Vignette 24. Sirf Khushi ki - SS Pt 5/ Pg41 - Page 36

I am not a regular on thus forum any more so only just stumbled upon your SS Sirf Khushi Ki. Brilliantly written as always.

Just read this ss...its sooo beautiful...i love...um...basically everything n everyone of the story!!!

Please update soon, your work is missed..

Thoroughly enjoyed reading this short piece of work...you captured the essence in just a few chapters...good job!

You write so well!

Res

Edited:

Firstly, there is a fine balance between making Arnav hopelessly in love with his wife, Khushi and not make him look like a lovesick puppy. Also, one needs to strike the right notes with Khushi's crazy antics and her mature persona, especially as a wife and bahu. With both Arnav and Khushi you stayed true to their characters in a way that even the makers had forgotten was possible, quite pointedly post their second marriage...

Secondly, there was this sentence in the story where Aman is thinking that Arnav won't take kindly to Dia's interest in him, not because Arnav's sense of righteousness won't allow (which it won't I am sure but that is besides the point) but because Arnav can't allow anyone to encroach on his wife's territory, even if that territory is his very being. He is sirf Khushi's 😳

It is not Dia's or Lavanya's fault. I am sure, if I were to bump into Arnav I would fall for him too and it is not a happy thought... this unrequited love... Both Dia and La realised that before the blinding light of Khushi's personality, they wont stand a chance. Arnav has himself tuned only to her... But I still feel for Lavanya. She was short-changed. 😭

One bit that made me smile and blush was the fact that Khushi could test even Arnav's stamina in bed when in a possessive mood 😉

Aman and the rest of the Raizadas... this is EXACTLY how I think they lived their happily ever afters with each other. And I adored Aakash's ribbing 😆

Lovely story 👏

Lovely , but why do I get the feeling Dia is the next Raizada Bahu? How old is she anyway? Considering Khushi was supposec to be 18 when she met Arnav, and this is a few years down the line she must be the same age as Khushi 21-22?

Have to say I love the A&K moments, especially her drying his hair for him... so sweet

How I miss you nd your writings... Such a lovely story, reading it for the nth time, still the effect is same... I'm still smiling the way I did very first time... Wish you were here Di, giving us much more ArShi tales... Missing you...