FF: Broken I Ch 20 - Pg 147 - Page 22

Originally posted by: raveena0605

Hey your writing is awesome.. if you can add in the story that riddhima is not an orphan but belongs to more powerful and wealthy family than Raisinghania and she was kidnapped by rival family and left in orphanage...

It will so nice for to have her own family....😎😎😎

We too have such thoughts in our mind dear and very soon you will come across that part too. However, thank you for penning down those thoughts for us. Please do continue :)

Originally posted by: lifesucks28

Am glad.😎😎❤ eagerly waiting for more.....especially her first attack😎

She is waiting for her time to strike dear. Very soon you will read about it and please do continue to pen down you thoughts :)

Originally posted by: the-havelgirl03

As for Vansh & Kabir's character I want that they use all types of power to know what is going on in Riddhima's mind & they literally gets fed up till they reach their breaking point.

As for Riddhima's character she should expect now all types of betrayal, all sham dam dand bhed which Vansh is going to put & she should be ready for everything. She should keep mainly Vansh on his toes after the betrayal she got from him.

And if possible not forcing dont mind😅, I want a little glimpse of the 8th vow that Riddhima should remind Vansh that if he betrays her in love what he is supposed to do..

I hope you dont get offended about my pov🤗

We don't get offended with the readers POV dear. We want to hear your thoughts :)

Thank you so much that you reminded us about the 8th vow. Surely, will try to bring this up in the coming chapters.

Ridhima now has learned to read between the lines dear, so she will play her game in such way that as you asked Vansh and Kabir both unable to read her lines, yet will suspect her for sure.

Please do continue to pen down your thoughts in the future :)

Originally posted by: Aaina099

It was amazinggggg. I loveddd it, each nad every bit of it.Bas itna bolungi don't make it a ff. make it a ss. Ff lamba jaata hai and I can't control my excitement ki aage kya hoga isiliye ss hi bana do. 20 chap are enough😁😃

Hahahaha we haven't planned a number of chapters dear. We want to make sure to go through the flow and add the elements which we are missing from the serial.

Originally posted by: Abhyudaya

We don't get offended with the readers POV dear. We want to hear your thoughts :)

Thank you so much that you reminded us about the 8th vow. Surely, will try to bring this up in the coming chapters.

Ridhima now has learned to read between the lines dear, so she will play her game in such way that as you asked Vansh and Kabir both unable to read her lines, yet will suspect her for sure.

Please do continue to pen down your thoughts in the future :)

Thank you 🤗

Originally posted by: sweet1308

Lovely

Thank you, if possible, would like to hear your thoughts on how characters are shaping up. Will help us much better to come up with better content.

Riddhima is trying to get her bearings..Hopefully she gets it soon and give the guyz nicely... great update...looking for more

As usual,fabulous!! I am in love with ur writings.

Dont forget to bring that 8th vow wala fact!! It will interesting to watch on how it reveals here.

Make Riddz sassy and savage like no one else but also make her stay careful against Vansh's mind games and tricks.

Make Kabir and Vansh do trips to make sure they dont get a whiff of Riddhima's planning.

I also want Riddhima to belong from a wealthier family,more wealthier than the Raisinghanias'.

I got a hint about it when Riddhima entered VR mansion when she thought about someone saying that dialogue.

Make sure,Riddhima makes the lives of Vansh and Kabir scary as hell.

Continue sooooonish.

Update soon.

I am also glad u did not use that much hard hindi in this chapter ..I like the way u shape up the character ..But I still feel ur Riddhima might be a bit impulsive in future.. given her recent heartbreaks, hope she doesn’t give in to her emotions..she deserves freedom. let her say tata bye bye to the house n the guyz forever

Originally posted by: coolpd93

Riddhima is trying to get her bearings..Hopefully she gets it soon and give the guyz nicely... great update...looking for more

Thank you, if possible, would like to hear your thoughts on how characters are shaping up. Will help us much better to come up with better content.