Pride & Prej with a twist - Page 69

One tip Nisha. Have you tried pasting the content from word on notepad first before pasting on the forum? That should resolve the missing spaces issue.

"Viveka thought about why she was unable to express her hurt andanger at being left alone to Abhishek

Why did he not even see it?

How do you get mad at someone who doesn’teven know what they did?

“I have such an urgent need to be liked and loved I am clutching on to him”she cursed out loud clenching the steering

“Is it because Naina has one that I feel compelled to be in a relationship even tho I feel so let down by him? Why am Inot able to truly connect with him without feeling like a fraud?

Unlike her research scholar friends she never had an era of lot of dates… her life was filled with decadent book parties, and late nights at some playwright or author’s tastefully decorated Munirka apartment, tables laden with booze and desi Chinese or take out paav bhaji as they animatedly discussed ways to restore economic prosperity in India

No sophisticated men in bespoke shirts smelling like birch

Her stomach did a somersault"

Beautiful piece of self reflection and introspection beautifully laid out by the author for us . The ability to get into every character's head is just awesome Nisha .

Viveka does a deep dive within to rationalize her feelings on where she's at the moment with regard to her thoughts, her emotions , behavior and may be even decision perhaps? It's this ability to real time self reflect, pay attention to what's happening with her and around her that sets her apart.

On Abhishek, she couldn't have expressed it better. He's not mean .... he's just limited a guy like countless others.Most men and women are not ideal. That's why we look for and romanticize perfection in people who matter to us.

For Abhishek it's about him, his troubles and his interests. That's his scent He's just an average Joe , not the ideal hero we are looking for in a romantic hero.

In Raanav, it's the aristocracy that marks his scent . It's just not the bespoke and birch but What's different about his scent is that he knows how to GIVE as well.

The dude is messing up her equilibrium. Its good she is realizing now that Abhishek took her for granted and ignored her.

I was quite amused. The Parashars for the world are born with the platinum spoon kind. In this story the Mathurs are themselves silver. So we gotta keep up with the times and bend the adage a wee bit 🤣

But the point more here is he considers himself an underdog in viveka's world.... that I find is very amusing

Coderlady!!

Why did "I" think of THAT? Last story I wrote it entirely on wordpad because I had Microsoft Office license issues

Its a fantastic idea

Thanks for the brilliant tip

Your name checks out

Originally posted by: Errrantnomad

"Viveka thought about why she was unable to express her hurt andanger at being left alone to Abhishek

Why did he not even see it?

How do you get mad at someone who doesn’teven know what they did?

“I have such an urgent need to be liked and loved I am clutching on to him”she cursed out loud clenching the steering

“Is it because Naina has one that I feel compelled to be in a relationship even tho I feel so let down by him? Why am Inot able to truly connect with him without feeling like a fraud?

Unlike her research scholar friends she never had an era of lot of dates… her life was filled with decadent book parties, and late nights at some playwright or author’s tastefully decorated Munirka apartment, tables laden with booze and desi Chinese or take out paav bhaji as they animatedly discussed ways to restore economic prosperity in India

No sophisticated men in bespoke shirts smelling like birch

Her stomach did a somersault"

Beautiful piece of self reflection and introspection beautifully laid out by the author for us . The ability to get into every character's head is just awesome Nisha .

Viveka does a deep dive within to rationalize her feelings on where she's at the moment with regard to her thoughts, her emotions , behavior and may be even decision perhaps? It's this ability to real time self reflect, pay attention to what's happening with her and around her that sets her apart.

On Abhishek, she couldn't have expressed it better. He's not mean .... he's just limited a guy like countless others.Most men and women are not ideal. That's why we look for and romanticize perfection in people who matter to us.

For Abhishek it's about him, his troubles and his interests. That's his scent He's just an average Joe , not the ideal hero we are looking for in a romantic hero.

In Raanav, it's the aristocracy that marks his scent . It's just not the bespoke and birch but What's different about his scent is that he knows how to GIVE as well.

My word!

I absolutely loved the part of the update you've quoted. It is brilliant!

And your thoughts on it too resonate with me.. you've worded them so well!

That introspection by Viveka was awesome!!

There're so many 20 somethings who go through relationships like one would flip channels on a TV!

They wouldn't pause to think what really went wrong with the last one..

Most can't figure out if they are with someone because they want to be with that person or because they just want to be with some person!

The need to fit in with what our peers and society think is ideal is... cruel? Sad? Sadistic? Idk!

We often end up looking for happiness in what others prescribe should make us happy.. rather than what really could!

OK get ready for four more years of wasteful wars, 10,000 20 year old American soldiers getting killed for no fault of theirs as we send them to faraway lands. Not to mention millions killed in faraway lands

Four more years of unbridled illegal immigration

4 more years of sanctuary cities in every state

Legalizing pot drugs, homelessness

4 more years of the same Dem crap that gave us Trump

Hillary and Trump will be in b-- together at some high profile DC wedding. They have conned us all into believing one is more noble than the other

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

OK get ready for four more years of wasteful wars, 10,000 20 year old American soldiers getting killed for no fault of theirs as we send them to faraway lands. Not to mention millions killed in faraway lands

Four more years of unbridled illegal immigration

4 more years of sanctuary cities in every state

Legalizing pot drugs, homelessness

4 more years of the same Dem crap that gave us Trump

Hillary and Trump will be in b-- together at some high profile DC wedding. They have conned us all into believing one is more noble than the other

KO(A)MALA vilas( read that as villas ) is even worse a disaster. I agree. Well said Nisha.👏

All my Desi echo chamber is rejoicing! I am guaranteeing you Desis will use every tax loop hole to not pay a DIME in reparations for blacks or DACA

And Desis will be the FIRST ones to flee sanctuary cities like SFO and Seattle. No desis want tent cities and drug needles and human feces around their property!!

Naare lagaane mein my friends are champions. When I say how about you start donating "$100 a month to Black college fund"

Then these millionaires will run like their clothes are on fire

Its very "cool" to sip high end wine and declare we love illegals and inner city crime.

NIMBY (Not in my backyard)