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Posted: 5 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Bhavisweet03


Sorry dear but you have to continue the post. You have missed 2 posts. Please edit it so we can go forward.


Sorry when I was making the post there was Raji's post above mine. So I didn't see other two posts but stuti said if two people post on the same prompt the next person can decide which one to continue.


Both of us posted almost same only hers Arnav saw someone and mine he's lying down next to her.

Edited by renee.bee - 5 years ago
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Arshi Analyzers

Posted: 5 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: renee.bee


Sorry when I was making the post there was Raji's post above mine. So I didn't see other two posts but stuti said if two people post on the same prompt the next person can decide which one to continue.


Both of us posted almost same only hers Arnav saw someone and mine he's lying down next to her.

We both had commented quite some time ago so it's strange that the comments weren't visible. 🤔 Anyway, you're right that it is similar and whoever continues can choose either of the two and go forward from it.

Btw, all this is continuation of the first prompt itself. Please edit and remove prompt 2, 3, etc as that will cause confusion. When this tale ends, I'll give another new beginning point and that will be called as Prompt 2 and so on. So everytime we make a new beginning, the number will move forward. Rest is all a continuation in the same prompt / story.


Love ❤️

Edited by ssttuuttii - 5 years ago
Posted: 5 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: ssttuuttii

We both had commented quite some time ago so it's strange that the comments weren't visible. 🤔 Anyway, you're right that it is similar and whoever continues can choose either of the two and go forward from it.

Btw, all this is continuation of the first prompt itself. Please edit and remove prompt 2, 3, etc as that will cause confusion. When this tale ends, I'll give another new beginning point and that will be called as Prompt 2 and so on. So everytime we make a new beginning, the number will move forward. Rest is all a continuation in the same prompt / story.

Love ❤️

The only explanation is, Radhika might have started drafting her post before Bhavi and you posted yours'.

It is possible, because, I am still drafting my reply to Radhika and you already posted your reply. 😊

I noticed your reply because I have multiple windows open with IPK and I have a habit of keep refreshing them.

May be it is a good idea, if anyone takes longer to draft, they better open another window with this thread (and refresh it, if it is already open) and check the thread for further additions before adding their part.

Cheers.....

Edited by Savera84 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: ssttuuttii

We both had commented quite some time ago so it's strange that the comments weren't visible. 🤔 Anyway, you're right that it is similar and whoever continues can choose either of the two and go forward from it.

Btw, all this is continuation of the first prompt itself. Please edit and remove prompt 2, 3, etc as that will cause confusion. When this tale ends, I'll give another new beginning point and that will be called as Prompt 2 and so on. So everytime we make a new beginning, the number will move forward. Rest is all a continuation in the same prompt / story.



Love ❤️


Okay I'll change it. I thought each continuation is a prompt. 🤣

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Posted: 5 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Savera84

The only explanation is, Radhika might have started drafting her post before Bhavi and you posted your'.

It is possible, because, I am still drafting my reply to Radhika and you already posted your reply. 😊

I noticed your reply because I have multiple windows open with IPK and I have a habit of keep refreshing them.

May be it is a good idea, if anyone takes longer to draft, they better open another window with this thread (and refresh it, if it is already open) and check the thread for further additions before adding their part.

Cheers.....

It had been a few hours since we posted - surely no one takes that long to draft a post. And these days IF is facing weird issues which is why I was curious.

Just yesterday I was joking about the FF forum being haunted because of the ongoing issue with comments there... I hope it hasn't started here too 🤦🏻‍♀️.

Otherwise my next prompt will be about a haunted forum 🤣. We could write about comments disappearing randomly and new posts being added by anonymous writers. Wonder how spooky that would be 🤣.


Jokes apart - your advice is quite useful, especially in a real time game like this one. 👍🏼


Love ❤️


P.S. I'm surprised to see you online at this time! Koi khaas baat hai kya... that is not letting you sleep? 😉

Mujhe nind na aaye... mujhe chain na aaye...

Koi jaaye zara dhundke laaye... 😉 😆

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Posted: 5 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Savera84

The only explanation is, Radhika might have started drafting her post before Bhavi and you posted your'.

It is possible, because, I am still drafting my reply to Radhika and you already posted your reply. 😊

I noticed your reply because I have multiple windows open with IPK and I have a habit of keep refreshing them.

May be it is a good idea, if anyone takes longer to draft, they better open another window with this thread (and refresh it, if it is already open) and check the thread for further additions before adding their part.

Cheers.....


Thanks Raji. That seems the issue.

I'll check that way next way. Hope no one else posts by that time. 🤣🤣

Edited by renee.bee - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#27

Prompt 1 :

She was in her own house but it seemed very different. Or was it because of the pitch darkness? Why was it so dark anyway? They always kept the lights near the staircase on. Maybe it was a power-cut, although it was quite unheard of to have power-cuts in their area!

She stumbled around wondering where she could find some light source. The kitchen might have some candles. Just as the thought of candles crossed her mind, she saw one being lighted. Aah! Finally some light. But who was this lady holding the candle?

She called out to her twice before finally catching the lady's attention. She tried to talk to her and ask who she was but there was no response. Just as she decided to give up and find her own way around, the lady turned....

Image

She freaked out and started screaming, " Aaaaaa Chudailllll, Devi Maiya Bachaoo".

Image

He was taken back seeing her reaction.

She suddenly turns around and hugs him tightly.

Image

~~~

"Khushi?! Tum theek ho? What happened? Why are you yelling?" Arnav holds her shoulders, trying to shake an explanation out of her.

"Arnav ji! That- that chudail is here! Devi Maiyya, it's a ghost!" She is at the brink of tears now, shifting closer to him for protection.

He then makes an amused face and turns her around. "There's no one here, Khushi. See?"

No one here? She thinks. But I swear I saw someone...


OK! I will get some water! By saying this, Arnav turned around with torch in his hand and walked towards the kitchen.

Khushi turned around to go to the bedroom, failing to notice the light falling on Arnav's back and came face to face with a person in a white saree holding a candle right in front of her. Khushi screamed and fainted.

..........




Arnav rushes to hold her before she falls.

Image

He carries her in his arms shouting for HP to bring the torch along to help them get to their bedroom.

Image

After laying her on the bed he covers her with a quilt only to hear her murmuring , "Arnavji mat jaiye".


He lies down next to her. He brings her face closer to him and whispers sweet nothings to comfort her.


Image



He place a soft kiss on her forehead giving her comfort and Khushi snuggle closed to him feeling safe in his arms.. Arnav smiled seeing her guesture.. in her unconscious state also she knows he is here with her.. then he got confused with her sudden fainting.. what's she saw that she got scare this much.. that's when something cought his eyes..

Edited by Sarunrabbave - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#28

Prompt 1 :

She was in her own house but it seemed very different. Or was it because of the pitch darkness? Why was it so dark anyway? They always kept the lights near the staircase on. Maybe it was a power-cut, although it was quite unheard of to have power-cuts in their area!

She stumbled around wondering where she could find some light source. The kitchen might have some candles. Just as the thought of candles crossed her mind, she saw one being lighted. Aah! Finally some light. But who was this lady holding the candle?

She called out to her twice before finally catching the lady's attention. She tried to talk to her and ask who she was but there was no response. Just as she decided to give up and find her own way around, the lady turned....

Image

She freaked out and started screaming, " Aaaaaa Chudailllll, Devi Maiya Bachaoo".

Image

He was taken back seeing her reaction.

She suddenly turns around and hugs him tightly.

Image

~~~

"Khushi?! Tum theek ho? What happened? Why are you yelling?" Arnav holds her shoulders, trying to shake an explanation out of her.

"Arnav ji! That- that chudail is here! Devi Maiyya, it's a ghost!" She is at the brink of tears now, shifting closer to him for protection.

He then makes an amused face and turns her around. "There's no one here, Khushi. See?"

No one here? She thinks. But I swear I saw someone...


OK! I will get some water! By saying this, Arnav turned around with torch in his hand and walked towards the kitchen.

Khushi turned around to go to the bedroom, failing to notice the light falling on Arnav's back and came face to face with a person in a white saree holding a candle right in front of her. Khushi screamed and fainted.

..........




Arnav rushes to hold her before she falls.

Image

He carries her in his arms shouting for HP to bring the torch along to help them get to their bedroom.

Image

After laying her on the bed he covers her with a quilt only to hear her murmuring , "Arnavji mat jaiye".


He lies down next to her. He brings her face closer to him and whispers sweet nothings to comfort her.


Image



He place a soft kiss on her forehead giving her comfort and Khushi snuggle closed to him feeling safe in his arms.. Arnav smiled seeing her guesture.. in her unconscious state also she knows he is here with her.. then he got confused with her sudden fainting.. what's she saw that she got scare this much.. that's when something cought his eyes..


He saw one shadow near the window. Without any second thought he runs behind that shadow to find out his/her real identity.

Edited by Bhavisweet03 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#29

Prompt 1 :

She was in her own house but it seemed very different. Or was it because of the pitch darkness? Why was it so dark anyway? They always kept the lights near the staircase on. Maybe it was a power-cut, although it was quite unheard of to have power-cuts in their area!

She stumbled around wondering where she could find some light source. The kitchen might have some candles. Just as the thought of candles crossed her mind, she saw one being lighted. Aah! Finally some light. But who was this lady holding the candle?

She called out to her twice before finally catching the lady's attention. She tried to talk to her and ask who she was but there was no response. Just as she decided to give up and find her own way around, the lady turned....

Image

She freaked out and started screaming, " Aaaaaa Chudailllll, Devi Maiya Bachaoo".

Image

He was taken back seeing her reaction.

She suddenly turns around and hugs him tightly.

Image

~~~

"Khushi?! Tum theek ho? What happened? Why are you yelling?" Arnav holds her shoulders, trying to shake an explanation out of her.

"Arnav ji! That- that chudail is here! Devi Maiyya, it's a ghost!" She is at the brink of tears now, shifting closer to him for protection.

He then makes an amused face and turns her around. "There's no one here, Khushi. See?"

No one here? She thinks. But I swear I saw someone...


OK! I will get some water! By saying this, Arnav turned around with torch in his hand and walked towards the kitchen.

Khushi turned around to go to the bedroom, failing to notice the light falling on Arnav's back and came face to face with a person in a white saree holding a candle right in front of her. Khushi screamed and fainted.

..........




Arnav rushes to hold her before she falls.

Image

He carries her in his arms shouting for HP to bring the torch along to help them get to their bedroom.

Image

After laying her on the bed he covers her with a quilt only to hear her murmuring , "Arnavji mat jaiye".


He lies down next to her. He brings her face closer to him and whispers sweet nothings to comfort her.


Image



He place a soft kiss on her forehead giving her comfort and Khushi snuggle closed to him feeling safe in his arms.. Arnav smiled seeing her guesture.. in her unconscious state also she knows he is here with her.. then he got confused with her sudden fainting.. what's she saw that she got scare this much.. that's when something cought his eyes..

He saw one shadow near the window. Without any second thought he runs behind that shadow to find out his/her real identity.


Arnav moves out to the poolside.

Image



He sees a lady swinging a chain with a ring like a pendulum



Image


Arnav yells at the woman, "What the !! who the hell are you? How did you get in? What are you doing here? Security".

Image

Edited by renee.bee - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#30

Prompt 1 :

She was in her own house but it seemed very different. Or was it because of the pitch darkness? Why was it so dark anyway? They always kept the lights near the staircase on. Maybe it was a power-cut, although it was quite unheard of to have power-cuts in their area!

She stumbled around wondering where she could find some light source. The kitchen might have some candles. Just as the thought of candles crossed her mind, she saw one being lighted. Aah! Finally some light. But who was this lady holding the candle?

She called out to her twice before finally catching the lady's attention. She tried to talk to her and ask who she was but there was no response. Just as she decided to give up and find her own way around, the lady turned....

Image

She freaked out and started screaming, " Aaaaaa Chudailllll, Devi Maiya Bachaoo".

Image

He was taken back seeing her reaction.

She suddenly turns around and hugs him tightly.

Image

"Khushi?! Tum theek ho? What happened? Why are you yelling?" Arnav holds her shoulders, trying to shake an explanation out of her.

"Arnav ji! That- that chudail is here! Devi Maiyya, it's a ghost!" She is at the brink of tears now, shifting closer to him for protection.

He then makes an amused face and turns her around. "There's no one here, Khushi. See?"

No one here? She thinks. But I swear I saw someone...

OK! I will get some water! By saying this, Arnav turned around with torch in his hand and walked towards the kitchen.

Khushi turned around to go to the bedroom, failing to notice the light falling on Arnav's back and came face to face with a person in a white saree holding a candle right in front of her. Khushi screamed and fainted.

Arnav rushes to hold her before she falls.

Image

He carries her in his arms shouting for HP to bring the torch along to help them get to their bedroom.

Image

After laying her on the bed he covers her with a quilt only to hear her murmuring , "Arnavji mat jaiye".

He lies down next to her. He brings her face closer to him and whispers sweet nothings to comfort her.

Image


He place a soft kiss on her forehead giving her comfort and Khushi snuggle closed to him feeling safe in his arms.. Arnav smiled seeing her guesture.. in her unconscious state also she knows he is here with her.. then he got confused with her sudden fainting.. what's she saw that she got scare this much.. that's when something cought his eyes..

He saw one shadow near the window. Without any second thought he runs behind that shadow to find out his/her real identity.

Arnav moves out to the poolside.

Image

He sees a lady swinging a chain with a ring like a pendulum

Image

Arnav yells at the woman, "What the !! who the hell are you? How did you get in? What are you doing here? Security".

Image

"Security??! Hahahaha!" She let out a loud laughter.

"Do you really think your security is equipped enough to handle this?"

"What do you mean?? And can you stop swinging this in my face." Arnav yelled for the security again but to no avail.

Edited by ssttuuttii - 5 years ago

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