Geet: tickets mil jayenge na?

Dev: Maan is trying

Geet: why don't we try?

Maan just enters.....

Maan: Geet, there are no tickets available for anyone, not just me

Maan says candidly....

Dev; Geet, Maan has been trying hard, you should appreciate that first

Geet: it's too late for that, you should have tried in time, now what's the use?

Geet says in a stern tone looking direct into Maan's eyes....

Dev is little confused here.....

Dev: Geet, what are you talking about?

Geet: oh, I think now we won't get any ticket however hard you try

Dev: what do we do now?

Geet: I think we should hit the road

Maan: Geet, it's not safe to take the road

Dev: we'll be fine Maan

Maan: you should think about Aditi Geet

Maan's tone turns authoritative.....

Geet: I know what I'm doing, you need not worry about Aditi

Dev: Geet, what happened? I think she must be upset about mom

Geet: haan, we should return immediately Dev

Dev: Maan, I think Geet is right, I don't think there is any chance of getting a flight, we should get going

Maan: wait Dev, just give me some time, we'll see what we can do

Dev: but Maan, it's already too late, we should retuen by Saturday evening

Geet: Dev, we can't wait and waste time, let's go

Maan: Geet, have some patience, Dev, I promise you that you'll get back in time, don't worry

Dev: OK Maan, but I have to catch a flight by tomorrow noon

Maan: I know Dev, you just stay this night, we'll find a way by morning

Dev: hope so

Maan: I can't let you take the road, just forget that thought

Maan says it loud and clear just for Geet.....

Geet too knows that it's not safe as Maan is saying.....

Geet finally gives up.....

Maan again starts calling some of his acquaintance in the airlines but there is no seats in any airways...

After dinner Dev is with Aditi while Geet is still at KM talking with Kiran.....

Kiran: Geet, hum aapse kuch baat karna chahthe hai, yahan aayiye, hummare paas beitiye

Kiran asks Geet to sit down and have a chat with her....

There is no one but the two in the garden....

Geet: ji maaji

Kiran: humme patha hai ki aap abhi bhi purane bathon se pareshaan hai

Geet remains silent....

Kiran: hum ne sahi socha, aap ne abhi tak hum sab ko maaf nahi kiya haina?

Geet: aaisa kuch nahi hai, mujhe aap sab se koi shiqayaat nahi hai, mein jaanthi hoon ki aap ki koi galthi nahi hai

Kiran: phir toh aap ko Maan ko bhi maaf karna chahiye beta

Kiran has noticed the tiffs between the two.....

Geet: jab mein puarne bathon ko bhool chuki hoon toh maafi ki kya zaroorat hai?

Kiran: aap aaise kaise joot bol sakthe beta? jab hum log hi bhool na paye toh aap kaise bhool pathe?

Geet has no answers for that.....

Kiran: aur unko bhoolna bhi namunkheen hai, ye achche baat hai ki ab aap apne zindagi mein aage bad chuke hai aur apne zindagi mein khush hai, hum bas Maan ko bhi aaisa kush dekhna chahthe hai beta, aur kuch nahi

Geet looks at Kiran confused.... Maan ki kushi se Geet ka kya lena dena hai, haina?

Kiran: humme lagtha hai ki jab tak aap Maan ko maaf nahi karthe Maan aaise hi apne aap ko dand dethe rahenge aur kabhi bhi apne zindagi mein aage nahi bad payenge, issiliye hum chahthe hai ki aap Maan ko maaf kardhijiye aur unko unki adheek se azaad kijiye

Geet ko Kiran ki gabrahat samajh aathi hai.....

Geet: mein koshish karoongi maaji, sirf aap ke liye

Kiran suddenly hugs Geet and kisses her in the forehead.....

Kiran: thanks beta, ab hum bahut kush hai, hum jaanthe hai ki aap bhi Maan ko kush dekhna hi chahthe hai

ye toh Kiran ne bilkul teek kaha, Geet bhi Maan ko kush dekhna hi chahthi hai, par Geet ko samajhna chahiye ki Maan ki kushi Geet hi hai.....

Maan goes to meet Dev.....

Dev: Maan, what happened? kuch mila?

Maan: I'm sorry Dev, there are no seats

Dev: It's OK Maan, we'll take the car

Maan: that's not done

Dev: what should we do then?

Maan: I have an idea

Geet just comes and joins them....

Geet: Dev, kitne bajhe ka flight hai?

Dev: Geet, nahi, no tickets

Geet: I told you na, we'll start early in the morning, I think you should take some rest now

Maan: Dev, why don't you take my ticket?

Dev: that's fantastic, but what about you?

Maan: you know, work is stopped due to the pandemic, I'm not in a hurry

Dev: thanks a lot Maan, I'm much relieved, I was so worried

Maan: I know Dev

Geet: what about us?

Dev: haan Maan

Maan: you have to stay back till it's safe to travel

Geet: what? that's impossible

Maan: Geet, you better think about Aditi

Dev: Maan is right Geet, you should stay back till it's safe to return, you don't worry about mom, I'm there na

Geet: but Dev, hum yahan akhele kaise reh sakthe?

Maan: Geet, sab haina? tumme chintha karne ki koi zaroorat nahi, Aditi is one of us

Geet doesn't want to argue further for Maan would go to any extent for Aditi's safety.....

Dev: haan Geet, actually Aditi has a lot of company here, and I'll also miss these guys

Maan: They'll miss you too Dev, specially Vicky, ab woh Maan bhai nahi Dev bhai kethe rehtha hai

Dev: he is so much fun, I just love hanging out with him, Maan, you are the odd one out here, I think you should take things a little easy, kabhi toh kaam ko chodke life ko enjoy karo yaar

Maan: what to do Dev? our happiness is not always in our hands, haina Geet?

Maan looks at Geet and asks directly.....

Geet just tries to avoid his eye contact which is becoming more and more difficult now....

Geet: Dev, Aditi soo gayi hai, hum chalthe hai

Geet takes Aditi and leaves.....

Maan and Dev to go to their room......

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Tickets were not available so maan gave his ticket and geet aditi staying KM till flights opens

Maan didn't want aditi to take any risk as fr Geet too

Kiran trying to make everything good around she want geet to let go any bitterness left in her heart bz she want to see Maan happiness and this possible when Geet forgive Maan

Hope this time Maan able to wash every sadness and bitterness in geet mind and cleared all misunderstandings

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 72

tremendous update

well no tickets are available.

at least Maan was trying to get tickets

Geet adamant on leaving

can understand Maan's concern for Aditi

glad that Kiran confronted Geet

when will Geet realise that Maan's happiness is her and Aditi?

so now Geet and Aditi have to stay.

great that Maan have Dev his ticket.

now Maan has an opportunity to speak to Geet....

wish that they would speak and clear everything

update soon


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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 72


Fascinating Update


Maan he is really doing his best for

Geet and Dev together

so now Geet wants to leave is it because

she cannot be close to Maan

or she really wants to be with Dev's mother

Maan's aunt speaks to Geet and its right

it is time that Geet forgives Maan for the past

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Posted: 5 years ago

Great part

Cont soon

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Posted: 5 years ago

Very I retesting how geet and maan are addressing each other but in subtle ways only they understand it is aimed at the other person

Hope Gayatri ma is okay. She is a good person. Glad that dev will be going to her making geet stay back with Aditi. Hope maan and geet get somethings sorted at least

understand Kiran asking geet to talk to maan but she has no idea that maan can never move forward neither can geet


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Part - 73




Next morning.....


Pari just arrives at KM.....


Tara tells her that Maan is in the OH....


Pari goes to surprise Maan....


Pari: Maan, Maaaaan


Pari goes to Maan's room and its not locked....


Pari thinks Maan must still be sleeping and goes to wake him and give him a good morning surprise....


Pari enters the room and starts looking for Maan....


Maan is not in the bed....


Pari finds out that Maan is in the rest room....


Pari wants to play a prank....


She goes and hides beside the rest room door so that she can shock him as he comes out....


Pari waits and in a few minutes she hears the door knob opening....


She comes in front of the door and yells.... : surprise


Actually it's a surprise for Pari.....


It's not Maan but Dev who is inside the rest room....


Dev thouhgt it's Maan and he just wanted to peep out and ask for towel....


Dev: Maan, my towel


But by then Pari is out and she springs the door open to surprise Maan....


Pari freezes and Dev quickly closes the door.....


Pari: I'm sorry, I thought it's Maan


Dev then opens a bit and asks for his towel....


Pari picks the towel, gives it to Dev and escapes....


Maan has gone to get the ticket ready for Dev's travel instead of Maan....


Pari goes and joins Geet and others for breakfast....


The girls are alone, Tara, Annie, Geet and Pari along with Aditi and Diya....


Pari: girls, come closer, I've a secret to share


hare Pari, Geet ke samne Dev ki secrets kasie kol sakthi ho?


The girls round up....


Pari: you know what happened?


Tara: just say na? you know we don't know what happened, then why ask?


Pari: sshhh, Aditi aur Diya ke khaan band karo


Annie: Pari, it's too much, they won't understand anything


Pari: mujhe sharam aathi hai


Geet: phir kyun patha rahi ho?


Annie: sshh Geet, let her speak


Pari: patha hai bhai ke suhaag raat mein kya hua?


Tara: kya hua?


Pari: Tanvi made bhai over work it seems


Tara: pehle din hi? she must be a super woman then


Pari: that's not the fact, it's my bhang that made her a super woman, my idea is a grand success


Annie ko kuch kuch samajh aatha.....


Annie: toh ye tummara kaam hai?


Pari: kyun didi?


Annie: tumne kiss kiss ko bhang di?


Pari: mujhe kya patha? it was Maan's job


Annie: what? bhai ne kiya ye kaam?


Pari: Maan Pari ke liye kuch bhi karenge


Geet ko thoda bhura laga.... Maan Pari ke kehne se aaisa kaam bhi kartha?


zaroor Pari se impress hua hai Maan kuch zyada hi, haina?


Annie: lekhin Arjun aur bhai ne kaise woh bhaang piya hoga?


Pari: maybe Maan wanted to have fun, but mere bina kaise fun?


Annie: kuch toh galat ho gaya, aur Arjun ne toh pura raat mujhe sone nahi diya tha


Pari: achcha, lucky you didi


Annie: tummara masti toh unlimited ho raha hai Pari, you need to be careful


Pari knows that it's true, she just experienced it.....


Pari: you are right didi, I'll be careful next time


Geet ko abhi patha chala ki Maan ko galthi se bhang pilaya gaya aur woh kuch kuch piya nahi....


Geet is relieved.... Geet knows that Maan has quit alcohol strictly.... she has seen him drink only mocktails at the business parties.....


Par utna nashe mein bhi Maan ne kuch khand nahi ki....


Geet bhi uss waqt thoda kamzoor hi thi, Maan chahe toh kuch bhi ho saktha tha, lekhin Maan preffered not to.... he was content to be with Geet..... he just wanted to share her pain and help her heal a bit..... he just wants her to come out of that pain... he wants to get rid of that pain that he himself induced...


Geet kept her wounds sealed for she didn't want to reveal them to anyone but Maan....


Only Maan can hurt her to that extent and also Maan can only cure her wounds.....


Geet ke zindagi mein Maan ke jagah ko koi aur le hi nahi saktha.....


Maan and Dev too come and join them....


Maan is surprised to see Pari....


Maan: Pari, itne subhe subhe?


Pari: I just wanted to give you a surprise


Dev: but surprise toh mujhe mil gaya


Everyone looks at Dev, Pari too looks at him and pleads not to open his mouth.....


Dev: woh Pari came to meet Maan but she just met me instead, Maan went out na?


Pari: haan, that's it


Pari is relieved....


Maan: so you came to send me off?


Pari: what? no no, that's the surprise, I'm not going to leave you alone, I'm coming with you, tada


Pari shows the ticket....


Dadi had asked Adi to book Pari's ticket too along with Maan's....


Pari is going to Pune to take part in her late mangetar Karan's anniversary.....


It's been a year since Karan met with that lethal accident....


Dev: another surprise for me?


Maan: I think so Dev, so you got a better company Pari, Dev would accompany you not me


Pari is feeling a little awkward to be going with Dev after the morning fiasco....


Pari: what?


Maan: haan, there's my surprise for you, how do you like it?


Pari: it's not fair Maan


Maan: everything is fair on war and love honey


Dev: Pari, are you upset or happy with my company?


Pari: hmmm let me think, I don't know, I'll tell you once we land in Mumbai


Dev: done


Pari is not much by Maan's absence for she has got Dev's company....


Dev is a easy go funny guy who keeps you entertained unlike the khadoos Khurana, haina?


waise Maan ka chapter ko Pari ne end kardhi hai, ab Pari is missing Karan the most....


Karan hotha toh Pari ko kitna kush raktha?


Pari is in no mood to fight with Maan now.....


She has accepted that Maan is taken for life by that lucky girl.....

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