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Posted: 5 years ago
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Awesome update


Continue soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
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ap kidnapped 😚mazaa ayega..please continue like this
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Chapter 3

Is vansh a murderer ??


VR mansion


Everybody is busy with preparations of Navratri in the house and dadi is instructing the servent's for doing the necessary arrangement's , chanchal and Anupriya helping her .


Vansh comes down ,talking to someone in his phone 📱 and walks to his study


Dadi : vansh yeh tum kaha jaa rahe ho ?? Navratri hai aaj


Vansh : dadi woh mein apne study mein jaa raha hun .


Dadi : Aab tum kaam kar rahe ho beta ??


Vansh : haan dadi woh bohat phele yeh schedule hua tha aaj kuch interview dena hai ,cancel nahi kar sakta . Woh journalist Abhi aati hogi .


Dadi : aacha beta tik hai .


Riddhima comes down and stares at door and waits for something to arrive


vansh and Dadi observe that .


Dadi : kya hua Riddhima darwaze ko kyun dekh rahi ho . Kiska intezar hai koi aa raha hai kya ??


Riddhima : nahi dadi ,woh bas main rangoli keliye kuch saaman mangvaya tha uski intezaar ho raha hai .


Dadi simles


Dadi : aacha


Chanchal and Anupriya leave to see other work


Just then a delivery man arrives , Riddhima goes to him and picks up the carton box parcel and signs on the paper .


Riddhima smiles


Riddhima : dadi main yeh upar le jaungi .


Dadi : tik hai beta


Riddhima leaves


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The journalist arrives at vr mansion with her camera man . Vansh welcomes her . .she is a lady journalist works for a big news channel in delhi her name is mamta Pillai .


She meets vansh and interviews him and the interview ends ,she is about to leave and goes to the hall there the whole family is there and just then she sees Riddhima coming down to the hall ,she stops after seeing her .


Riddhima see's her in the hall and she is shocked to see her .


Mamta Pillai : hi Riddhima !! How are you ??


Vansh and whole family are quite surprised that the journalist knows Riddhima .


Riddhima composes herself .


Riddhima : hi !! I am fine . How come your here ??


Mamta : actually I came to take vansh's interview !!


Dadi interrupts


Dadi : Riddhima tum inhe janti ho ??


Riddhima : haan dadi ,woh ..


Vansh : strange , tum log ek dusre ko kaise jante ho woh Delhi ki aur tum Mumbai ki ??


Mamta stares at Riddhima


Riddhima : woh mere neighbour thi ,jab woh yaha pe kaam kar rahi thi tab .


Dadi smiles


Dadi : aacha !! Aap mere Riddhima ke jaan pechan wale ho aur aaj pooja hai aap kyun nahi ruk jati Pooja keliye ??


Dadi invites her to pooja


Mamta : (awkwardly) oh I am sorry I cannot be part of it as I have a flight to catch .


Riddhima : It would have been good if you attended ( awkwardly)


Mamta : No I cannot , I am sorry.


Mamta starts speaking in an another language


Mamta :( unknown language )


Everyone in the hall confused with why she si speaking in other language


Riddhima : (unknown language ) fine ( this is the only English word used in the sentence which Riddhima uttered)


Everybody is more confused when Riddhima started speaking other language .


Mamta : (unknown language) article's becoming more . ( These are the only English words used )


Riddhima : I will do something about it .


Mamta : okay then I will leave now .


Mamta smiles at everyone signing that she is leaving . Vansh Riddhima and dadi go to send off her .


Mamta hugs Riddhima and Whispers in Riddhima's ear


Mamta : take care of her !!


Riddhima : I will !!


Mamta leaves the house . Vansh , Riddhima and dadi comeback to the hall . Vansh thinking about Riddhima's interaction .


Angre stares at Riddhima with the expression of remembering something . Riddhima stares back at him .


Chanchal : oyy Riddhima tu yeh kaunsi language mein baat kar rahi thi .


Riddhima : woh chachi ,woh malayalam baat karti hai naah aur mujhe bhi aata hai toh ,woh mujh se uss language mein baat kar rahi thi .


Siya : wow bhabhi aapko malayalam baat karni aati hai .


Riddhima smiles awkwardly


Riddhima leaves to her room and vansh too leaves with her to the room .


Vansh : yeh language kaha se sikha tumne .


Riddhima : aise he randomly sikha hai .


Vansh : (sarcastically)manaa padega tum bohat talented ho.


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Navaratri celebrations start at vr mansion Riddhima and family does the pooja and gear up for the dandiya .they all start playing the dandiya .


Amid the dandiya Riddhima finds a post and she satrts opening it .


Vansh see's Riddhima holding something .


Riddhima starts leaving the hall to open the post in a safe place .


Vansh is going to follow her but dadi calls him for something .he watches , in which direction Riddhima is going !!


Riddhima reaches the backyard


Riddhima opens the post


And she is shocked to see what is in the post .


Riddhima hold on it becomes weak and it falls on the ground


And it's a picture of vansh aiming his gun on ragini .


Riddhima is shattered


Far from her somebody is observing Riddhima .


He opens his mask and smirks .


Kabir : Aab dekh tha hun tum kaise usse pyaar karogi aur apna mission kaise bhool jaogi.




Preview :


Vansh stabs Riddhima


Police arrest vansh


Anupriya is kidnapped ( I know I am begin such a colors channel and repeating the preview but please be patient more khayali pulao is coming up )

Edited by Max789 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: raveena0605

It is good please make riddhima an awesome grey character aisa that woh AP and ishani ki acche se class le ...🤪🤪😎


Keeping reading


Dar naa maat Riddhima se 😈


Just kidding 😆


I will definitely add some grey shades to her .

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

vansh she is playing ludo the game we all played from childhood any problems

really this man and his family i tell you


Tumne meri aage ki scene predict kar di 👏

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

oh god now what anupriya kidnapped hehe ab ayega mazaa.

please do continue

bye sumi


Bohat mazaa ayega


Lekin uske liye time lagega thoda 😊

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Posted: 5 years ago
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That's a very interesting story...Please continue and update link in this thread...


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ishq-mein-marjawan-2/5172423/ishq-mein-marjawan-2-story-index

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: amritat

That's a very interesting story...Please continue and update link in this thread...


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ishq-mein-marjawan-2/5172423/ishq-mein-marjawan-2-story-index


Thank you for liking it

And I will update my link ,thank you 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
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the write up is too good..please continue soon..ap kidnapped will be the most interesting one 😉
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Posted: 5 years ago
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oh god please do continue

bye sumi

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