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Today, the Raghuvanshis were going to visit "Tanah lot". Located on a beautiful offshore rock in Tabanan regency, Bali, Tanah Lot or 'Land on the Sea' is a Hindu shrine believed to be about 500 years old.

URMILA- omg.. these sculptures and designs are so rare... These look amazingly beautiful..

Exclaimed Urmila looking at the island and the rock designs around. From this beautiful rock temple, the Pura Ulu Watu temple site on the cliffs to the south can be seen, and a long sweep of azure waters to the west, near Negara can also be witnessed.

SHRUTI- this place is literally a photographer's paradise. Look at its astounding architecture and intricate rock faces.

Shruti points her finger to indicate everyone to show them the rock designs. They reached at the temple's rock base, there is a fountain called Tirta Pabersihan that is believed to spout holy water.

RAM- watch for the steps..

Ram ask everyone to step down the stairs carefully.

URMILA- ouch...

Urmila's foot got lightly twist as she step on a rock.

SIYA- careful...

Shouts Siya looking upstairs at Urmila.

LAKSHMAN- dekha. ? That's why I have asked you to not wear these heels.

Said Lakshman holding urmila's hand. She pouts at him.

SHATRUGHAN- ha but the problem is.. they never listen to us..

Shruti hits Shatrughan's shoulder as he complains about the girls.

LAKSHMAN- areh.. agar biwiyo ne patiyo ki bat maan li to duniya oolti nahi ho jayegi..?

Taunts lakshman while Bharat giggle at this.

MANVI- excuse me..

Manvi looks angrily at Bharat while he gulped in fear.

URMILA- agar patniyo ki burayi karna ho gaya ho then should we move..? Dii and jiju are waiting for us..

Said Urmila looking some steps down where Siya and Ram were waiting for them. Everyone nods and started moving down the cliff. As they reached at the bottom, there were priests sprinkling holy water on visitors. On the same rock base are the temple's guardian snakes, living in the crevices.

SIYA- Urmila.. you take out your heels. Otherwise it will be difficult for you..

Suggested Siya and Urmila nods in agreement. A pathway exists to reach the temple from the shore. Everyone reached at the top of the cliff where tourist guides and photographers were ready to help the tourists.

GUIDE- may I help you sir..?

Asked a man coming near Ram.

RAM- sure.. please..

GUIDE- There is a dress code that is informally enforced here. This is considered appropriate temple attire..

The man guides them with the attire indicating them to move towards his shop. The couples enters his shop while the tourists hands them some clothes.

MANVI- is it compulsory to wear ?

Asked Manvi looking at the dress. Women are required to cover their legs, usually with a sarong or a kebaya (native Indonesian dress) along with covering their shoulders (such as the use of a scarf).

LAKSHMAN- wohi to.. is it dress code for the temple.?

Asked Lakshman looking at an udeng (Balinese headdress made from folded clothes).

GUIDE- yes sir. These are the attires for the temple. If you don't wear these, the locals consider it as disrespectful.

The guide gave them the information about the temple norms. Everyone nods in agreement and moved inside the small rooms situated at the back side of the shop to get ready in the traditional wears.

SHRUTI- we have to click ourselves..

Said Shruti looking at everyone's clothes. Bharat takes his cellphone to capture the photos of everyone. They started with the couples, some pictures with the individuals and then some group photos. After that the couples went inside the temple as it was the time for the prayer. Outside the temple, at the surrounding, the kechak dance is held that lasts almost for an hour. The performers invite the girls to join them dance. The boys capture their pictures and videos while dancing.

MAN- sir, Bergabunglah dengan kami..

One of the man who was dancing in the crowd invites Ram and others to dance.

SHATRUGHAN- You're my love my love

Janejaan you're my love...

You're my love my love

Janejaan you're my love..

Shatrughan goes near Shruti as the performers started giving the beats with the drums. While the others present around them started clapping their hands.

RAM- Dekha mene dekha

Jab se tujhko dekha

Kuch bhi na socha

Na samjha dil de diya...

Ram moves towards Siya and forwards his hand. She smiles accepting his hold.

LAKSHMAN- Ho gaya re ho gaya re

Is dil ka kaam re

Ho gaya re ho gaya

Dil tere naam re...

Lakshman pulls Urmila towards him as he sings for her. Bharat started giving the beats with the drums as Manvi dance at his tune.

BHARAT- You're my love my love

Janejaan you're my love

You're my love my love

Janejaan you're my love...

He leaves the drum indicating the performers to continue, moving himself near Manvi.

BHARAT- Tauba mere tauba

Tera nakhra kamaal hai...

Manvi looks at him and smile looking at everyone. He holds her hands and started swinging.

BHARAT- Tauba mere tauba

Tera nakhra kamaal hai..

MANVI- Taarif karne mein to

Bada bemisaal hai..

Ram holds Siya from the waist while she keeps her hands holding his neck.

RAM- Soone soone mukhde

Pe zulfon ka jaal hai..

SIYA- Mera naseeb hai tu

Yeh mera khayaal hai

Ram touches a strand of her hair pushing it behind her ear. While she rests her head touching his forehead.

SIYA- Ho gaya re ho gaya

Mujhko bhi pyaar re

RAM- Ho gaya re ho gaya haan

Deewaana yaar re...

Bharat and Manvi dance to the beats.

BHARAT- You're my love my love

Janejaan you're my love

You're my love my love

Janejaan you're my love...

As Lakshman was dancing with the girls out there while Urmila frowns at him.

LAKSHMAN- Bada hi purana love ka

Takiyakaalam hai..

She looks angry folding her hands while Lakshman apologize to her holding his ears.

LAKSHMAN- Bada hi purana love ka

Takiyakaalam hai..

URMILA- Mein hi teri tu hai

Mera charcha hai aam hai..

She removes his hands from his ears smiling at him. Shatrughan walks away from Shruti

SHATRUGHAN- Chal hat jane bhi de

Mujhe bada kaam hai

SHRUTI- Tu hi subah hai meri

Tu hi meri shaam hai..

She stops his embracing him from back. While Shatrughan smile at her.

SHRUTI- Ho gaya re ho gaya

Mujhko bhi pyaar re

SHATRUGHAN- Ho gaya re ho gaya haan

Deewaana yaar re

Lakshman smiled at Urmila and pecks her cheeks.

LAKSHMAN- You're my love my love

Janejaan you're my love

You're my love my love

Janejaan you're my love..

Bharat brings Manvi in the middle while everyone surrounds them.

BHARAT- Dekha mene dekha

Jab se tujhko dekha

Kuch bhi na socha na samjha

Dil de diya re..

Ram and Siya too moves in the middle, joining them.

RAM- Ho gaya re ho gaya re

Is dil ka kaam re

Ho gaya re ho gaya re

Dil tere naam re...

The rest two couples also joins them.

SHATRUGHAN- You're my love my love

Janejaan you're my love

You're my love my love

Janejaan you're my love..

LAKSHMAN- You're my love my love

Janejaan you're my love

You're my love my love

Janejaan you're my love....!!

Everyone around them, the tourists and the performers, claps for them as they complete their dance. They smile at everyone, bowing before them and thanking them...

*****

The Raghuvanshis were sitting on the dinning table at the beach of Tanah lot for the dinner.

URMILA- kal bhi humne tofu hi khaya tha dii.. come on we are not ordering that..

Said Urmila snatching the menu card from Manvi.

MANVI- we had lunch of your choice urmi.. and we found it very boring.. we are going to have tofu that's it...

Manvi said taking the menu card in her hand and frowning at Urmila.

URMILA- dii.. dekho na..

Urmila complains to Siya who was busy looking at the pictures with shatrughan.

SIYA- oh god ... You both please shut down your fights ..

LAKSHMAN- wohi to.. jab dekho tab ladti rehti hai..

Said Lakshman taunting them while urmila hits his hand.

RAM- we will order both of your choice.. is it fine now.?

Urmila and Manvi shouts in excitement and high-fived each other while Siya nods her head in disbelief.

SHRUTI- jiju.. this is not fair. I am too there and you didn't asked me..

Complaints Shruti folding her hand.

BHARAT- god.. you girls are unbelievable..

SHRUTI- bharat bhaiya.. aajkal aap kuch jyada hi ladkiyo ki complaints nahi karne lage he.?

Asked shruti in a smirk while Bharat looks at Manvi.

MANVI- Bharat..??

BHARAT- areh no.. I was not talking about you.. I am talking about these two..

Said Bharat pointing Urmila and Shruti. While everyone laughs at him. Ram and Lakshman placed the order to the waiter and he leaves from there.

SHATRUGHAN- look at this picture...

Said Shatrughan showing the picture of Shruti and Urmila who were having candy floss while lakshman was standing behind them making faces.

URMILA- oh god laksh.. you photobombed us..

Said Urmila hitting lakshman's hand while he laughs looking at the picture.

SHRUTI- not fair bhai.. this was such an amazing picture to upload..

Pouts Shruti looking at the photo. While Shatrughan rolls his eyes. Suddenly Ram's phone rings, interrupting their conversation.

RAM- ghar se he..

Said Ram answering the call.

RAM- hello..

DASHRATH- hello Ram.. how are you all.?

Ram smile hearing Dashrath's voice. He put his phone on speaker so that everyone could have a talk with Dashrath.

RAM- we are fine papa. We all are having dinner now.

DASHRATH- nice..

Kranti and Sumitra comes near Dashrath as he indicates them about the call.

RAM- how are you papa.? And maa aur choti maa kaisi hai..?

Asked Ram while Kranti smile at his concern.

KRANTI- we all are fine here Ram...

RAM- hello maa..

KRANTI- god bless you.. so tell us.. are you all enjoying there.?

Asked kranti while Ram looks at everyone indicating them to answer.

SIYA- ha maa.. we all are having fun here.

SHRUTI- yes maa.. bali is such a great place.. Mann kar raha he yahi ruk jaye..

Said Shruti while everyone laughs at her.

URMILA- we wish you all were also here maa.. aur bhi jyada maza ata.. we are missing you all..

Kranti looks at Dashrath and Sumitra smiling.

SUMITRA- ofcourse.. we are missing you all too.. next time we all will plan a trip together..

Said Sumitra while the siblings smile at her words.

LAKSHMAN- yes choti maa.. and papa.. this time, sab sath sath jayenge..

Said lakshman while Dashrath laughs at him.

DASHRATH- ofcourse my child..

SUMITRA- acha tell me.. shopping ki.?

MANVI- no choti maa.. Not yet..

Said Manvi in a pout.

KRANTI- why..? Ram.. why didn't you take them.?

Asked Kranti to Ram complaining while Ram smile at them

RAM- we will go maa.. and they will do a lot of shopping, I promise..

Said Ram while the girls became happy.

SIYA- papa.. is your health fine.?

Siya enquired about Dashrath's health.

DASHRATH- I am fine beta.. don't worry..

Siya smile hearing their well-being.

SUMITRA- you all enjoy your trip and do not worry about here ok..?

BHARAT- yes choti maa... You all too take care of yourselves..

KRANTI- of beta.. bye..

Dashrath disconnect the call and looks at Kranti and Sumitra.

DASHRATH- ab to chain mila aapko Kranti..? Baccho se bat karke..?

Asked Dashrath while Sumitra giggle at them.

KRANTI- bilkul.. you won't understand.. how a mother feels when the children are not at home..

Said Kranti in a pout while Sumitra caresses her back.

SUMITRA- bhaiya.. let it be.. we all know how much didi cares about Ram..

KRANTI- nahi sumitra..

Kranti interrupts in between making Dashrath and Sumitra to look at her in confusion.

KRANTI- not only Ram.. but all my kids... Me Mr Dashrath Raghuvanshi nahi hu, jise bas Ram ki hi chinta hai..

Said Kranti in a taunt to Dashrath who smile nodding his head in disbelief. Sumitra watch both of them while Kranti leaves from there in her room.

SUMITRA- you both had a fight or what..?

Asked Sumitra to Dashrath who was smiling at her.

DASHRATH- normal husband wife fight.. you know your didi right..?

Asked Dashrath while Sumitra giggle at him.

DASHRATH- chalo.. bacche khush hai.. what else we want.. hai na.?

Said Dashrath looking at sumitra who nods in agreement. Sumitra smile looking at the brother's photo which was kept at the corner table, thinking about them...

*****

References:

Song: "You're my love"- Partner (2007 movie)

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Amazing dear..... It was just superb... Yaar but I don't want any seperation like of original ramayan..

Well I just loved it...❤️😊❤️

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Did I missed some chapters? I feel so🤔

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Originally posted by: Urmila54

Amazing dear..... It was just superb... Yaar but I don't want any seperation like of original ramayan..

Well I just loved it...❤️😊❤️

Thank u so much..

Stay tuned for further updates 😊

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Originally posted by: MahiraSingh3030

Did I missed some chapters? I feel so🤔

Why you feel so 🤔

If you're talking about Dashrath and Kranti part, then it is like that only. I've not mentioned about it more..

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Yes of course dear...😉😃

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Originally posted by: Urmila54

Yes of course dear...😉😃

🤗❣️

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Posted: 5 years ago

Nice update....❤️

No discussion of Manda Lankeshwar scene🤨

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Originally posted by: Sonali170299

Nice update....❤️

No discussion of Manda Lankeshwar scene🤨

In the upcoming updates...❣️

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Hey,.........

Where are you....😒😒

Please update sooonnnnnn😭😭

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