Vani TS : Betrayal, love and life (updated Page 3) Completed - Page 2

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: SilentEyes7

Wow amazing...

Interesting update...

Continue soon...

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Nivesh one...update pls....

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This was so beautiful penned down ,can't wait for the next part 😘

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Nivesh one...update pls....

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This was so beautiful penned down ,can't wait for the next part 😘

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Very interesting

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Very interesting

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Posted: 5 years ago
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I always wanted akesh to be positive and somewhere feel whatever he did was to save nageshwari 😃Thanks for writing this ts please update soon

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Originally posted by: fire_wings

I always wanted akesh to be positive and somewhere feel whatever he did was to save nageshwari 😃Thanks for writing this ts please update soon

I think he always loved her, he didn't hate her even when she killed him. I think he might be positive in satyug too.

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Part 2 :


Present :


"Veer wake up" Bani came closer to him, like the last time when he was under naag Mani ka zeher

"Uff" He slowly opened his eyes and saw her

"I am so sorry Sweetheart, hr bar tum mjhe good bye kiss dene ati ho or m wapas ajata hu.. lagta h kiss k ly marna he padega" He teased her

"Sshhh, esi baate nahi krte" She kept her hand on his mouth and stopped him

"Par tum or wo Dhabewala to pura intzaam krke bethe the.. m baate bhi nahi kr skta? Ye to cheating h" He whispered

"Veer.. I am sorry" she pleaded

"Ye kesa sorry h gharwali, Khali sa sorry, feel he ni aa rahi" he made a face

"Ok.. m Kya kru tum btao.. tum Jo kahoge m wo krungi" She gulped in regret.

"Acha.. are you sure?" He asked. She nodded in yes.

"Ummmm.. to fir sweetheart.. jao Chai bana k lao" He winked at her

"Hain?" She was shocked

"Tumne Kya laga.. Kya chaiye mjhe? Thaka hara hu jaan pe khel k Aya hu, Subah ki chai biwi k hatho mil jae bus itta sa khawaab h" He sat on the bed and whispered

"Abhi lati hu" She smiled slightly and went downstairs



10 hours ago :


"Chodo Jay, chodo veer ko" Bani shouted

"Nhi chodunga.. or tum bhi kuch nhi kr skti.. pata h na agar tumne kisi naagvansh ko chot pohchai to tumhari sari shaktiya Chali jaengi.." He smirked

"Tumhe pehle b kha tha or aj bhi keh rahi hu.. Aaadi naagin hu m.." She got angry and started taking her naagin form

"Hahhahahah, to Kya hua agar tum Aadi Naagin ho.. ek cheel k ly apne Aadi naag ko marogi.. Kon maaf krega tumhe?" He laughed

"Tumne agar koi chot pohchai to mjhe pura haq h tumpr vaar krne ka" She said

"Hhahaha, haan hai haq par tab na jab m tumpe vaar kru.. m to is cheel pe vaar krunga par afsos, ye is jagah na apni shaktiyo ka prayog kr skta h na apne Roop m aa skta h..hahahha" He looked at veer like a predator

"Ye Kya bakwas kr rhe ho tum.. agar himmat h to samne se lado.. nihatte pe var krna kaha ki bahaduri h.."Bani shouted

"Bani! Tum ispe vaar mat krna" veer said

They both looked at him.confused.

"Mai nhi chahta Meri wajah se tumhe dubara koi shrap mile ya dand mile.. tum Aadi naagin ho.. m Marta hu Marne do.. par tum mat krna ispe vaar" Veer looked at her with love. Bani couldn't believe what he just said. He loved her this much? She never knew, or maybe she did but always ignored.

"Mjhe to laga tha tu sirf ashiq h par tu to sirfire jaan dene wala type aashiq nikla, ab teri kismat m he marna likha h to Kya kr skte h" Jay taunted him

"Ha ha ha" veer started clapping

"Kismat to insaan khud banata h.. tabhi to dekh.. Bani ka itta pyar milne k Bawjoot tu is dunia se jaega uske Bina or m.. m marte marte he sahi.. apni sweetheart ka Pyar to paa Saka.. haina gharwali.. ab tho kehdo.. krdo pyaar ka izhar.. Zindagi nahi shart to Jeet he sakta hu" he smiled genuinely

A tear rolled down Bani's cheek.. "tum pagal ho Veeranshu Singhania.. kabhi kisine kaha h tumse?" She laughed while wiping her tears

"Han.. tumhare pyar m.." he smiled

"Bus Karo apne ye natak" Jay shouted and pushed Veer forcefully with his tail and veer got his head stamped on the wall.. he was bleeding..

"Veer" Bani Shouted

"Bani" veer smiled

"Abhi to pitai shuru Hui h.." Jay wrapper him in his tail and dropped him and he fell on the floor..

"Hey Shivji, Meri madad kro.. ek nirdosh ki jaan mat lo.. shivji kuch to Rasta dikhao" Bani prayed to the idol of shiv

"Shiv, tu he Satya h.. tu he Sundar.. tu he Sach or sachai ki Vijay ka prateek h.. aj m vivash hu.. apni Aadi naagin ko Rasta dikha bholenath" She folded her hands and started crying while Jay kept beating Veer.

"Apne pyar ko bachane k ly.. Aj m.. Aadi Naagin.. Sarvashrest shiv k samaksh.. Tandav krungi.. tab Tak.. jab Tak wo Meri nhi sunta.." she said as she came in her human form and started performing the Tandav


Jata Kataha Sambhramabrama Nilimpa

Nirjari Vilola Vichi Valari Viraja Mana

Murdhani Dhaga Dhaga Dhagaj Jwaala

Lalata Patta Paavake Kishora Chandra

Shekhare Rathi Prathi Kshananama


She kept dancing continuously.


Dara Darendra Nandini Vilasa Bhandhu

Bhandura Sphuradigantha Santhathi

Pramodha Mana Manase Krupa

Khadaksha Dhorani Nirudha

Durdharapadi Kwachi Digambare

Mano Vinodhamethu Vasthuni


While she kept dancing she looked around to see thousands of snakes entering the temple and many icchadhari naag naagins dancing beside her.


Jada Bhujanga Pingala Sphurath Phana

Mani Prabha Kadamba Kumkuma Drava

Praliptha Digwadhu Mukhe Madhandha

Sindhura Sphurathwagu Utthariya

Medhure Mano Vinodhamadhbutham

Bibarthu Bhootha Bharthari


They all were performing tandav when suddenly they heard lightnings and thunder meanwhile a silhouette of shiv appeared before them..

"Mere naag Vansh k naago, icchadari naag naagin.. aj tumhari Aadi naagin ko tumhari jarurat h.. mat bhulo.. Mene tumhe sirf Cheelo se nahi har us burai se ladne ki taqat di h Jo kisi maasum ko chot pohchaye.. chahe wo burai tumhare apno m he Kyu na ho" Came the voice over and in an instant the shadow disappeared. Bani turned to see all the naags bowing down before her..

"Aadesh dijiye Aadi naagin" they said

"Jao or akraman Karo us dusht pe Jise naag kehlane ka bhi haq nahi.. Aadi naag to dur ki baat h.." Bani screamed. On her one order thousands of them started attacking Jay who was on the verge of killing veer. Veer was lying their in the pool of his own blood, in a semiconscious state, feeling content that his wife was praying for him, for his life, she didn't want him to die, and for veer this was more than anything for him, more than his life.

"Veer" Bani went by his side and held his hand

"Tumhe kuch nhi hoga.. m hone nahi dungi" she started wiping his blood with her chunni

"Sw..sweet..heart" he somehow called her

"Han veer m yhi hu, m yhi hu" she assured him

"Bus.. bus.. 5 min.. Bache h. He stammered signalling towarda his watch. Bani got confused trying to understand what he meant.

"Ohfo veer.. tch" she laughed with her tears as she realised what he meant. He smiled back

"I love you" she confessed. He kissed the back of her palm and lost his consciousness.

She took him to his house and cured most of his wounds by her zeher and waited for him to gain consciousness while she left at night to throw Jay in karawas (prison) for naags. He was defeated. All his powers were snatched.

Bani came back to the house by Dawn and slept by his side.


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Present :


"Gir gai" Tapish said as he came inside the kitchen

"Haan?" Bani asked confused

"Bani chai gir gai" he said as he went on to turn of the knob

"Arey! Ptch! Kya kr rhi hu m bhi" she slapped her forehead

"Veer k liye bana rahi ho?" He asked

She nodded. His family didn't know about what happened last night..they knew veer was in an accident and they're waiting for him to wake up

"Is he fine?"

"Weak h shayad, chai peene the use, Mera dhyan he nhi lg raha kisi kaam m"

"Ek kaam kro tum yaha betho" he Brought a chair for her "I will make some tea" He added

"Tapish bhaiya.." she smiled at him

"It's ok.." he gave her a warm smile

"Tum btao, Kya hua h" He asked

"Bhaiya wo, pata nhi.. accident.." she started narrating a made up story..

"Nhi wo nhi, tumhe Kya hua h.. tum Veer k liye chai banane wali biwi to nhi ho.." he asked

"Han.. wo.. use chot lagi h..fir" she stammered

"Ye pehli bar to nhi ki veer khatre se bacha ho.. pehle to tumne kabhi itta chinta nahi dikhai" he was adamant on finding out the truth

"Esi koi baat nhi h.." She looked on the playing with her fingers nervously

"Mjhe pta h Bani, Jo tum chupa rahi ho!" He stated as he folder his stood with his fingers in his pockets

Bani was shocked and looked up at him.

Does he know about her Nagin Roop, will they kill her now, she thought

"I know, you've finally accepted him a your husband, I know you love my brother, Bani" he smiled

"Here, take this" He handed her the cup of tea in a tray

"I know you might not accept it in front of me, but in your heart you know, don't you?" He asked

She nodded and smiled shyly.

"Thank you Tapish Bhai" she said and left. In her way, his voice replayed. Was her emotions open for display. She has started loving him so much that anyone could guess? How accurate his brother in law was..in past she would never bring him tea, she subconsciously cared for him but only subtly.

"Tumhari chai" she said

"Thank you, gharwali, tumhari kaha h?"

"Mene aj vrat rakha h.." She said

"Kyu?" He asked as he sipped his tea

"Kal Jo tumhare sath hua.. uske baad Mene mannat mangi the" she looked at him

"Tumhe kese pata.. m chai m cheeni Jada peeta hu?" He asked out of the blue

"Kyuki tm itte sweet ho" she smiled

"Really?" He narrowed his eyes

"chai Tapish bhaiya ne banai h.. Mene nahi" She replied

"Tch tch tch kamse Kam Dil rakhne k ly jhut bol deti, chai Tak nhi bana skti mere ly?" He came closer to her

"Mai jhooth nhi bolti" She moved back

"Acha.. Matlab tumhe Jo mjhe I love you bola tha wo bhi jhut nhi tha na?" He teased her

"Wo..ho skta h" she played along

"Wo to Mene tumhara Dil rakhne k ly bol dia tha.." She chuckled

"Acha? Ruko Zara" he said as he started tickling her

"Veer..hahahaha..veer" she held her stomach and laugher her heart out

"Chodo mjhe" she laughed

"Pehle bolo I love you, I know you love me" he said still tickling her

"What's the point when you already know..." she turned around and ran to the bed

"Acha lagta h bhyi, sunna h mjhe"

"Par mjhe nhi bolna"

"I and going then" he said seriously as he picked up his jacket

"I saved you life.. not once but thrice.. from Naagmani ka zeher, from Jay and from Shakura.. wo gandhak patthar mene he bheja tha.. and you still doubt my love.." She glared him. He looked at her defeated.

"I Love you" she said the next moment

"I love you" she repeated as he seemed shocked

"Ab Kya rudraksh ki mala ki tarah japti Rahu ya tum bhi bologe kuch?"

"You're beautiful!" He whispered.

"And I love you, too, gharwali" he smiled as she smiled back and they both hugged each other.


Edited by SnehaSneha - 5 years ago

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