Thread 3: Destined Love... (Chapter 61 updated) - Page 64

Thanks for Update & PM Stuti🤗

Will be back with comment after Reading😛

Wow di.. thanks for the update.. will give a detailed one shortly.. I'm still stuck with the gripping update.. would need some more time to come out of it..

"What to say Stuti!!sort of lack of words to define your work the excitement & joy to read again n again😘💓💓💓

From the Vivid discreption of Morningto that Beautiful song,❤️❤️

uhhh, loved the refreshing beginning you gave, For that Take a Bow 😎

And the selection of song 👏👏👏 "Alabela Sajan aayo ri"

I like this song particularly for the reason, This suits for them & i read this in one of the OS/SS on Akdha long back, today it gave a kind of happiness to read

Kshatrayani raised her weapon to protect. ❤️

And it sent a surge of relief and happiness,

Breath taking it was,👏👏👏 don't know how many times reread this to sink in the euphoria it created. 🤗

Can't discribe in words, how it felt at the End created endless desperation to read next part...🤓🤓

When will you give next one Stuti????

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The Start & End you gave was Tremendous Unprecedent Stupendous Fantastic❤️❤️🤗🤗👏👏👏

I'm unable to remove the scene infront of my eyes and now how much i want to praise the way you put the interactions i just don't want get out of the spell..

Kudos to you dear Author 🤗

I will be back again with comment once again cause there is still whole Praise Worthy update i ignored😒

Sorry for the partial review but i can't help it😳

You just made my day🤗🤗

Thanks to you🤗

Amazing chappy Di

Talks

Morning walks

Feeling nature's beauty

Hunting

She got it

Update soon Di

Thanks for Pm Di

Awesome chapter 💗💗

Beautifully written 🧡🧡

Amazing chapter yaar

It was so beautifully written

Every word of the jungle morning was so beautifully described like we are living it

The kshatrayani did her dharm

Hats off man..!!

The scene was the best

I dont want to see ruqaiya in the bad light

The equation they shared while traveling to the jungle was so nice

Ruqaiya would be flabbergasted when she would see that jodha saved Jalal

I seriously want a ruqu-jo friendship

I want to see ruqu hug jo and cry for Jalal's recovery

That would be so beautiful

I feel so sorry for ur loss

Take care of urself and the ones around u

May that person's soul rest in peace

Take care yaar

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

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queen ruqs puts everyone at place.....

>> EKDUM!

hoshiyaar not really fears her.... & maham uff those jilath ke laddoo ahha....what a smashing shot she received from ruqs , just loved this high warning & the insult , white witch needed it....

>> Hosiyaar is her eyes and ears. So he has no fear of her.

I like smashing Maham so much

then the harem scene jodha's interaction & facilitation the process of knowing the inmates as this is her place now her new home , adjustment & acceptance r the keys....

>> Yep!

but the entry of that item definitely scratched her joy as her mind begins to understand the ways of the emperor & his interests concerning that women something that is surely to bother her at this stage ....

>> She will get used to it.

Her longing.... ohh it was so beautifully addressed kudos to u dear

>> Thank you.

offcourse our jodha is all about action so no wait & launches rahim again......

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am personally really loving this part the dilemma of our favorite pair , as a king there he is burning in his own yearning while she patiently tending her heart , savoring this time by themselves in the hope of their destiny to bind them in inseparable union .

>> Beautiful words dear....

also abdul , my heart really went to him i wonder what destiny has store for him or i better say what r ur plans about abdul moti .

>> A lot of plans

glad to see u enjoying it .

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

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How Dare You...Khwaja Moin

>> Villains are most needed thing

this oldie is a danger for sure the way he is going can't be simply threatened or taught a lesson , hv to be played very cautiously i trust jalal but am worried , surely a new challenge & a consequential problem .

>> Let's see

what a beautiful extract on the quandary of jodha the lover

very beautifully u hv conveyed what confuses her heart , stuck b/w can she really experience same things like in the previous moment & the presently real one...she is still reeling into his words which her heart immediately responds to but something still blocks but dear salima is here.....

as she takes jodha through all of jalal parts concerning purnima from her knowledge , also conveys her own life to give that better understanding of life & all of them . really good one dear....

>> Salima is always the star

Thank you dear...

poor jalal not getting his jodha....

first hoshiyaar , uff it really pinches him his eagerness & letting it out in public that too hoshiyaar who is too good in pushing buttons on his mistress but thankfully here she is smart one....

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then salima , ohh artist of words can't fool her.....

& so many wisdom of words uff...no salim anytime soon....

>> R e let them enjoy honeymoon phase. Abhi kya Salim

first time ever imagining irritated salima begum that too from jalal... , but salima is salima gets something more best i.e. full moon night date ...big thanx to her .....

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ohh the target competition , good definitely came out of it but the humiliation came from it ohh new burning determination thus time for a new learning for jodha .

>> Jodha is also a star

nothing private , it is because they never made any conscious efforts everything just naturally went on occurring with them & the most cherished parts also came like this hence never the efforts nor the realization or if any never discussed in open , ruqs & jalal....the friend companions very understandably live their parts . as there convo goes one can see both of them comfortably in their worlds & the ending of scene with ruqaiya words definitely touches the heart .

>> Yeah... 😞

& the lovers meet , the beauty of the scene is so endearing the whole exchange is nothing short of lovely , desperate jodha got the right determination but not the teacher but when his majesty is there what to fear....as he comes like a wind catching her unaware but tightly gripping her & arranging her for right shot in b/w bringing the waves of passion as well....

>> Ekdum!

thus filling her heart & his with new happiness....

everything is so beautiful in ur FF , ahha whichever part it is u're clearly acing... my words i feel can't really do the justice for this writing ......

>> Thank you for this beautiful review dear.

Baki kaha hay?

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baki bhi coming......😉

So vivid so alive so barbaric the entire hunting trip.. I was just awed by your writing skills it seemed I was there witnessing all those happenings..it was bone chilling..and just opposite there a morning soothing , vibrant, full of life.. Stuti you know I adore your writing.you are one of the rarest of the rare who narrate anything flawlessly.there is a rhythm in your writing..I am very fortunate to be your reader.thank you Stuti for being my window,my escape and my solace.

I love the way you have shaped Ruq character dignified slight arrogant who knows her limitations when arguing with Shenshah .

I love this self-respecting,bold, fiery Jodha who will not allow anyone to mess with her.I am touched with her gesture to accompany him in hunting only being his window not to show her weaponry skills..then you twisted the whole scene, it was unannounced, unpredictable leaving us in shock.. then the famous quote -kshatryani raised her weapon to protect..

Reading whole update was a bliss.. everyone is not blessed with what you are Stuti- a mind full of imagination and the art to narrate.please keep writing..

This chapter was utterly riveting. I could imagine her in the place of Deepika Padukone in the song Deewani Mastani. THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL. I just hope there are no more problems in their relationship but I also know that love without hardships is not love.